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111AC1025-許芮銘-the Van der Graaf canon application on Magazine layout

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Concept and color is very nice. Proportions are also well designed based om the Van Der Graaf, creating a very interesting look.

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She designed the magazine according to the teacher’s guidelines. There’s one page I really like — it has a circle decoration on the dots, which is a nice touch. The layout overall looks great, and if the color scheme could be more consistent, it would be perfect. This is my feedback on the magazine.

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I really like the color, and the way she edited all the pictures in one tone makes the magazine look so clean and perfect. It even looks like a postcard.

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Good color palette, eye-catching design, simple but elegant and highlights the topic (yayoi kusama)

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Good but it looks depressed

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Dear Aye,

I really like your color choices and everything else is easy to understand.

Thank you very much byeeeee

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feedback for Jintapa

her design is not too complicated but still outlines the iconic design by yayoi kusama. she implicates the van der graaf canon ratio well to attract audience into reading the magazine. her design layout is rational and creative.

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It looks very good, and i like the colours and layout for the second and third pages. but i feel like the cover typography and layout could be better. The text is also better to have in columns.

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Making the first letters of the paragraph bigger and putting them in colorful rectangles are so good. I do like 5-8 pages which make me interested. Also the first page with the artist’s name can attract people very well just by the eye things. But for 3&4 page, I don’t like cuz I feel those are so random.

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Fiona's design features vibrant colors that are very fitting for Yayoi Kusama.

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I can see clearly see the application of the Van Der Graaf Canon and the information is layed out in a orderly manner. Which is good for others to read. I like the use of colors and the decision to keep it coherent. It made it appealing to the eye. Overall I like the design and the application.

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Dear Aye,

I really like your color choices and everything else is easy to understand.

Thank you very much byeeeee

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The colors are very vivid and striking — I really like the red and white one!

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Nice work, clear and creative. I really like your color choices and the placement of the photos.

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Really good Job, follow the guidelines and very creative. I love the design and the palette.

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