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Syafiqra: a) Harry is a hardworking student who likes write down notes while Professor Snape was teaching. b) Professor Snape seems to be someone who takes his class very seriously. He would not allow students to answer unless they are being picked.

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Emily Wong (10)  a) Harry is a hardworking student as he wrote down notes as Professor Snape was teaching them. b) I think Professor Snape is a teacher who takes his lessons very seriously and does not like students who does not so as he says and would pick on them.

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Yazhini (12)
I think that Snape is the type of teacher who takes his lessons very seriously.The reason why I say this is because I think that he has no fun in teaching and he does not even let students to answer unless he picks them.The problem with that is because he only picks the students whom he want to pick.Not only that,he is biased to Harry and pastured to Draco.

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Harry is a student who wants to write down noted while teacher speaking.

Snape is a teacher who wants student to listen more than writing.

~Avinash~ 4/10 reasonable deduction - based on what's shown in the movie but be mindful that this scene was not mentioned in the textbook pp145-149.. For EYE (End of Year Examination), we only draw the points from the textbook. The video was included in today's lesson to show you what the scene looks like. But, as literature students sitting for examination, we stick to the book.

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Name:Caden
Class:1/6
a)Harry is a student that writes down notes as the teacher is talking and doesn’t read the textbooks before hand.
b) I feel Snape is a teacher that targets someone he doesn’t like,proving them that they are clearly not clever. 6/10 -- good points --but be careful about using the example from the movie (pl read my input in Avinash's post)

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Benjamin(16)1/6
(A)Harry always gets picked on by professor Snape
(B)Snape would always ask Harry questions that he knew Harry would not know how to answer. 5/10 -- you have picked up the examples. But, what is the point you are making -- we start with point and use examples and explanation to substantiate the point:)

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Gwen (3) 1/6
(a) Harry is a student who gets picked on by teachers like Professor Snape. (give more details - who, what, when, where, how and why)
(b) Snape picks on Harry and bullies him because he thinks that fame isn't everything. When he asked Harry questions, Harry did not know how to answer them. (good - well-expressed and put together) 6/10 --- try to push your marks beyond 7/10

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a) Harry is a well(?) student. But he was targeted by Snape.

b) Snape is a bad professor. He is mean to Harry but not to Malfoy
(Valerie 30) 5/10 -- good start but put in more details on who, what, when, where, how and why to push the mark beyond 7/10

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wen xin

Snape bullies Harry and teases him because he hates Harry 4/10 -- good sentence starter --put in the details - who , what, when, where, how and why? to improve your answers:)

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Wenxi (9)

(a)Harry is a good student as he tries not to let bullies like Snape affect him, however sometimes it still affects him. (give evidence to show that Harry was affected and show how Harry responded when he was pushed to the edge by Snape in the class)
(b)Snape is not a very good professor towards Harry, he seems to pick on Harry more than the other students. (Did Snape allow Hermione to answer his question even though she was very eager to answer his questions?) 6/10 well said -- good job -- add on to your input by answering to the questions posted for you -- a well-answered improvement will push your marks beyond 7/10)

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yan zhi
Harry dislikes how Snape only sees the good in people he likes and always criticise on the people he hates. 5/10 --- the one he likes is Draco Malfoy ;  the one he dislikes is Harry. -- What did Snape say about Draco's work in class and how did he abuse Harry for failing to read up and remember what he read before he comes to class. Is Snape's high expectation of a 'celebrity' like Harry reasonable and fair to Harry? Why? .... answer these questions and your marks will go beyond 7/10

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Thaatshayani
Harry is really quiet and Snape thinks he doesn’t know anything and might have thought he was lazy. 4/10 --- very interesting input -- would you like to develop your thoughts a little more?

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Yan zhi
Snape likes to target the people he hates. 2/10 -- possibly - what evidence do you have to demonstrate Snape's tendency to abuse people he dislikes? Are there enough incidents with other characters in the class? Or does Snape dislike everyone in general since he speaks so contemptuously to his students? For example, he calls them 'dunderheads' which means 'stupid people'. Does Snape have good social skills? Does he care about the feelings of others?

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Jiajun (28)
i)Harry has resilience as he endured shapes bullying
ii)snape is a bully --- 3/10 -- interesting point about resilience -- perhaps you want to link Harry's reaction to Snape's abusive treatment here to 2 previous relationships he has with a) Dudley at the snake incident b) Draco's bullying confrontation on the train to Hogwarts --- Is Harry able to stand up for himself? Is Harry able to speak up and fend for himself? --- When Harry suggests that Snape asks Hermione for the answer -- is he saying "Go pick on someone else?" With this perspective in mind, does your opinion of Harry change?

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Nur Ayuni(6)

(a) Harry is disliked by Snape and Harry does not get angry when Snape is always picking him out in class
and asking him questions over and over again. (Harry does get back at Snape by suggesting that he picks Hermione to answer his question and for that 'cheek' (audacity to answer back), Gryfinddor loses one house point. This shows that Snape is quite vindictive (vengeful) and that he can be 'nasty' when he is offended.
(b)Snape is not a responsible and caring teacher as he looked down at Harry Potter. (Yes, Snape does seem to have vendetta - previous blood feud with the Potters. It comes very strongly in Snape's relentless attack on Harry) 6/10 with improved input

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ASAPH   Snape is not a good teacher and role model and he is very stubborn and he bullies his own students and labels them, for example, he labels Harry as 'the new celebrity' and he belittles him - makes Harry feel small when he can not give the answers to his rapid bombardment of questions, targetted solely at Harry. He was so focused on victimisingHarry that he completely ignored the other students in the class. Poor Hermione's eager effort to impress him with her ready answers was shot down by Snape.   6/10 improved input

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Sze Karn (26) (a) Harry was being picked on by Snape.An example would be when Snape had only asked Harry questions that he knew Harry could not answer.(b)Snape was very unfair to Harry.An example would be when Snape was asking a question but he only chose Harry despite Hermione having her hand up all the time 7/10 -- good job:)

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Bryan Yoon(29)S1/6                 a):Harry was an unusual student. (interesting point - any supporting examples and explanation to build the argument?              b):Snape was a terrible professor in Harry's point of view.(good statement - examples, explanation ? - give details of who, what, when, how, why) 2/10

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Darius Lim : Harry does not seem to like Snape because he hates him for no apparent reason. 2/10 -- give examples and explanation to support your point:)

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Jiaxin 1/6(13)
a) Harry seemed to be targeted by Snape
b) Snape does not seem to like Harry 2/10 -- give examples and explanation to support your view / point

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darius lim (17)                                                                           (a) harry was always being picked on by his teacher.   2/10 -- more examples, explanation?

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A) Harry is copying notes, Snape gets mad, The class isn't copying notes,Snape gets mad. Harry is a good student, Snape is just irresponsible. ( state that this is only shown in the movie, not mentioned in the textbook)

B) Snape is mean and brutally fierce. -- give examples and explanation to support your view / point. 3/10

Jiawei (27)

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Yazhini (12)
Harry is a good student and he is the type of person who does not lose his temper that easily because when Sanpe asked him questions again and again,it was like he was aiming for Harry.However, Harry was not able to answer as he did not know the answer.The point is,he did not talk back to the teacher and he calmly said to Snape that he could pick Hermione if he wants as she was raising her hands so badly. 6/10 Good job at evaluating and expressing your own views. 6/10

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Kai Wei (20)1/6  (a)Harry is an unusual student (interesting point - examples and explanation to support your point?). (b)Snape likes to criticise everyone except Malfoy. He calls the class 'dunderheads'and calling Neville 'idiot boy' 4/10

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Harry is not a bad student 2/10 - examples, explanation, link?

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Yi Wei(24) 1/6
(a) Harry does not know any magic and was constantly picked on by Snape.
(b) Snape is a bad teacher as he bullies Harry and other students by punishing them and taking away points from their houses for unfair reasons.  4/10

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(a)Harry was picked on by teacher 2/10 - examples, explanation and link to support your point?

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(a) Harry is usually targeted by his Professor       (b) Snape is not a good Professor. He usually bully Harry ( Shariffah 1/6  reg. no. 08 ) 2/10 - interesting point made - put in the examples, explanation and link to build your argument to support your point.

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Jiajun
2/100 Snape really doesn’t like Harry - yes possibly - how does Snape show he dislikes or hates Harry? Can you suggest a reason why Snape might have for disliking or hating Harry?

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(b)Snape is biased - 2/10 yes Snape is biased - give more details? To whom? and why?

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(b):Snape is a terrible professor  2/10 - in what way? Please elaborate and explain your view point.

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Snape is a bad prof (2/10) - need more examples, explanation and link your argument to your point - need you to build a case.

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(a): Harry is an unusual student. -- interesting point 2/10 - examples and explanation to support your view? Name, class, index?

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Snape is a bully 2/10- give examples, explain your point? Btw, who are you? Yanzhi? you can come in to edit and insert your name, class and index number.

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Yan zhi
Hello

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Hi S1-7, please post your comments on (a) Harry as a student and (b) Snape as a teacher / professor --- remember to include your name, class and index number