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Travis mcdermott

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~Jas

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Jasmine Sangster progression tracker lesson 1 unit 3

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good use of colour to make the symbols stand out but its a bit to complicated for a logo

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add my snapchat - wazz3r

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We're in England, the weathers either windy and raining or windy and cloudy.Get over it.

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We're in England, the weathers either windy and raining or windy and cloudy.Get over it.

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Its lush outside what you on about

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adams colin i guess

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Creative back story and the logo looks appealing

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like the colour

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I like the elements used in the logo to create a comparison between science and the title, the shapes you used also made the design more simplistic, the yellow colour added to the lightning bolt is eye-catching

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its too damn windy

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Good variety of designs

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Lovely idea to build it

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pipe down the weathers lush what are ya on about

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pipe down the weathers lush what are ya on about

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so shut it

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Good use of colour and the designs are simple

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I liked the contrast of the red heart. This made the heart then become the main focal point against the black and white. personally i would say that this is the most successful point in the logo and instantly draws the attention to it. They have used line to create a very complex design however if this was to be printed to a small scale this could then become quite hard to understand/ read.

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good use of colour in the logos. to improve try writing some ideas down about the product.

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Some good designs and i like the way you included tape into your presentation.
Luke, Jacob and Cameron

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Like the colour n that, decent drawing, sull did a class job holding it up well done buddy xoxo

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Very interesting story about rusty saxophones it showed a variety of skills including English, tone and design.
Luke and Jacob

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Good use of the instrument

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Gave a confident presentation, their back story was believable whilst their logo was appealing.
- John, Cameron

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gud

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Team 1- The presentation did seem to be unprepared however, they did et across their ideas despite that.
Team 2- The presentation was clear and easily understood. The logo stands out and, though complex, works to illustrate the calm tone of the brand.
Team 3- Simple design, could use a brighter colour for the logo, but overall good concept
Team 4- The parody nature of this presentation really made the backstory to the shop stand out.

~Jas

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Like the colour , wish ya didn't post it upside down like howay boys

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team 1 -  (ion energy drink ?) uses the idea of an ion to make the product seem smarter. However, could have used more colours to make it stand out
team 2 -  (harmonian hipster shop or something) used colours to make things stand out in the logo, this brought a clear focus to the subject
team 3 - (other ion one) cant even remember
team 4 - (harmonian music shop) Could've used more colour

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Team 1-The main focal point of this work is the product its self, because its large and in your face and the style of the design. The formal elements is Line, some colour and shape.

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Team 1-The main focal point of this work is the product its self, because its large and in your face and the style of the design. The formal elements is Line, some colour and shape.

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i like the logo of team 4 and i like team 4 because warren is associated with it

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It was a simple design but affective. :)
Jacob and Luke

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I like the creative logo and the font/shapes used when you were presenting you were confident and explained your ideas well

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you had a very confident presentation and you have used a simple design, you used a lot of line and tone, you could've used more colour though.

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Team 1

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nice presentation from team 4 with the creative story.

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i like the logo that they used, i think it is very appealing to the eye

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I like the simplicity of the design however the coloured words don't seem to fit with the poster in my opinion. Personally i think transferring this colour to the music notes else where would make it stand out . more for example the music notes. The mood comes across as very chilled out with the music notes and the lack of colour

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good back story very creative and imaginative. i would of redone the logo but add colour to show before and after .

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Had a very confident presentaiton

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Gave a good presentation and were confident whilst, doing so.
Their logo used a good amount of colour and was not too complicated.
- John, Cameron

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I like the simplicity and the symbols to create the words in "Ion" they were confident and presented their ideas well

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Very good use of colour, makes the important part stand out

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It has some good aspects such as line, tone and illustrations.
However they could of used more colour to make their product stand out.
Jacob and Luke

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good use of colour, simple and not to many design, and the colours contrast together and are simple.

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i like the idea of the product and the use of line , but to improve i would think of adding some colour to make it better

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Team 3 - Caitlin, Travis, Alysha, Jordan, Aiden

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Team 3 - Caitlin, Travis, Alysha, Jordan, Aiden

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More ion group ideas

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Team 1: the idea was clear but more colour could have been used.
Team 2: the idea was really simple and clear but the back story and reason could have been clearer.
Team 3:
The idea was simple and the design was good but it could have used more detail and colour.

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the design i very simple and could use more colour
team TCJS
this is a bit simple but clear to make out, could use a better story
Courtney & Darren

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Team one - You gave a confident presentation your design work also stood out.
Team Two - I like the music sheet layout for the logo and the heart stood out the most for me, also you were very confident in your presentation
Team Three - you explained your work very well and and you had lots of ideas with in you work, the logo was the best because you incorporated the logo and science together.
Team Four - I like the fact they have used a story to tell the back story of their product/ company and it shows us they perspective on how they came to be where they are today.

- Emily & Aiden

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I like the simplicity of the design, however i would personally say that the coloured writing does not fit in with the poster. This colour could be transfered to the music notes

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Team 1 - Good communication, eye contact. They were confident, and had good presentation skills. Good use of colour. The formal elements they used are line, colour, shape, form. The mood of the artwork is calm and relaxed, the blue colour used on the treble clef. The logo has been most successful because of the way it stands out.

Team 2 - Great communication and eye contact, good presentation skills. Good ideas, and use of colour. The formal elements they used are form, tone, line, shape and colour. The mood of the artwork is
energetic. The sketches were successful, because it shows that they had many ideas.

Team 3 - We didn't say much, but we had great ideas that we wrote down. We had good eye contact and our communication skills could've been better. The formal elements we used were line, shape and colour. The mood of the artwork is a little energetic with some knowledge in it.
The sketches were successful because it showed what we knew about it in general.

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I like the idea of the product and the use of lines, but I think it could use colour

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Ion

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The legendary tail of Harmon and ian

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Tia,john,cameron,cameron,sophie,sullivian.
Very calm logo,based around music