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Some things that I want to improve on in writing my essay include:

When paraphrasing information from websites I need to make sure I still include the appropriate in text citation.

When including my thought on the current issue, I need to use research to backup my thoughts.

Using stronger words when transitioning to make the essay flow better.

Organize the essay to where it flows better and builds off each paragraph.

Use correct formatting for direct quotes over 40 words.

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There are a few things I want to improve on and accomplish for this essay:
- Including more evidence from my sources.
- Organize the essay in a way that makes it flow better instead of jumping around.
- As I struggle with APA formatting, I want to make sure I do everything correctly.

What I Accomplished:
- Including more evidence and finding more sources.
- I think I organized it better, I just struggle with liking the way APA looks.
- I triple checked that I did everything correctly in terms of APA formatting.

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Areas where I need improvement and growth in properly completing the BTA assignment include:
-Obtaining sources that back up and provide evidence for the opinion I am arguing.
- Effectively formatting sentences to ensure they are not run-on sentences.
-Keeping the essay narrative on track and refrain from making the central topic too broad.
- Including website paragraph for in-text citations when there are not page numbers provided.

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Plans for Strengthening Writing

Read over the essay and make sure to have complete sentencing.

Edit my paper to make sure it is clear and concise for readers.

Make sure to indicate the source of information by using in-text citations.

Accomplishments

I read over my essay multiple times to check for incomplete sentences.

I edited my paper to make sure it is clear and concise as possible.

I included all in-text citations for my sources.

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The areas I most want to improve are:
- Word count. In both parts of the BTA paper I have submitted so far, I have gone above double the suggested word count. This is not necessarily a bad thing, but I do want to make sure I am writing concisely.
- Reducing the time spent on research. I end up reading a lot for each section, which includes going off on tangents and falling down rabbit holes of reading that ultimately are not sources I end up using and so I feel like a lot of my time is wasted.

Accomplishments:
- I caught a few typos and grammatical errors when proof reading
- I didn't manage to keep the word count down, but I do feel all the points I made were fairly concise
- I kept my additional reading on track and so it wasn't wasted time on sources I didn't use/need.

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Some areas that I want to improve on in writing my essay are:
-When using research I need to correctly cite my resources. Not citing them correctly caused my paper to lack evidence.
-When it comes to how my paper flows, I need to organize my paragraphs better. I have always struggled with writing long paragraphs due to the topic being the same.
-I need to become more confident in the work I submit. Writing is a weak area for me. The proper format and even the research I struggle to make the connection between the two.

Accomplishments:
-While writing section 2 I used cite machine and additinal google resources to make sure I cited more sources.
-I made sure I used the book as a source along with internet sources to help provide evidence that supports my reform.
-I also used my worksheet to help with the flow of my paper. The way the questions were set up was what I used as a guideline to the order of my paper. I also read it over slowly before submitting my paper.
-I also included my word count this go around.

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There are several areas that I would like to improve upon on my future BTA essays. Looking back on the feedback that I have received from the past two essays, I think I could work on:
- Improving the organization of my essay in order to make sure that the paragraphs flow together.
- Ensuring that I am using enough evidence from my resources.
- Finding additional resources to support my argument.
- Making sure that I am including either page or paragraph numbers within my in-text citations.

Accomplishments:
- I proof read my essay in order to make sure that the content flowed together well and made sense in the order that it was in.
- I went back and reviewed the first articles that I included within my Introduction essay and used information from these resources to support my argument for Section Two.
- I conducted additional research to add to my argument and support the statements that I was making.
- I made sure that page numbers/paragraph numbers were included in every in-text citation before I submitted my essay.

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After reviewing the comments from the first two sections, my plans going forward are to:

-Relate the module/text information to my reform in a better way.

-Research more outside sources to gain information about my reform topic so that it has a stronger platform.

-Re-read the first 2 parts so that the other sections flow smoothly with the topics and my reform.

-Ensure the argument of my reform is strong and backed up by the information I use in the essay.

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Some areas I would like to improve on in writing my BTA assignment include:

- Using correct formatting for citations. Citation formatting  has been my nemesis. I get confused on how to and when to use the correct formatting. I  second guess myself on everything when it comes to work cited, direct quotes and the APA format.

-Dialing down my personal thoughts that I include in the paper.

- Drilling down in my research and using it as more evidence for my research paper.

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- One thing I know I need to work on in my writing is researching my topic more in-depth and including more evidence from my sources. I understand the information I need to include however, I always fear I’m going to have too much evidence and not enough analysis, which leads me to write too little.
- I need to make sure I include the word count for each section as well as organize each section as it’s supposed to be. I have not formatted my paper correctly in the past, I need to include the word count, I couldn’t find it earlier so unfortunately I didn’t write enough.
- I also need to reread my paper to make sure the grammar and the structure of my paper can be easily understood. I tend to glance through my paper rather than closely noticing my errors.

Accomplishments

- I did remember to make sure my writing was within the word count, however when I submitted it, I forgot to include the word count. I resubmitted my essay to include it.
- This time while writing my section, I referenced more sources and included more evidence.
- I also read through what I had written for this due date, although, I still would like to revise some more.

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The areas that I would like to improve in my writing

-continue to improve on my APA citations and recheck that they are correct.
-I need to walk away from my paper for at least an hour after it is finished and then come back and proof the paper.  I tend to catch my mistakes more this way.
-watch how many sources and supporting text I use as I tend to get wordy sometimes.  When I research, I tend to go down the rabbit holes and want to use all the things that I found to support my position.

Accomplishments:
I struggled to write this essay. For some reason it did not want to flow like it normally does. I took breaks during the different parts of the paper and then reviewed them. I also did better with my word count and not using all the research that I found.

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Areas that I want to improve on in writing my essay are:

1. Learning how to word my essays correctly. I tend to write how I talk which is something I really need to work on.

2. Make sure I'm using the correct grammar and formatting correctly for citations.

3.  Staying on topic. I get off topic a lot which makes it hard for people to understand what they are reading.

Accomplishments:
To work on my writing accomplishments this time I made sure I stayed on topic, I also reread what my essay out loud to make sure I was making sense. I however did have to go back to cite my paper. I'm still trying to learn how to type essays/papers in APA format but overall I think for this paper I did great because I actually stayed on topic, and I feel as if I worded everything well this time.

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Plans to improve writing:
- Include more sources to further explain my reform
- Structure the essay to introduce, explain, and advocate
- Be precise with my citations such as including page/paragraph numbers

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Some things that I would like to improve on in my writing for the BTA Essay are:

-Research: Making sure that the information, articles, etc. are from credible sources.

-Citations: Making sure that I cite my sources correctly.

-Write with understanding: When I write, I want to write with understanding. I want the essay to make sense.

-Cohesive: Making sure that the essay itself oerall is cohesive and that every part flows.

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Areas of improvement in writing:
- Learn to better paraphrase from my sources.
- Check for grammatical errors.
-Better organization of my content.
-Look for better sources
-Read back over my content before submitting.
-Remember this is research paper, and not solely opinion based.

Accomplishments:
- I took more time with this section, I took notes from my works cited, and broke my time up while writing the portion. I intentionally focused on better organization of my content. I still need to work on the research and not opinion more, but baby steps.

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Areas where I'd like to improve for my BTA essay:
- Word Count. In the previous section of the essay I went over the word limit and I'd like to formulate my thoughts in a way that was a bit more concise.
- Citing Sources. I have a hard time with making sure that my sources are orrectly cited with APA since I've always used MLA format. I have trouble with in text citations as well.
- Making the essay flow a bit better. What may seem to make sense to me may be confusing to other people so I'd like to improve the readability of my paragraphs.

Accomplishments
-  I spent more time on this part, taking notes from my works referenced and breaking up my time while writing it. I still need to concentrate on the research rather than my viewpoint but I worked hard to improve the organization of my material.

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Some key things I plan to do to help prepare and strengthen my essay are as followed.

1.) Write down the key points to each paragraph so I can focus on that key point and not go astray from the point I am trying to make.

2.) Find and list information that supports the key point I have listed for each paragraph.

3.) “Dig deep” make sure that I give enough evidence to support my opinion and key point.

4.) Make sure to double check and have the correct information on how many words is needed and make sure my format is correct before starting.

(Rayven Myrick)

Accomplishments

1.) pre-planned and wrote down what I wanted my key concepts to be so I could organize and make sure I find evidence that supported my key concepts when writing.

2.) Found factual information that supported both my key concepts and my reform from our textbook.

3.) Gave sufficient factual information for my reform and key concepts and referenced the material for each.

4.) Read over my paper once I was finished and made sure everything was correct and adjusted and fixed anything that was needed before submitting.

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Plans for improvement:
- Obtaining more sources to back up my reform and connecting the evidence.
-Watching for run-on sentences and my grammar.
- Treating each essay as an individual essay, as opposed to treating it as one big essay.
- Better transitions between my evidence and my sources.

Accomplishments:
- I believe I was able to find more sources and connect them better to my reform by doing more research and using the textbook.
- I was able to break down my sentences more by using Grammarly to help me catch run-on sentences.
- I was able to do this and then when conducting my big essay, take each essay and take keys point to conduct the final paper.
- I tried to add more sources and use more information to make more points and connect them better.

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Plans for strengthening my writing:

1. Make sure to proofread my work to check from grammatical or spelling errors
2. Continue to work more with APA citations and making sure all claims in my paper are backed up by the proper source.
3. Making my paragraphs flow together because I make a list of things I'm covering and then I fill in the details.
4.  Making the word count. Both parts I have submitted have been just enough words to make the cut. I would like to add more details or more information.

Accomplishments: I wrote my paper and left it alone for an hour and half and then went back to it. This allowed me to take a breath and proofread properly. This also helped with making sure my paragraphs did flow together (which I think they did). I have been working on making sure all my claims and facts are backed up by the proper source. I still struggled a little with the word count but I had less troubles than last time.

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Some things that I want to improve on in this essay:
-Find ore sources to give me a better understanding of the philosophies that we have to tie into the reform.
-I also need to remember to include the word count. Feedback from previous writings suggest this, since I have left it out.
-THe major things I want to work on is APA format and using correct citations when needed. I also need to pay attention to the word count for quoted text to make sure if it is more than 40 words that I do the correct citation.
I believe I accomplished my 3 goals with this paper. I was able to use 4 sources, I remembered my word count and I believe I cited my work correctly!!

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Some areas I need to Improve on in Writing...

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- Not researching enough information due to the lack of time I give myself to do assignments.
-Proofreading over my research essays to correct grammatical errors I intend to make which I do a lot.
-Staying on topic about what I'm researching and not talking about things irrelevant to my essay.

Accomplishments
- I tried reaching more information about my topic and talking more in depth explaining my topic.

(JaQuez Dickens)

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Ways to Strengthen My BTA Essay

-When stating my opinion, I need to make sure I back up my reasoning with   evidence.

-When citing my references, I need to make sure I use the proper citations.

-When I finish with my essay, I need to go back through it and check for grammatical errors.

- I also need to go back and refresh my memory on how to format a paper in APA.

Accomplishments

- This time while conducting research, I tried to back up my reasoning with evidence. I made sure that what I said aligned with the research to make sure it was credible.
- I also looked over the cite that Jennifer suggested to help refresh my memory.

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-Areas I want to improve:
When using the format APA I want to make sure I do everything according to APA style
-Making sure I cite everything appropriately
-Making sure my essay flow as it should

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I just finished the Section 2 Philosophy of US Education writing assignment. I feel a little bit better about this writing assignment. I really took my time and tried to cite my sources correctly, I tried to make sure that the paper itself was cohesive, and that I wrote with understanding.

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I'm putting more time into my research and going over the APA style paper so that i will have a better understanding.

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Improvemets:
1) include in-text citations even when paraphrasing
2) proof read whole paper before submitting to check for clarity and make sure my thoughts flow seamlessly
3) use my resources more than once

Accomplisents:
- I used in-text citations when paraphrasing
- I read each section separately and read the essay as a whole to check for run on sentences or grammar mistakes.
- I made sure to find resources I could use more than once