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Zora Neale's "Sweat" and Langston Hughes "Salvation" contemplated the difficulties that African Americans went through as an impact of community on the subconscious decisions of the characters through the conflict in the stories, portrayed through the sensory details of the settings and the dialogue of outlier characters.

Intro - 3-4 sentences background on the HR, end the intro with thesis

Conflict in Sweat vs Salvation - both have to do with community pressure. In salvation we see it through sensory details and the outlier characters. The impact of the community in Salvation through their sounds of wailing and praying, and the length of time so people are tired, other details from the community as the outliers impacts the main characters subconscious decision to give up.

In Sweat we see it through the sensory details of the snake making her freeze as well as not changing the setting which allowed the events to carry out. This illustrates the impact of subconscious decisions as a result of the community's impact (what the outlier porch men are saying about how bad her situation is, and that impacting her thinking)

Conclusion

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Through the stories, "Sweat" written by Zora Neale Hurston, and "The Wife of His Youth" written by Charles W. Chesnutt

the definition of home as represented by a divided city and divided self through the characters and point of view (dialogue?) communicates how home can change based on the people and their internal and external conflicts.

Intro background of HR 3-4 sentences, end with thesis

Divided self Delia and wife

Dividing the home through internal and external conflicts

As a result, home would be defined by the people in it. In these stories, home is..." "

Divided city - guys on the porch sided with Sykes by not stopping the conflict.

Divided city - the white community forces a need to conform on the people in the ballroom, creating the society within the ballroom. Characters are not allowed to be how they were born but most conform to what the outer community wants.

Within the conclusion, come up with a final definition of home, based on each author's portrayal of it through the stories.

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Cultural expectations

Jessie Fauset’s “Plum Bun” and Chester Himes’ “Salute to Passing” presents the Harlem Renaissance as the feeding of desire for conformity to stereotyped opportunities in african american communities, using the basis of conforming to social expectations and the eventual internal and external conflicts for the individuals, as explored through atmosphere and characters through contrasting values and cultures.

Intro 3-4 background on the HR. Last sentence is thesis.

Talking about the social expectations as set up in Plum Bun

Talk about the internal and external conflicts for the individuals, as set in that culture, and then the resulting atmosphere.

How he internal and external conflicts create a type of atmsophere

How that atmosphere forces conformity to stereotyped opportunities

Talking about the social expectations as set up in Salute to passing

Talk about the internal and external conflicts for the individuals, as set in that culture, and then the resulting atmosphere.

How he internal and external conflicts create a type of atmsophere

How that atmosphere forces conformity to stereotyped opportunities

Final paragraph talking about how these two stories portray the author's views on opportunities that were supposedly present but actually were not because they were inherently stereotyped.

i - inferential statement (how you see it)

S - summary of what is happening leading up to the quoted evidence

E - quoted evidence

E - explain evidence

Example:

(infer) Delia is impacted by the comments of the outlier characters (the men on the porches) subconsciously by their comments.

(summary)

In small communities, word gets around and it would have been impossible for her to not know their opinion of the relationship.

(evidence) "Delia nodded briefly at the men as she drove past, and they start 'Too much knockin will ruin any woman...beating" (Hurston pg#).

(explain) The community of outliers was willing to comment but not stop the situation, which ultimately impacts her thoughts and makes her decide to do something.

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat" and Jessie Redmon Faucet's "Plum Bun" depicts the impact of outliers in group identity during the Harlem Renaissance by conveying through the characters and the dialogue that individual identity is difficult, when there is a desire to conform to a group identity.

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat” and Jessie Fauset’s “ A Salute to Passing” both portray the ideology of possibilities vs separation during the time period of the Harlem Renaissance by portraying Delia’s marriage and contrasting it to the dialogue of salute to passing which connects the two stories in a multitude of ways.

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In Salvation and Sweat, the understanding of cultural Christianity as a basis for successful community and marriage falls apart in light of temptations though other characters and the setting.

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat,” and Chester B. Himes's “Salute to Passing,” portray the impact of the period on identity and their character’s circumstances through conflict in comparison to the typical “American dream” during the Harlem Renaissance, acknowledging the individual’s lived suffering as a builder of character formation in identity, through imagery, symbolism, and dialogue.

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In Jessie Fauset's "Plum Bun" and Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat", by the use of characterization and imagery, the complexities of familial and social obligations intersect with the harsh reality of minority exclusions from the common American dream, portrayed through the character’s and setting to highlight the oppression that limits individual freedom and equality.

How will you examine this through elements of fiction (characters, dialogue, conflict, setting...) and how did the author convey the theme and key ideas (literary devices such as symbolism, metaphors, characterization, and so on...)

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat” and Chester B. Himes “A Salute to Passing,” portrays both setting and dialogue to emphasize the oppression and demoralization in the African American community along with finding the true meaning of home to convey the limitations that black Americans had during the Harlem Renaissance.

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In Charles W. Chesnutt’s “The Wife of His Youth” and Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat,” discrimination is portrayed through the disconnection between relationships and equality by contrasting gender and social roles during the Harlem Renaissance, highlighted by dialogue and characters in these stories.

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat,” and Langston Huges’ “Salvation” portray the alienation and separation of the characters through the conflicts, in order to convey the complexity of people’s desires to be deceptive in their desperation to not be alienated, through the experiences that are described in the stories from the Harlem Renaissance.

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat" and Jessie Redmon Faucet's "Plum Bun" depicts the impact of outliers in group identity during the Harlem Renaissance by conveying through the characters that identity is difficult but necessary.

Individual identity is difficult, in a desire to conform to a group identity? I think this is along the lines of what we talked about...I'm just trying to remember that. Also, I would expect that you are going to examine the "outliers" in the stories, which are characters. What other elements of fiction will you examine. such as setting or dialogue or characterization or symbolism...?

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"Sweat" written by Zora Neale Hurston, and "The Wife of His Youth" written by Charles W. Chesnutt, give us the insight of the characters battles in their own minds. In the harlem rennisance time period, many people of color were faced and met with judgement and lack of opportunity which then led them to doubt who they were and have doubts in the people around them. Through the stories it is shown that when you are alone you are willing to stay in a place or with a person who is your "home" simply because you dont want to be alone in a world that doesnt want you.

This needs to be one sentence. Also I believe your key idea is what you have in the last sentence. How could you condense that down, to combine with the previous sentences? Also, what elements of fiction are you going to examine? Examples are characters, setting, dialogue, conflict...

You're going to examine characters (who they are) and the internal conflicts, right?

What is that through, how do the author did it?

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Between Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat," Langston Hughes' "Salvation," and Sidney H. Bremer’s "Home in Harlem," the authors use the atmospheric setting of Harlem’s streets and the complex traits of their characters to explore the role of community during challenging times, illustrating how social and familial obligations, shaped by the Harlem Renaissance, define individuals' reaction to coping with and transcending their circumstances.

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Charles Chesnutt’s, “The Wife of His Youth”, Chester Himes’, “Salute to The Passing”, and Jessie Faust’s, “Plum Bun” portrays the social aspirations of their African American main characters through reveal how segregation, poverty, and skin complexions, as well at racist stereotyping affected their personal aspirations during the period of the Harlem Renaissance.

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The Wife of his Youth by Charles W. Chesnutt and Plum Bum by Jessie R. Fauset portray the lack of attention and hope, and the growing insecurity from the limitations of group identity in the Harlem Renaissance through the use of setting and characterization through dialogue and symbolism to reveal the disparity between the black and whites.

How did the author do it? Think literary devices...check out the "How" slide

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat" and Chester B. Himes' "A Salute to Passing,'' both emphasize the influence of heritage on a person's life through outliers in each story that go against the social norms, illustrated by setting and dialogue to highlight the effects of poverty on social aspirations during the Harlem Renaissance and new opportunities being formed in their new home in Harlem.

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In Zora Houston's "Sweat" and Charles Chestnutt's "The Wife of His Youth" both authors emphasize different aspects of segregation within their society and the obligations of the families during this time through the characters struggles with each other, whether through their dialogue, or the setting that the author establishes to portray a world very similar to the one they lived in.

could the highlighted sentences be condensed...be less wordy? Also, i see mention of characters and setting...how do you see that the author did it?

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Zora Neal Hurston's "Sweat", and Chester B. Himes' "Salute to The Passing" portray segregation of one part of humanity from another by impacting dreams that are profound (but also deceptive) during the Harlem Renaissance, illustrated through dialogue and setting to create a new concept of home within the ghettoized communities.

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Chester Himes’ “Salute to the Passing,” and Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat,” substantiates the impact of poverty on social aspirations and the definition of home on the complexity of self identified values as contrasted to a dominating group identity, during the Harlem Renaissance illustrated through the imagery and characterization.

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Zora Hurston's "Sweat" and Jessie Fauset's "Plum Bum" portray the lack of traditions for African Americans and exploration of identity, as they portray the questioning of what culture means, based on the question of identity as explored through character and setting.

I changed a couple words to make the sentence flow a little more fluidly, and added an analytic verb. What elements of fiction will you be examining?

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Chester B. Hime’s “Plum Bun,” and Jessie Redmon Fauset’s “A Salute to Passing,” portrays the impact on the character’s view of traditions from close relations in his/her life during the Harlem Renaissance, illustrated through the author’s characterization and atmosphere throughout the story, in order to convey the meaning of tradition’s influence for those who currently feel persuaded and adapted to their societies’ mold.

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Zora Neale Houston's "Sweat" and Langston Hughes' "Salvation" both portray through the main characters and setting how the impact of the Harlem Renaissance created a feeling of belonging as opposed to being alienated and oppressed, therefore creating a celebration of group identity.

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Zora Neal Hurston's "Sweat," and Chester B. Himes "Salute to Passing," portray the culture and impact of community during the Harlem Renaissance, and illustrate through the author's use of setting and sensory details, of what the organic culture looks like in Harlem.

analytic verb

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat", along with "Salute to the Passing" by Chester B. Himes, & "Home in Harlem" by Sidney Bremer utilizes symbolism and imagery with the setting and characters to illustrate the redefined, non-traditional urban family as seen through the Harlem community.

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Zora Neale's "Sweat" and "Salvation" by Langston Hughes shine light on the outlier characters and the setting, on the oppressive group identity that the African American community were almost forced to align with, using background characters to impact on the main characters decisions and lived experiences, which had more of an impact on them than their own thoughts and feelings.

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"Home in Harlem" by Sidney H. Bremer and Zora Neal Hurston's "Sweat", as well as Langston Hughes' "Salvation", utilize setting and imagery to display the dehumanization of blacks and the separation of them to create ghettoized urban exclusion during the Harlem Renaissance, while also employing an undertone of residual hope for the African-American community to illustrate the early-stage institution of a rich culture differing from that of the white man.

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat”, Langston Hughes’ “Salvation”, and Sidney H. Bremer’s “Home in Harlem” illuminate through the main characters, such as Sykes and Langston, and through the narrative point of view, the first person in “Salvation”, that the Harlem Renaissance was so effective in its day and age because those who raised the leaders of the movement were significantly influenced from their personal experiences of slavery and racism.

I'm glad you know what characters you are going to examine and what you mean by narrative point of view. You don't have to put them in your thesis. I just wanted to know. Take those out.

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Charles W. Chesnutt's " The Wife of His Youth" and Zora Neale Hurstons "Sweat", both portray a picture of Love, Home and a social status that contrast to one another. We see a contrast in almost every aspect of these stories including setting and even the feelings of the characters. Even with such contrast we can still gleem many similarities between the stories of what the characters have gone through and how they moght even be after the story ends. These two stories compared and contrasted help to provide a look into the literature produced during the Harlem renasiance.

Combine this into one sentence, remove the parts that I put a strike through, and you're good!

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"Sweat," by Zora Neale Hurston, and "Salute to the Passing," by Chester B. Himes, illustrates the domination of whites on African Americans during the Harlem Renaissance, portrayed through descriptions in the setting and characterization of the protagonist's, to reveal the racist stereotyping on African Americans, depicting America as the oppressor.

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat" and Chester B. Himes' "Salute to Passing," accompanied by "Home in Harlem" by Sidney Bremer portray the human desire for a life greater than what seems possible even in the shadow of a racist society through the setting of the Harlem Renaissance and the settings/characterization of the employment.

What do we learn about human nature, when we are in the grasp of a racist culture? What are Hurston and Himes saying about human nature through their stories/

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Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat" and Chester B. Himes' "A Salute to Passing" both employ setting and dialogue to highlight the effects of poverty on social aspirations during the Harlem Renaissance, while also emphasizing the influence of heritage on a person's life, revealing the effects of skin color and demographics.

What is the argument about how these stories say something about the complexity of human nature, and/or human identity?

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Zora Neal Hurston’s “Sweat”, Langston Hughes’ “Salvation”, and Sidney H. Bremer’s “Home in Harlem” depicts, through the narrative point of view and the setting, how the Harlem renaissance was so influential because of the familial and societal pressures, and changes that were present for all races during that time, and how the authors visualize these things within their writing.

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Charles W. Chestnutts' "Wife of His Youth", Zora Neale Hurston's "Sweat", and Jessie Faust's "Plum Bun exemplifies their own experiences during the Harlem Renaissance through the stories they wrote while demonstrating that African Americans were treated wrongly and portray the pivotal movement of the Harlem Renaissance allowing them to live a normal life with families in their own homes in the lighter skin communities.

What are you going to examine? (characters, setting, pov, plot, climax, dialogue...)

How did the author do it? (metaphors, similes, symbolism, characterization, irony...)

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Charles Chesnutt’s, “The Wife of His Youth”, Chester Himes’, “Salute to The Passing”, and Jessie Faust’s, “Plum Bun” portrays the social aspirations of their African American main characters. The authors reveal how segregation, poverty, and skin complexions, as well at racist stereotyping affected their personal aspirations during the period of the Harlem Renaissance.

BETTER! Needs to be one sentence. Then, you're good to go.

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Zora Neale Hurston’s “Sweat”, Langston Hughes’ “Salvation”, and Sidney H. Bremer’s “Home in Harlem” portrays through the described characters and narrative point of view that the Harlem Renaissance was so effective because those who raised the leaders of the movement were influenced from their personal experiences of slavery and racism.

main characters, instead of described characters?

How are you going to address narrative pov?

What was the HR effective in doing?

For what purpose did the writers, as the leaders of the movement, write these stories?

What is the argument? In other words, what are you saying that someone else might see differently? What is the argument about how these stories say something about the complexity of human nature, and/or human identity?

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Subject is clearly articulated, relevant, and insightful.

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Subject is missing or irrelevant to the thesis.

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Key ideas are insightful, well-developed, and deeply connected to the thesis.

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Key ideas are present but lack clarity or depth.

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The argument is compelling, insightful, and deeply integrated into the thesis.

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The argument is clear, focused, and relevant to the thesis.

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An argument is present but unclear or unfocused.

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The theme is deeply complex and fully integrated into the thesis.

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The theme is relevant and includes some complexity.

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A theme is mentioned but lacks complexity or relevance.

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Provides insightful, detailed analysis of the author's methods and their relation to the thesis.

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Analyzes the author's methods with clarity and relevance.

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Mentions the author's methods but lacks detail or analysis.

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Uses analytical verbs effectively and insightfully to deepen analysis.

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Correctly uses analytical verbs relevant to the thesis and analysis.

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Uses analytical verbs but they are basic or misused.