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one way the writer shows the jack in the box controlling the children is smiling ,this isn't normal for a toy to smile so this is making the children be controlled.also the jack in the box beckons to them to come to him .this smile means it's going his way the way he planed which could be quite bad.

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The last reason of why this jack in the box is scary is because the actual toy itself, it has a grin on its face almost like it coming alive and has facial expressions like a human would. It feels like someone is watching the children from inside the box and controlling the jack in the box like a human

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One way the writer shows how the jack-in-the-box controls the children is by saying how he beckons them towards him "he would rise from the box and motion to the child to come closer, closer, and smile."this shows how the children wanted to go to him maybe because they were scared

"And then the child would touch the catch, and the lid would open, slow as a sunset, and the music would begin to play, and Jack came out." This makes you think that jack was forcing the children to release him so he can tell them secrets.

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One way the righter shows that he is controlling the children is when he says 'you will not remember or forget' and it sounds like he is casting a spell on the children and the verse were he says ' and then the child would touch the catch,and the lid would open, slow as a sunset, and the music would begin to play, and jack came out' this really scares some of the readers because of how slow the the jack moves out of the box and then the music played its tune which is a classic horror scene.

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The writer makes jack scary in many different ways he words that should be happy and jolly but on jack it could be quite frightening. One example of this is when the writer says that jack can wait, wait, and wait forever but he will get his way no matter how long it takes. The writer says he is waiting for the children.He can wait forever. This  is quite creepy because a normal jack in the box can't talk or move or talked by itself and it wouldn't wait there for children all.

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Another way the writer shows the jack in the box is controlling the children is when he puts they 'remember opening the old pirate chest and pawing through the dolls and the clothes and pulling out the box.' which makes you think something is wrong and that the children never barely touched the box and that the children were afraid of the box.this instantly triggers in your head that something is wrong with the children and that they would never do that.

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The next way the writer shows that Jack is controlling the kids is when he says

'And there in the moonlight, he told them each things they could never quite remember, things they were never able entirely to forget.'

This shows that the jack is sort of locking something into their head even if they can't completely remember it will always be in their head and they'll never forgets. It is as if it was an order from the jack telling them to never forget.

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The  writer makes it scary bye making it act human like bye saying it's ' just wating and smiling holding in its secrets' and. Toys don't have secrets and they just don't what.and saying 'he's wating for the children' and he's saying  that the toy is a actual human but just  waits in a box and wants someone to set him  free and play with him.

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One way the writer shows that jack in the box is scary and controls the children is by using the word "rise" as it sounds like a rising almighty god that controls the people below or that the childs consciousness has risen and no longer has control over the body.

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The jack in the box controls the children in harsh ways. This is shown by a few quotes. One way that the writer makes jack so scary is, 'And then the child would touch the catch, and the lid would open, slow as a sunset, and the music would begin to play, and Jack came out.' This shows and tells us how jack comes out of his old wooden box. He comes out as slow as the sunsets. This is scary and harsh to the child.

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The writer shows that Jack controls the children by rising from the box and motion the child to come closer and closer and then smile. This shows that Jack makes the child hypnotised with his power. And the way he deliberately pops comes out the box makes it seem like he's alive. After Jack springs out the box it almost seems like he is alive not a toy anymore.

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The auther of this is trying to enfisize the description of the Jack In The Box from when it just starts coming out of the box to when he actually comes alive. One of the suggestions as to why the Jack In The Box is scary is 'he would rise from the box'.

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Another example would be: ' Not with a pop and a bounce: but deliberately, intently, he would rise from the box.' This connotates a dead body rising from a coffin. Which makes the jack in the box sound scary. That is another quote that makes him sound scary.

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The last reason of why this jack in the box is scary is because the actual toy itself, it has a grin on its face almost like it coming alive and has facial expressions like a human would. It feels like someone is watching the children from inside the box and controlling the jack in the box like a human

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The writer makes jack  look scary by giving him human characteristics. For example 'jack waits and smiles ' . A puppet can't smile or wait . So this can also be per,sonification but it can give the the reader the spooks

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One way the writer shows the jack in the box is controlling the children is by using strong and scary adjectives. For example " he told them things. " This shows that the jack in the box was cont

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She'd hear the gory stories
The, rumours spread, at least
Malicious, massive monster
Blood thirsty, brutal beast.

Each tree that waved its branches
Each bird that flew past her
Thought she saw a savage claw
Fearful of a disaster.

She'd heard the cries of others
They perished with such pain
Anxiously awaiting him
So scared she too would be slain

Carefully crawling,  creeping
So silently, until
She'd left the hidden castle
That lay dingy, dark and still.

Isaac

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the devils would eat the bodies
the blood dripped throughout the forest
the grass with red bold dew drops
the devils leader was called laurenct

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As the woman slowly crept by
Praying and praying she wouldn't die
She trembled and stumbled and then saw the eye
Of a giant great monster, she slowly whished her life
goodbye

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Climbing tenaciously,
Up the old crumbly wall.
The beast leaped gracefully,
Smashing the door.

Noah

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As the huge creature layed there,
He showed his terrible teeth,
And as he layed there greedily,
He licked his disgusting cheek

By Kairi

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His screams echo around the walls
As the farmer ploughed the farm
The floor was a sea of red
While on the floor lay his arm

By leah

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For a second I looked,
At this menessing monster,
I saw I wasn't welcome,
Therefore i was an imposter

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Inside was as dark as coal,

Roars and scratching could be heard,

Fear engorged her from within,

She could well become his third,

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LyntyHe licked his lips greedily A spark in his eyeI knew this was the endI am going to die

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LyntyHe licked his lips greedily A spark in his eyeI knew this was the endI am going to die

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Harvey
Closer and closer the creature came,

This monster was scaring him

The boy conciouse and careless

This was the monsters first victim

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Coming closer towards me,
Teeth as sharp as a knife.
If I don't get out of here,
I might just risk my life.

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She slowly started shivering,
Following her heart she led,
Above distant whispering,
Her last moment lay ahead.

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Splish, splash, splashing about

Let's go bake some cakes,

Stir, stir, stir without doubt

Now it is time to bake

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Came crawling out cautiously,
As quiet as a mouse,
He sure loved fresh human blood,
Drawling from his mouth.
Izzy

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He slowly closed his eyes,

Breathing as heavy as a rock,

As his skin disintegrated,

His time was going; tick tock, tick tock.

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It came closer, much closer into the cold damp air knocking over a huge tree as if it did not care 

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It came closer, much closer into the cold damp air knocking over a huge tree as if it did not care 

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the lady's Bold beaming blood poured

Like honey dripping of a knife

Swallowing her in hole

The beast not sparing her life

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Silently,slowly,sneakily
Carefully as I could
Trying not to disturb the beast as quietly as I would

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The the beast ran through the dim lit town,
Past a few drunk men,
Past the harbour,
Never to be seen agian.

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Their there was a lair
Where a dragon lies
Anyone one that goes there
Will serenely die