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I like your details

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You read fast and mumble a little

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I like the way you added your thoughts 💭

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Soraja, I liked how you used details and I like the part about your brother

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Your such a lucky girl
Descriptive words like I siad such a amazing 😉 girl

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Good dialogue

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Soraja, the way you describe the fireworks creates a picture in my mind.  Sounds beautiful!

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I like how you add your inner and outer thoughts 💭

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I like the way your speaking clearly

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I like how you used your inner and outer thoughts.

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Good details

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I love Mexican food

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I was at the aquarium

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I like that you have inner thoughts

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Vanessa Very good very good

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god Job your finally reading
I went on that exact same trip how interesting
It’s a exciting time of story😎👌🏾😀😎
For Venessa

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Vanesa, you did a good job of including your inner thoughts in your story.

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Nice story I could feel the story

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I like the way you put in dialogue in your story and you told your inner thoughts.

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Six Flags sounded fun! You had a good lead in your story, Mason.

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Good details on the story and I like that it's about six flags

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Great story 👍🏾

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Like you story👍👍👍

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That’s a 👍 topic you chose for your writing
I can tell you had a lot of fun
For Mason

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I like your dialogue

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I like how it has to do with Six Flags 💯👦🏾

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I like your dialogue and details.

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I like your dialogue

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Nice dialogue

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I like your dialogue 🙂

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Good job on the dialogue

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I like how the story has dialogue

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Adamaris, I like how you have dialogue in your story!

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There is a lot of amazing dialogue
You put the right stuff in right time of places
You used emotional instead of boring words🦄
For Adamaris

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Very descriptive

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Very good very good I like the way you were very descriptive and I like the way you put dialogue👍.

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I liked how you are speaking clearly 👍🏻

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Good figurative language

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Patrick I like your dialogue

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I liked how you were very descriptive Patrick 👍.

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Nice choice of figurative language

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I like the figurative language 👍

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Patrick's story is descriptive 👍🏾💯

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Patrick, I like how you use figurative language in your story.  The shocking bolt down your body is very descriptive!

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It’s a great story
I like the way you some thugs in it and you wrote down what thought 💭 inside the brain
You the time in the right place
What inspired you to come to this idea  📞📱
For Patrick

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You are using lots of dialogue

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Very descriptive

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I liked how u used details

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I liked how you were descriptive

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I liked how you told your inner feeling

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I like how u discribed the game

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Lilian, I like how you tell the inner and outer story.

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I love the way you described the game if other people didn’t now it
Can we play it as a class together 👍👌🏾😎
For Lillian

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Details nice 👍

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I like how the story is descriptive

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I liked how you elaborated on the conflict, Kevin.

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“You little rascal” 😂😂 jk. Your story was great 👍
Soraja

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I liked how you used dialogue in your narrative, Landon.

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Very descriptive

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Ur soooo funny- cool boy

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Very funny

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Dialogue

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Good dialogue

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You such a funny type of humor 😋
For Landon

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Vanesa

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Nice

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Good

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Landon's is funny

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Very good London

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I would be better if you didn’t mumble
Soraja

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Nice landon

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I like how described the 🐶
For Kevin

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Very good pablo

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Good dialogue Kevin

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Good job

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Good dialogue- Patrick

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I liked how he in clouded dialogue

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Good optomanapia

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Y Great job on the story
Soraja

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I like how it has to do with his dogs