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Thank you for such fine work. Although I found it a little diff to hear some parts of your video, I can see that it took hours of work. The contrast between the colour and black is also good. 

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Thank you for such fine work. Although I found it a little diff to hear some parts of your video, I can see that it took hours of work. The contrast between the colour and black is also good. 

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The processing of your work is also excellent.
P= 5+5+3+4+3=20/25
M= 21/

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[Jonas cycling as fast as possible to escape

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[Puts Gabriel in the basket and rides away as quickly as possible]

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Chief Elder: Now we have come to the ceremony of the twelves. This is the time when we acknowledge differences. You Elevens have spent all your years till now learning to fit in, to curb any impulse that might set you apart from your group. But today, we honour your differences. They have determined your futures.

First, number one, we have Madeline. Assignment as Fish Hatchery Attendant.

[applause sound effect] Thank you for your childhood.

Jonas: [fidgety, think] Good thing that assignment has been taken! But what would mine be? What if it's one that I do not like? What if I'm not even assigned with one? What if..?

Cheif Elderly:Eighteen,  Fiona, congratulations, you are given the Assignment of Caretaker of the Old. Thank you for your childhood

[applause]

[Take Jonas getting ready to go up]

Chief Elderly:Twenty, Pierre

Jonas(thinking): This can't be it! She've made a mistake, everybody realised it!

Chief Elderly: Forty, Bernice, Assignment as a Birthmother

[applause]

Chief Elderly:I caused my community anxiety, I apologise to my community.

Community(all of us, just record the sound):we accept your apology.

Cheif Elderly:I apologise to you in particular, I cause you anguish

Jonas: i accept your apology

Chief Elderly: Please come to the stage

[Jonas brisk walks to the stage]

Chief Elder: Jonas has not been assigned, Jonas has been selected.

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Besides filming the video, we have also took some time to have a break after we have finished our tasks to relax ourselves. This enables us to look forward more to the task that we are doing instead of just keep working. This also allows our group to bond together as a team so that we do not over stress ourselves

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We talked about the things needed to hand up on the first lesson in june

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The scenes we have chosen are 7&10
7.We learn that the Release would usually happens to underdeveloped infants, the elders and  anyone who broke the Rules 3 or more times. When Jonas was shown an example of  the release, he could not handle the morbidity of such an action and the pain induced afterwards. At this point, the reader now understand of how feelings have started to cause an impact in Jonas' life as the new Receiver of memories.
10.We learn that the planes in Jonas community uses heat searching planes to search for people missing. Although Jones has brought Gabriel away from the community, he is still not safe as they might still find them and bring them back. When they have not enough food, memories are used to keep them from starving and memories of cold to not be found by the plane. These memories have helped them not to be found by the planes.

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The scenes we have chosen are 1, 2
1: It is a significant moment where Jonas sees colours for the very first time and realise something unusual. It is one very important quality a receiver of memory must have and this is the moment Jonas sees it but still does not know what it is for. By adding this moment into our trailer, it can act as a comparison for the later scenes of Jonas's feelings when Jonas releases his ability and therefore enhance the viewer's understanding of Jonas, making them want to find out more about him and why his view of did he want the others to also have the memories . This will attract viewers to watch the movie.
2: Firstly, the chief elder skipped Jonas and everyone realised it, the mistake was very obvious, everyone noticed it. This will make the viewers feel curious about what has happened and how will the they will resolve it.  They will also be curious about how this led him to an adventurous journey as he was chosen to be the Receiver Of Memory.This is where his journey started as a Receiver of Memory.