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Overall the feedback again tends to

be similar to the other feedback I

received. I can see that the narrative

is liked but it could have been presented

in a better way.

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I also showed my friends my

Thriller opening. I sent them

the link to watch and asked them

to text me some feedback, good

or bad.

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I can see that the majority of the

audineces I have shown recognise

the camerawork fault. I know

if I was to re-film the camerawork

would be the greatest change I would make.

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This Feedback was very helpful and highlighted

areas that I myself may have overlooked. I can

see where our footage may have been unstable

and also see how the title can lead to confusion.

If I was to re-film I would take this into account.

A problem with this feedback is that they were

media students and so may be biased.

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After this feedback I asked my family to also

give me some feedback. My brother did A level

Media studies and my sister GCSE. However

the rest of my family are unfamiliar with the

studies.

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I showed my Thriller to some of my AS class members

and to all of my A2 media studies class members.

Here are my positive responses:

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I showed my Thriller opening to

many different audiences, I did

this to get a more clear feedback

from different groups of people.

I showed my family, friends and peers

and asked for feedback in comparison

to real media.

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20.2.14 Media as coursework Thriller opening

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This is our thriller opening that we created for our AS media coursework. Any feedback would be much appreciated.