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In AS2 I need to add more sources improving on how I link this to my specific topic. Also I need to read more of my sources as AS2 is based on understanding each source. I need to improve the way I structure each paragraphs to avoid my paragraphs being to long.

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I showed my tutor and classmates my padlet as some of my classmates did not understand how to create a padlet she explain that whilst my padlet is good I need to add more reflection to my padlet
what will I do to improve my padlet?
I will reflect on what I can do better adding how I can improve my padlet what information did I miss out from AS1

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I sent my draft to my tutor asking her if I was going in the right direction for my assignment she printed out a copy of my assignment explaining what changes need to be made this was helpful as I was able to change my assignment including the feedback given by my tutor

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when I got my feedback from my tutor she commented that I need to cite more authors in each paragraphs as I got more of the information from my tutor
I need to shorted my sentence as a long sentence without a pause can put the reader off as they is no commas or full stops
I also need to reference my sources properly as this can effect what grade I get.

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Error while loading a source from nelson 

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Error while loading a source from nelson 

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I can uses another cite such as Google scholar if the sources are not loading this will be less time wasting for my assignment.

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I need to reflected on each source and how they link to AS2 title also reflect more on my padlet and what I can do better how will I improve etc.

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1- read up on my 5 sources
2- have a structure of each paragraph
3-reflect more on my padlet as that is what bought my grade down
4-link each paragraphs back to my home degree

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overall I think my performance this term can be improved I have not done terrible however they is certain areas that I can improve on this to do with attendance in order to improve my grade for AS2 I should attend my lesson on time asking questions that can help me improve.

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below is a plan for AS2 I need to add more information to my plan to avoid running out of ideas for each paragraphs. I also need to demonstrate how I will start each paragraphs and how my sources link to my specific topic.

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I did not find it difficult to find sources because the sources from AS1 links to my specific topic all I had to do was read up on them to further understand what the writer was explaining so I can use it to further strengthen my point.

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I had never used turn it in before however when I submitted my assignment I was impressed with how little I plagiarism which was from the evidence and the sources used. when I had submitted my assignment I felt a sense of joy as the stress from AS1 was over.
turnitin was not hard to use as it explains how to submit your work on the site.

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My tutor gave me a structure of how to start my assignment she spoke to the class addressing issues that affected our grade for AS1 and how we can improve for AS2 this helped because I attend lessons I was aware of what I needed to do in order to improve my grade.

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when the assignment was first given to me I initially thought that it was the same as AS1 however I realised it was not as I had to analyse the source also using PEEL (point evidence explanation link) to do my assignment.

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When I was given a reading matrix to complete I was very confused as I was not aware of what I was doing however after speaking with my tutor I eventually gather what was needed from me. The reading matrix was based on analysing the sources you had to read each source and chooses which evidence relates to your topic.
the reading matrix was difficult to complete as in order to complete I have to first find my sources and the article from nelson which got frustrating as some of the sources did not downloaded.

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I previously committed on nelson from my previous padlet I find nelson extremely frustrating as I am unable to find the correct academic reading for a specific source or when downloading a source I would encounter a error where I then have to spend hours finding another source to use. Nelson is very difficult to use as the sources found on nelson can be edited by other creator.

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In AS1 they was not that much reading that was needed even though we had to choose 5 sources we did not have to read that much however in AS2 there is a lot of reading needed but because I already have my sources from AS1 I don't have to do to much reading as I have read up on my sources

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I am aiming for a high grade for AS2 in AS1 I did not make a plan for what key points I will be discussing how I will structure my paragraph I have drafted a plan of how I will be structuring each paragraph linking each source to my home degree

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Have I checked my feedback from my tutor for my AS1

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Have I checked my feedback from my tutor for my AS1

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I was disappointed that I did not achieve the grade I was expected from AS1 however I am aware of what I need to do in order to improve my grade. I know what bought my grade down was the lack of information written on my padlet.