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5/16-Revising for Academic/Literary Language  

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5/16-Revising for Academic/Literary Language  

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Tonight, you will revisit your post from last night. Edit your post and bold the literary language you used in your post. If you did NOT use any literary language, revise your post to include some! See the poster below for helping remembering some of these important words.

Sample reading response:  In my book The Thief of Always by Clive Barker the section of text that stands out to me is the paragraph below:I think this part of the story is important because it introduces another theme in the book. It introduces the life lesson that even though some strangers are dangerous, you still have to have faith and believe that there are good, kind strangers and “hope that the world he’d returned to still had a little kindness in it”. It is also important because it shows that Harvey has really changed as a character since the beginning of the story. He probably wouldn’t have thought strangers were so dangerous before his experiences in the Holiday House.

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As you are reading tonight think about what part of your story has been very important. Then answer the prompts below:

Rewrite or take a snapshot of a particular section of the text that you think is an important part of the story

Use academic/literary language to explain how that part or story element is important to the whole story.

Make sure your response includes:

The title and author of the text

Uses academic/literary language

Explains how the part/story element is important to the whole story

RAP

Sample reading response:  In my book The Thief of Always by Clive Barker the section of text that stands out to me is the paragraph below:I think this part of the story is important because it introduces another theme in the book. It introduces the life lesson that even though some strangers are dangerous, you still have to have faith and believe that there are good, kind strangers and “hope that the world he’d returned to still had a little kindness in it”. It is also important because it shows that Harvey has really changed as a character since the beginning of the story. He probably wouldn’t have thought strangers were so dangerous before his experiences in the Holiday House.

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In the book "The Shadow Children Among The Barons" by Margret Peterson a important part of the book that is stated is "Can you be lee? Can you act like him." I know this is important because the main character Luke has a fake identity that makes him legal but he thought since he had to look like another person but he never thought that he would have to act like it. If he makes to big of a mistake he will be killed so he needs to act like Lee so he can get by and not cause to much trouble. if he doesn't act than he fails the reason he has a fake ID. The plot of the story all relies on someone being someone else so the writer has made a small sentence a whole main plot of the story and this affects both internal and external quests. the quests are affected because Luke was calm and peaceful helping many children to have fun and learn skills to live. but both changed and now he is feeling scared worried and angry and having to help one of two people to make things easier for the people he is helping

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In the book The Tales of Beedle Bard by J.K. Rowling a part in the book that stands out to me is "Only one can bathe in the fountain! It will be hard enough to decide which of us it will be, without adding another!" this part is important because it lets the reader know that this will probably lead to the climax and it makes the reader think that there will be a fight of who will bathe in the Fountain.

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In the book Georges Marvelous Medicine by Roald Dahl, an important part is when George says "He was especially tired of having to live in the same house as that grizzly old grunion of a grandma" this is an important part of the story because it describes all the hate that George has for that old grumpy lady, his grandmother. This later causes George to make that huge mistake of making her that terrible poisons medicine. This teaches George to think twice what his doing so he doesn't make again that terrible mistake of him. I think this part is very important because George learns two lessons, to think twice and to give everyone a second chance.

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban

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In the book "Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban" by J.K Rowling, an important part of the book is in the is in the rising action when the main character Harry, has an obstacle which it is that he wants to go to Hogsmeade but he can't because his aunt and uncle didn't sign the form. Then Harry asks Profesor McGonagall  “Professor, my aunt and uncle — er — forgot to sign my form,” he said.
This is an important part because Harry wants to go to Hogsmeade but he can't because his aunt or uncle didn't sign the form, because Harry (by accident) blew up Marge, Vernon's sister.

Then Harry makes the excuse that his only rest of his family are "Muggles" , and he said that they don't understand Hogwarts forms and stuff. The thing was that Profesor McGonagall said that her final word was no. This was because in the form said that a guardian or a parent must sign the form or otherwise there is no going on Hogsmeade.

Another reason this is important to Harry is because he wants to go to Hogsmeade with his friends or otherwise he will be lonely and sad. Also because he wants to see all the cool stuff that George and Fred said to Ron, like this gum that when you eat it you levitate. Which they sell in a store in Hogsmeade called "Honeydukes". Also you can see that the narrator slow down this part with lots of emotions, like "Harry took a deep breath."

A theme that Harry was taught, on that part of the story is that you got  to follow the directions and don't get angry, just to let it go. This is because when Harry was told by Marge that his parents must have been crazy and bad people he didn't control himself and blew up Marge by accident.

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In the book The Lost Hero, by Rick Riordan, this paragraph is important to the whole story because it is when they are meeting Boreas, the god of the North Wind. This is an important part because the most important part is when Piper, Jason, and Leo are meeting Boreas because if they can convince him to tell them about the storm spirits, they will be able to see who they work for so that they can go find Hera. This is a theme of the book which is that "whenever you want someone to tell you something, the best thing to do is try and convince." This will changed Piper, Jason, and Leo because before, they were scared of everything, and now, they stood up to convince a god to tell them something, and this god likes killing demigods.

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In the book, the Sea of Monsters, by Rick Riordan, the paragraph that is most important is: Because Anabeth, Tyson, and Percy have to continue their journey to succeed their mission, but Clarisse is going to keep them in her boat. Clarisse doesn't want to team up with them because she wants to get the fame for retrieving the Golden Fleece and save the camp. This part is important because if Clarisse doesn't let them leave, they wouldn't be able to complete their quest and retrieve the Golden Fleece to the camp

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire

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In the book Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, by J.K Rowling, the section of the text that stands out the most is when it says that Harry's scar is still hurting and when it says "Potter can speak Parseltongue" reveals Draco Malfoy. These parts are important because they connect to the theme don't let bullies get to you, and don't let everything people say about you bring you down, because Draco was mean with Harry and he starts telling everyone his secrets because he wants to make him feel bad. It also shows that Harry has changed as a character because now everyone knows his story and later he gets kind of over it.

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In the book "Among the Imposters" by Margaret Peterson. An important theme  of the story is when Luke is starting to go to school and it is stressful because Luke needs to be called Lee because in his fake ID's it said that his real name was Lee. This is an important part of the story because Luke will maybe do something that will prove that Luke is a third child. I think that that is important to the story because if he was found out Jen's dad would maybe be fired or killed, and Luke will be maybe hunted down or he will have to hide again.

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In the book The Missing: Sent by Margaret Peterson Haddix an important section of is:

This section is important to the story because it reveals one of the main characters true identity, it also shows how persistent or annoying he can be sometimes. This section also shows that sometimes you are someone you might not think you are, which is very important for the books.

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In the book: The sea of monsters by: Rick Riordan an important section in the book is :
My nightmare started like this.
I was standing on a deserted street in some little beach town. It was the middle of the night. A storm was blowing.Wind and rain ripped at the palm trees along the sidewalk. Pink and yellow stucco buildings lined the street, their windows boarded up. A block away, past a line of hibiscus bushes, the ocean churned.
Florida, I thought. Thought I wasn't sure how I knew that.
I'd never been to Florida.
Then I heard hooves clattering against the pavement. i turned and saw my friend Grover running for his life.
Yeah, I said hooves.
Grover is a satyr. From the waist up, he looks like a typical gangly teenager with a peach- fuzz goatee and a bad case of acne. He walks with a strange limp, but  unless you happen to catch him without his pants on ( which I don't recommend), you'd never know there was anything un-human about him. Baggy jeans and fake feet hide the fact that he's got furry hindquarter and hooves.
Grover had been my best friend in sixth grade. He'd gone on this adventure with me and a girl named Annabeth to save the world, but I hadn't seen him since last July, when he set off alone on a dangerous quest-- a quest no satyr had ever returned from.
Anyway, in my dream, Grove was hauling goat tail, holding his human shoes in his hands the way he does when he need to move fast.He clopped past the little tourist shops and surfboard rental places. the wind bent the palm trees almost to the ground.
Grover was terrified of something behind him. he must've just come from the beach. Wet sand was caked in his fur. He'd escaped from somewhere. He was trying to get away from... something.
A bone- rattling growl cut through the storm. Behind Grover, at the far of the block, a shadowy figure loomed. It swatted aside a street lamp, which burst in a shower of sparks.
Grover stumbled, whimpering in fear. He muttered to himself. have to get away. Have to warn them!
I couldn't see what was chasing him, but I could hear it muttering and cursing. The ground shook as it got closer.
Grover dashed around a street corner and faltered. He'd run unto a dead-end courtyard full of shops. No time to back up. The nearest door had been blown open by the storm.
The sign above the darkened display window read: ST. AUGUSTINE BRIDAL BOUTIQUE.
Grover dashed inside. he dove behind a rack if wedding dresses.
The monster's shadow passed in front of the shop. I could smell the thing ---- a sickening combination of wet sheep wool and rotten meat and that weird sour body odor only monsters have, like a skunk  that's been living off Mexican food.
Grover trembled behind the wedding dresses.  The monster's shadow passed on.
Silence except for the rain. grover took a deep breath.
Maybe the thing was gone.
Then lightning flashed. The entire front of the store exploded , and a monstrous voice bellowed: "MIIIIINE!"
This was important because it means that something was going to happen.

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In the book Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix by J.K Rowling. I think one of the most important parts of the story was this one because it points out that you might think you are the center of attention and you all ways have to be, but no there are other people who are having allot of pressure and they have very hard lives maybe even harder than yours and you just need to learn to support those people and not be so selfish.

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In George Marvelous Medicine by Roald Dahl the part that stands out is when the grandma took the medicine. I think this an important part because its the climax. I know this is the climax because it slows down. The climax normally slows down and explains everything that is happening in that second. The images are below.

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In the book Among the Impostors by Margaret Peterson Haddix the top section on page 48 contains a very moving description of the main character, Luke and his feelings about liberty represented by his visit to the wooded forest nearby his school. This passage is important in following the theme of liberty and the lack of freedoms that is present throughout the book.
By having this foray to the woods Luke was able to be alone with his thoughts and untangle his burden about school and life, this brings the symbolism required to add to the plot of the story.

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I think this part of the story in Surviving Highschool by Lele Pons and Melissa De La Cruz is very important because it can tell you that Lele is jealous of Darcy and sometimes wants tobe like her. I also think this is important to the story because it could lead to something else like she might pretend to be Darcy and see if she becomes more popular. I also think it can lead to their friendship becoming a hate because maybe Lele will start a conflict and they will eventually split.

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In the book Wonder by R.J Palacio, one part that stands out a lot is when August fakes his sick.
I think this is a important part of the text because August is scared people will judge him by his looks and he has never been to school and that creates a new theme don't let people judge you for what you look like instead of who you are on the inside.

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In the book Among the Betrayed by Margaret Peterson , I think this part stands out because It is saying that Nina the main character of the book, learned to trust others and that connects to the main Idea because the main idea is to trust others and that nobody deserves to be betrayed.

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In the book Percy Jackson and The Titans Curse, this part of the story is important because, they are deciding to kill or keep the biggest traitor of all time. (Luke) The traitor that almost killed camp half-blood, and wanted to help The Titans destroy the Gods. Then Thalia decides and pushes Luke off a 50 feet cliff.

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In the book Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows by J.K Rowling, an important part in the story happens in chapter 10 "Kreacher's Tale." In this chapter, Harry discovers who is R.A.B, aka, Regulus Black, sirius's brother and Kreacher's favourite master. Later in the chapter, Harry asks Kreacher what had happened to Regulus. As Kreacher tells the tale, he starts to sob and to cry. That's why Harry now treats Kreacher nicely on Hermione's request, and Kreacher actually gets a better mood. I believe that this is important, because this connects to a different theme, which is Give others a second chance, or don't judge a book by it's cover. (Pages192-196) (Sorry for not inserting a snap shot, but four whole pages is great quantity of pages to read) ( perhaps a 4?)

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5/15 "Harry Potter and The Chamber Of Secrets"

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5/15 "Harry Potter and The Chamber Of Secrets"

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In the book Harry Potter and The Chamber of Secrets by J.K. Rowling this section seems to be important to the story, because for the first time Harrry and his friends cannot go through the wall in the train station to  take the train to Hogwarts. This indicates that something is wrong and that there will be a change in the storyline. The characters must enchant a car, so that they can fly with it to Hogwarts. Later in Hogwarts they will probably find out what happened and a new problem or theme is introduced that the characters need to fix.

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In the book the Lighting Thief by Rick Roidan. An important part in the book is when Percy fights in the arc. This part is important in the book because is one of the most important fights that Percy do. This part of the book connects to the theme of the book never give up because, Percy always stands up in the arc fight and he never stops fighting in this fight.

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In the book The Missing: Sent by Margret Peterson Haddix a very important part in the book was when the author stated who a side character named Alex real identity was in the 15th century. The second important part is very similar from the first one, it is when it says who one of the main characters called Chip real identity was at that year. Those two are important because it explains who they really are in the 15th century and says who the character is. Another important part was when it said Katherine was feeling sick and JB (Janitor Boy) explained that it was time sickness, a sickness like being air sick or car sick but when you are in the wrong time period and not in the right century. That part was important to the story because it could happen to anyone that doesn't belong in that century.

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In the book the The Imposters by Margaret Peterson, an Important part in the book  I found, is

I think that's an important phrase or paragraph because, It's introducing a theme to the story, because the theme in the other book, Among the Hidden is, never give up and in this part the paragraph is saying a theme could be is, faith or to have courage, because Luke (Lee) had lots of courage to say his real name.
Another thing is, if someone could or had hear him he could be in gigantic problems, because everyone would know his real story, who is him or even they could take his head off. So I think that's a very important part of the story, that phrase can make the problem (climax).

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone 

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5/15 Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone 

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In the book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's  Stone, by J.K. Rowling, a part that stands out is when Harry is on the Hogwarts Express, he tells Malfoy, "I think I can tell who the wrong sort are for myself" (page 109) The tone creates a sense of tension between them and this stands out because it is Harry's first time meeting Draco Malfoy, and he already shows a feeling of disgust of Malfoy and his opinions. This continues on in the series and it is important in the later books and the plot. This important to the quest structure because Malfoy becomes an obstacle and starts a hate between that lasts for a very long time.

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In the book Harry Potter and the Chamber of secrets by J.K Rowling, an important part is when Ron says (when they get to Ron's house) "It's not much," said Ron. "It's WONDERFUL," said Harry happpily, thinking about Privet Drive. This part is important because it is explaining how Harry really hated Privet Drive because Ron's house is not the best house.

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In the book The lightning Thief by Rick Riordan one part that is really important to the overall story is when Mr. Brunner handed the pen to Percy, I think that's important because that proves that Mr.Brunner is not a normal human also he is magical because the pen turned into a sword, and further in the book you find out that Mr.Brunner is not just a teacher, he is also half human half horse/centaur, and his name is not Mr.Brunner it's Chiron. Most importantly, Chiron was only in the school because he had to protect Percy from danger, and that he already knew about the Camp Half-Blood way before Percy knew about it.