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Scarlet

The writer of Scarlet has tried to create mystery. In my opinion this was not done very well to me there was nothing exciting or interesting that happed and I did not pick up on any sense of mystery. Towards the start of I didn’t really pick up mystery but the further I got to the end it started to build up more tension however it wasn’t hugely successful. I was expecting to feel tension but I didn’t really. Overall in my opinion it just wasn’t the most mysterious piece of writing as most of the time it was quite boring and not a lot happened.

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My writer, Wilkie Collins, tries to create a sense of mystery. They are mostly successful at this as he suggests the idea that the bed is moving he doesn't yet confirm  that is is. When I read that he thought the bed was moving I instantly tried to come up with other solutions for why he might think that. Which builds a sense of mystery by making you try and guess what might be happening, because it's a mystery. Also, the ex-brave throughout the story was very suspicious, constantly giving him drinks and weird coffee, but the main character was too drunk to realize. This made me think it would be him who would steal the money, but I had know idea how as he was being relatively nice to him.
James Severs

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the writer for scarlet has adequately conveyed a sense of mystery and eerieness
in the text.for example in the repetition of the word curiosity in the 2nd 3rd and 4th paragraph shows us that the is questining going on due to something wich the charater has seen or observed.another quote which in this case very succesfully creates a sense of mystery is "occasionaly long walks wich seemed to take him into the deepest parts of the city the lowest
parts of the city"this makes the reader question why he is doing this as if we read the text you can see he his not lower class
this is succesful at creating a sense of mystery as it gives the reader question and not awnswers(straight away) with intriuges the reader into reading the rest of the story it also helps create a atmosphere of  eeriness and build up.on the other hand lthough there are those peices of mystery and not much else in the first paragraph wich might not be enough to grip the reader.so overall(conclusion) I think that it was a sufficiant peice of writing and enough (at least for me to carry on reading)

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Personally I believe that Doyle hasn't done a very successful job at creating mystery. This is because there is no clear build up to mystery and the sentences are bland. The story also lacks events, because there are no proper events that lead to tension and excitement. This can be seen in the quotation “That done, we gradually began to settle down to accommodate ourselves” this quote proves to us that the sentences are quite dull and lack the element of excitement and tension, which then causes the reader to lose interest in the price of writing . I also feel that the start of the story is to long, however you do get to meet the characters. We don’t need as much detail, although I do show sympathy for Doyle as it is the start of the novel’s . There is little to no mystery during the first couple of pages which makes this piece less successful as Doyle still needs to keep the readers engaged and interested. Doyle could have added more mystery and suspense at the end to  engage and interest the reader. In conclusion I think that Doyle hasn’t created a very successful piece of mystery writing however it was a very good piece of detailed writing.

Oscar

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The writer is partially successful is by starting out with it being Mysterios from the beginning because it’s shown they lead very messy lives and don’t really know what they are doing but you can already tell something will go wrong but you are not sure what this creates a sense of mystery and discomfort in the reader.  The writer successfully created mystery later on in the text when you find out there is only a candle keeping the place alight and that there is also a more suspense when he feels scared in the room for no reason.

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I don’t think that the writer of Scarlet, Doyle, has done a good job at creating mystery. This is because nothing exiting happens and every sentence is dull and boring. This can be seen in the quotation “That done, we gradually began to settle down to accommodate ourselves to our new surroundings.” This quote is not interesting just like the majority of them. I also think the beginning is too dragged out, although you get to know the characters, we don’t need that much detail. Although I do sympathise as it is the start of the novels there isn’t much mystery to be written about, but he still needs to engage the readers and keep them entertained. Also, in the ending, he could have added more mystery to guarantee the audience would read more of his novels. So, to conclude , I don’t think he has done a good job at creating mystery.
Louisa

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The writer successfully creates a sense of mystery by making the reader wonder what will happen next. An example of this would be “I heard breathing outside the door,” this makes you wonder who is outside the door and what will they do.
Jack Scarrow

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i think the writer is very successful in creating suspense and excitement in this short story. it’s very eventful as characters change, as you think they are good but turn out to be evil. i think it keeps the reader intrigued, with the mystery and suspense as the story unravels very quickly which makes it even more interesting
poppy

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Charlie Owen                                                   Sherlock Holmes Scarlet

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Charlie Owen                                                   Sherlock Holmes Scarlet

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The author has been fairly successful creating a sense of mystery and mysterious atmosphere in scarlet as the writer describes how the people who visit Holmes range from all classes as for example it says 'I found he had many acquaintances, and those in the most different classes of society'. This gives off eeriness and mystery to who these people are and why they are there. The way the writer says 'Most different classes of society' makes it very peculiar and interesting to who they are drawing the reader in to find out more.

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The author of this short story has given us a sense of mystery by using the quotes "Gloomy old place" and "dark-curtained and uninviting". This shows the house as dark, dreary and not nice to look at, in detective novels it's common for murders or something  unpleasant to happen in a place like that. This will create suspense and make the reader think something horrible is going to happen later on.

Jack Tewkesbury

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The writer has successfully created mystery in the story, because they keep the reader guessing, and does not give us that many clues, but only just enough to give you the answer if you were to really think about it, and were perhaps a detective yourself. Another reason is that it has a little bit of a surprise at the end, by revealing who had stolen the pearls. A quote that explains this is, "Hullo, Margy! What have you done with your necklace?" This is a good example because you then start to think okay, well what happened to it, and knowing that for homework we are doing sherlock we will probably think that it will end up being a mystery, and that someone had taken them, and that we are now going to have an investigation. On the other hand I think the writer could have done better by giving us some more clues so we could perhaps have some predictions and guesses ourselves to what happened to the pearls so that at the end, we could relate it to our answer and whether we got the right answer. Overall it did create mystery but could have been improved to create more suspense and mystery. Lucy

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The writer is mainly successful in creating mystery in the story for a couple of reasons. One obvious reason is that you didn't know and expect what was going to happen making it 'mysterious' and thus causing a surprise at the end. Another reason that it is successful in creating mystery is that from the phrase 'the quiet in the room was horrible'. This successfully creates mystery because you would wonder why people at a gambling place are quiet enough to make the room feel uncomfortable and disturbing. The writer clearly had a motive of trying to create mystery.
Kerem

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The writer successfully creates a sense of mystery at the part where it says "Without stopping to draw my breath, without wiping the cold sweat from my face, I rose instantly on my knees to watch the bed-top. I was literally spellbound by it.". This hooks the reader to find out what had happened.

Arun

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i think the writer is somewhat successful in creating mystery and suspense  in this story . I think this as it is only in the 2nd sentance , that the writer wrote ' and lived, I am afraid, rather a wild life' which the word wild gives away some mystery as you then know that something exiting was going to happen . But there are some words that add suspense to the story such as 'something worse , suspicious and absolutely silence everywhere ' . The word absolutely shows that any possibly of noise is cut of , which ands to the suspension as you wonder what  will happen next in the silence . I also think that the plot was fastpacing , and didnt really give you time to think about what you have just read , which loses some of the suspension .
Rainbow

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agatha christie tries to create a sense of mystery. she does this somewhat successfully by using techniques such as rhetorical questions which build up a sense of mystery by quite simply not giving you an answer to the questions that have been asked.
Conrad Bands

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The writer is mostly successful in creating suspense and mystery in this short story because you don't expect what's going to happen and people you think are good people, turn out to be bad people. The reason I say mostly successful is that the plot unraveled quite quickly in my opinion.
Josiah

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Alex Housley
the crime at black dudley by Margery Allingham

The author of this successfully creates a sense of mystery because of there use of language in the same mysterious or even creepy semantic field. An example of this is at the beginning it says 'miles of neglected parkland stretched in an unbroken plain to the horizon and sea beyond' the word 'neglected' is one of the many uses of this semantic field the author uses to successfully create the sense of mystery. The reason that the author did this is to make the reader believe as the semantic field says that the area that the scene is set in is 'neglected', 'grey' and 'bare' all of these words create a atmosphere of somewhere that is eerie or creepy.

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Chapter 1 of The Crime at Black Dudley is partly successful at creating a sense of mystery. On one hand i do believe that a sense of mystery is created with our main supposed protagonist of the chapter he is oblivious to the people he is at this house/party with, creating intrigue. Furthermore, the setting of the chapter takes place in an old mansion that is described in the chapter as being 'bare and ugly' creating an eerie/creepy setting for the reader. On the contrary though, I also find that not much mystery is created as during the chapter the reader is mainly informed of only two things: the setting and character exposition which for me can get fairly boring quickly unless it is told in an interesting way - which it is not. This choice of the chapter being fairly uneventful, means that part of the mystery that is created through the protagonist/setting is somewhat lost as the reader becomes lost.

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I believe that the marmots in town, are not relevant, because they do not link to Alton in any way and have no background that links to Alton, they are also not linked to Christmas either. Overall they have no relevance to being replaced, from originally being a Christmas tree, and I think it should have stayed as a Christmas tree.

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jave mincraft is better than bedrock mincraft

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jave mincraft is better than bedrock mincraft

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java mincraft has way better performance quality. also you can make your own skin make your own multiplayer with plugins better easier and more mods and much more wheras bedrock just has bad servers where all you can play is cake wars horrible graphics and performancequility and you cant even have a cool premade skin , mods or even plugin server without paying your minecoins wheras java is free to play with no minecoins and more option.

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This text is so effective because the ending is so totally unexpected. The main character is so naïve and innocent, that we might expect something to happen to him. Of course, no one expects what actually happens!

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I hate peanut butter. In my opinion it goes with nothing and just smells really bad. I can’t see why people like it. Also most people can’t have because they are allergic. It is just not my thing.

Scarlett

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Because it is
Arun

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There should be less homework given by teachers…

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There should be less homework given by teachers…

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Because the amount we get and how long it takes to do it adds up. For example, if each homework takes 45 minutes and we get a few pieces a day, it adds up, and people get less sleep, as people would be doing homework
Arun

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People block roads and lie down on the motorway as a sign on protest and stop all in lncoming traffic. I feel this is the wrong way to go if you want something to change because you’ll get people annoyed at you and when they see your cause they’ll get annoyed at that as well also to further justify my opinion they stop ambulances getting to hospitals and police cars free getting to crimes and this is basically second hand killing somebody. Sam

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Because the juices of the pepperoni sinks into the pizza revealing new tastes
Arun

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There should be more electric charging points for cars

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There should be more electric charging points for cars

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Electric cars are expensive as they are but along with that you also need to buy a charger and use a lot of electricity which can come to a very large sum of money. So if the government want to help save the planet then they have to start adding more sometimes people have to go half an hour out of their way just to find a charging point when on a car journey so they should be more common than diesel and petrol cars stations in order to save the planet. Sam

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...because it has a nice texture, has the best taste, it has a nice tangy aftertaste and it goes with everything .Sam

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I think that porridge is one of the best options to have for breakfast as it fills you up to give you lots of energy for the day ahead. It is also a great source of carbohydrates and you can add a lot of things to it like fruit, jam or golden syrup to add some flavour to it and give more nutrients. It also doesn’t take too long to prepare, only 2-3 minutes and so gives you time to get other things ready in the morning instead of spending unnecessary time on breakfast when it can be quick, easy and filling
Jack H

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My first opinion is that I think the best video game at the moment is a game called Forza Horizon 5 (it’s a car game) because it has extremely realistic graphics and I hardly get bored of it. My second opinion is that Pizza Express is superior to Domino’s. This is because Pizza Express tastes much better and is much cheaper than Domino’s. I think there is no point in buying Domino’s when Pizza Express is cheaper and tastier. My final opinion is that R.S should be able to be dropped in year 9 because I think a lot of people, who don’t believe in God, can find the lessons extremely boring and not enjoyable and I don’t think that should be forced upon them especially if they don’t believe in anything.

Kerem

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This is because it is fun and can be very competitive . I think football is fun because if you enjoy playing it and are good at it you can really get into it. It is also competitive as you can be aggressive on the pitch by shoulder barging and making hard tackles,which for some people can satisfy them ! Football is also very beneficial for your health as it involves 90 minutes of running around a big pitch. Linking to it being fun , scientifically exercise releases endorphins (known as your “happy”hormone) which puts a smile on your face. It is also a fun sport as you are playing as a team which can make you feel part of a “family” (community) and you can make lots of new, long lasting friendships.
Louisa

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White bread or whole meal bread for sandwiches?

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White bread or whole meal bread for sandwiches?

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A lot of people say they prefer white bread and I guess I do when it comes to toast. However, when it comes to sandwiches it’s a different matter entirely, wholemeal is definitely the best. The colour looks more appealing and the texture is more interesting. The flavour is more variable as opposed to the blandness of the white. When looking at nutritional value, the less processed wholemeal bread is streets ahead. The carbohydrates are broken down more slowly giving a more sustained energy release, benefiting your blood sugar profile and keeping you fuller for longer. So, in conclusion, for me there is no contest, it’s wholemeal bread for my lunchtime snack.

Oscar

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In my opinion, pineapple definitely does not belong on pizza. Firstly, it's a fruit and its sweet tasting. Tomato and pineapple juice does not sound appealing to me, and it ruins the texture of the dough. It makes the crusts all wet and soggy, removing the flavour of the pizza. Instead of focussing on the pizza, you focus on the slimy pineapple on top which makes the experience less appealing. Vegetables such as peppers, olives or mushroom add to the savoury flavour, same as meats like chicken or ham.

freya :)

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I prefer real Christmas trees over fake Christmas trees because although fake ones are reusable, don't drop needles everywhere, don't need watering, often have built in lights, don't come infested with bugs and is already the perfect shape. I think that getting the Christmas tree from a Christmas tree farm is also part of the fun and one of the things I think of when I think of Christmas, and they are better for the environment. Also when I look at fake plastic Christmas trees they just look dead and just doesn't give of the same Christmassy spirit...
James Severs

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i think real plants are better than fake plants in a household . I think this because when you have a fake plant it gives of a cheap look and obviously looks fake and with a real plant, they positively give good air quality to the air around you , which can boost you mood and help you concentrate . If you get the right plant for your house , it will grow really well and gives you something to be happy about
rainbow :)

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I believe that the MCU should've ended with Avengers Endgame because Endgame provided closure for the characters of the MCU and tied up multiple loose ends of the story, making the films/shows that followed feel unnecessary or pointless. Also, I believe that winter is the best season of the year as it contains Christmas and new year as well as the season where it snows. Finally i believe, that science should not be an essential subject at school. Although i recognize that some aspects are important i think that people should not be made to learn the subject as many aspects of it won't be useful in the future.
Thomas M

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I like cats, I have seven cats so I probably have to say cats are better than dogs. But I would like a dog. Xavi.

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I like cats, I have seven cats so I probably have to say cats are better than dogs. But I would like a dog. Xavi.

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Cheese and onion on toast is so good. Xavi

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Cheese and onion on toast is so good. Xavi

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I love Marmite, especially in a sandwich with cheese :) Mrs P

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I love Marmite, especially in a sandwich with cheese :) Mrs P

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In my opinion i believe that, cats are better than dogs. I believe this as dogs are loud and annoying on the other hand cats are sweet and not as loud as dogs. Dogs can be a big nuisance as they destroy stuff like their toys, furniture and other valuable stuff. Cats are a lot less expensive than dogs which will help you save money. Cats also take care of themselves and you don't need to wash them where as dogs you need to wash them regularly as they cant clean themselves. Cats don't take up much room in your home as they are quite small and petite. Cats also produce health benefits such as they help reduce stress and make you live longer.         -phoebe stretton :))))

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I believe that smooth peanut butter is better that crunchy peanut butter because crunchy peanut can get stuck in your teeth creating a less pleasant eating experience. As well as that if you were making a sandwich the whole bits of peanut can tear the bread. This further creates a less pleasant experience to smooth peanut butter. As well as that smooth has a slight more amount of protein making it more nutritional value as well

Alex Housley

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I believe that Tom holland is a better actor for spider man as he really connects with his character and is really popular. Also my favourite book series is knightly and son because it is a mystery action detective novel also with a father son relationship that can sometimes cause more problems. In addition I think that the best online entertainment platform is YouTube because it has thousands of different types of content and you can even make content yourself.

Charlie Owen

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...because it is delicious, sharp and goes well with everything!