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Fire

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When you search up lemon and get a pineapple

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When you search up lemon and get a pineapple

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McKenna, I really liked how you put so much detail in your story.

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McKenna, I really liked how you put so much detail in your story.

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I really liked the way the story reminded me of Sonia Sanchezs style

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I am Proto, your security is my Motto

Install me on your computer
To protect your data better

With me there no viruses
Could enter your computer

Malware, Spyware, Trojan
All gone forever

I filter your junk mail
Monitering Wifi, never fail

I am Proto, preventing data loss is my motto

I reverse data loss
Saving you from your angry boss

(Angry boss: AIYYYYY HA HA HA)

I recover... deleted... files
Making it sure, that you always smile

I am Proto, complete security is my motto!

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I liked the story but it didn’t remind me of Sonia Sanchez.

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I liked how you just got to the point and used the writing style Sonia used.

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I have J's for you. 20$

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Although the point of the story is meaningful, i feel it is not in Sonia Sanchez's style, more of an essay that a story

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I really liked how you phrased the story so readers can really see your thinking. Good job - Jillian

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Lil einsteins

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Whoops I wrote in my own style.

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Won't let me post second page

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I liked it, and I hope you get Js soon.

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Oof

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To Dylan
From ace

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Your story was absolutely adorable. It was so insightful to you as a little kid. I enjoyed it immensely. It made me sad to hear that the content actually happened ahaha.

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Your story is so crazy!! Such good description even in the parts that I may not want description i.e. Nails in feet 😂

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I really liked the way that you sent it.

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Singin, yours was pretty good but you needed better grammar

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Singin, yours was pretty good but you needed better grammar

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-Ace

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Trevor yours was good. It was extremely similar to Norma, except it had no poeticness at all. - Ashlynn

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Trevor yours was good. It was extremely similar to Norma, except it had no poeticness at all. - Ashlynn

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IM SHOOK THAT WAS DEEP-Ceci

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Trevor’s was pretty cool, but that was a stupid idea

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Trevor’s was pretty cool, but that was a stupid idea

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-aust

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Hannah- Yours was perfectly dramatic with out sounding fake. Great job!! - Ashlynn

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Hannah- Yours was perfectly dramatic with out sounding fake. Great job!! - Ashlynn

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I love the theme and message of your story.

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I really liked the way that you mimicked Sonia Sanchez in the one word sentences and in the beginning when you started with "as a child."

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Jack will give you money if you take his shoes

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Jack will give you money if you take his shoes

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Sierra: Yours has really good dialogue it describes the story really well. I also want to know more about the story now. -Ashlynn 

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Sierra: Yours has really good dialogue it describes the story really well. I also want to know more about the story now. -Ashlynn 

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HMU for jacks address his shoes will be there take them at your will

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HMU for jacks address his shoes will be there take them at your will

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I'm in tears, I can really see the connection between yours and Sonia's writing

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I love your story! It's so discriptive.

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The Js will come

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Darling yours is beautiful I love the use of repetition.

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I don't get the relation to Sonia's style of writing

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Your narrative was really good, I got a little confused when the tense changed. Really good description! - Jillian

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Your story was really descriptive and really slowed down the moment and made it bomb

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Ella you had me shook. I was curious the wholeeeee time omg. I just couldn't stop reading. Oml I love it so much 💣.com

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I really like the way that you started off your story with a really powerful beginning. Also, I liked the way that your beginning mimicked Sonia Sanchez in the "as a child."

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I wish I could read it

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Amazing loved it soooooo muchh. Omg I'm crying. Reallllly followed Sonia. You are AMAZING

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I loved it, I could cry but you know I’m probably not going to. I’ll give you a hug later.

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THAT WAS SO GOOD.  I liked how you kept the story going, your word choices and descriptions were amazing and the whole thing was really good.

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What a great story! Reflecting back on you as a child really gives it that past feel that showed in Sonia Sanchez's story, and ending it with the short sentence you did really gives it a complete feel. Great work

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I like the story and how it was mysterious throughout. Also bravo on writing like Sonia Sanchez first one that I’ve read like that

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Hit me up jack

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Jack is it true

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Jordayn, your story is very interesting and your struggle between the two worlds seems real.

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Jordayn, your story is very interesting and your struggle between the two worlds seems real.

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Jack is giving away all of his shoes for 10$

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Your story was really really good. The discription was amazing. - ceci

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Even though you were trying to convey hurt and triumph in your story I kindof saw some blandness. It was good though.

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Your story was really descriptive

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Your little love story was great. And adorable. -Ella

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I hope it uploads properly.

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I love your descriptive language, I can truly picture what's happening in the story

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Yours is sorta ok ig I didn't see the writing style

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Bæ blades lt em ri

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I liked the humor aspects, they brought realistic edge to the story

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I loved how you used dialogue in your story to move it along.

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Your use of repitition is splendid! It really gives more feeling to the whole idea of skating with this mysterious kid :-)

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Yay sierra

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I liked the story and how it was wrote but it didn’t seem like it was written with Sonia Sanchez’s style

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Your story was really descriptive and it made it easy to see how you felt and what was going on, good job - Jillian

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Yours was so sad

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I sit down and start to cry

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I liked the whole story but the first paragraph was my favorite part. The words you used really fit the story.

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I liked the way that you told your story and your dialogue was really powerful.

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Your metaphors are really great and help me understand the emotions in your story better. Great job!

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I really liked how you explained why you didn’t want to stop

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Most of these are actually good.

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Yea Sierras was pretty good