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Glow: I think it will be very helpful to people all over the country
Grow: Would you reuse the dipper or the heat sensor? Also what happens if the baby sits on it and it gets too hot?

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Glow: I liked how organized your presentation.

Grow: I wished your pitch included the other slides in your presentation

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wows: very well done. Love the idea.

grows: can you use the dispenser again?

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Grow: I think your presentation could've been more colorful and more interesting. You were looking down the whole time, and if you were looking up, then when you were presenting, the audience could've been more intrigued.
Glow: I think that you did a great job presenting, and you spoke very loudly which was good. Also, your product was a very good idea.

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Glow: Very coordinated and prepared
Grow: Make it a little more interesting when it comes to the power point

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Glow: I think that your invention was very useful. It was small, so it could go almost anywhere! You also talked at the perfect volume!
Grow: I think that you could manufacture this product with different-size band-aid, and it could be even better! Also, what if the band-aid got stuck on the invention?

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Glow: I thought how you structured the power point and how you showed your product in action was very good.
Grow: I thought that your script could have been a little more in sync with your power point.

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Glow: I liked the idea of your product and how it has the potential to solve a small problem.

Grow: Next time, I think your group should try to speak more confidently and clearly and I think you could have put more emotion into what you were talking about. Also, would you reuse the container after the bandages run out or would you have to buy a whole new one?

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Glow: your idea was very creative and can really help the world with one of it's smallest problem.
Grow: look up at the audience more often and don't look at the computer.

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glow: You were loud and understood what you were doing! Also, we all got a good understanding of what was going on, and it was explained in what I believe was the best way possible, and the script was extremely well written!
grow: You used a script of a computer, and didn't have a script for some slides, which were simply ignored and skipped.

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Glow: I love how enthusiastic you  were when you presented.
Grow: Maybe next time you should memorize the pitch instead of looking at the lap top. That way you always have your eyes facing the crowd.

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Glow: you explained very specifically of what you wanted to change.
Grow: I think that you could be a little more enthusiastic when you present

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glow: your right it might be a small problom but i got what you ment its smart and a great idea.

grow: maybe do more on the power point next time otherwise it was great.

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Glow: it is a very cool idea and is very useful.
Grow:  I couldn't see the words on the powerpoint because you were standing in front of it.

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Grow: I liked how your presentation was very organized and you explained how your product worked very well Glow: I think next time you should talk a little slower

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Glow: I think your product is very helpful and will protect many from infection.
Grow: During your presentation you stuttered numerous times making it look as though you lacked confidence.

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Glow: very well done great explaining and you were loud for all of us to hear.

Grow: I don't really think you guys need to do anything better that was really cool.

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Glow: I love how you presented and I think the invention is super unique and very creative.
Grow:I think you could explain it more enthusiastically. Other than that it was amazing

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Glow: Very helpful and easy to use. I think it is a great idea. I would use these in my house.

Grow: You took little breaks during your pitch in the middle of the sentence. Also, what would happen if you ran out of bandaids?

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Glow: Your presentation was well organized.
Grow: You skipped a lot of slides. Also you were facing away form some people the whole presentation so some people couldn't hear you as well.

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Glow: your presentation was so creative!
Grow: you could speak a little more louder.

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Glow: Because you had memorized your lines, you were more confident in your pitch. I do personally believe that you guys should be on Shark Tank. Your power-point was very smooth and informational.

Grow: I wished that you guys could have given a demonstration of how the Yameru worked. I think that you could also have included how your invention was better than others that were similar. Is there a surtant size paper towel role that can only fit in the Yameru.

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Glow: You spoke at the Perfect volume, and you seemed very confident in your idea. Your idea to stop paper towel waste was a very good idea. I think your presentation was very colorful and intriguing.
Grow: I think you could've made the look more pleasing to the eye. How does the arm stop the paper towel roll from not moving at all? You laughed in the middle of your presentation, and that didn't help.

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Glow: I liked how you guys showed all the websites you got your information from and I think this can help people all across the world.

Grow: I think next time, you should add more color into your presentation.

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Glow: It is a very good idea to save paper towels around the world. Also, good job being enthusiastic.

Grow: It is unprofessional to say, "We looked at other people who did this." Also, Yameru means quit in Japanese, not stop.

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Glow: Your presentation was amazing! You included so many facts  and information
Grow: I don"t think you need to improve anything

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glow: I love the idea of your product and I think it will help the trees.
grow: you were tuging at your cape and you started to laugh during your  presentation.

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Glow: You spoke loudly and clearly about what the product was and helped us understand what it was, what it did, and why it was made. (Also, the whole tree huggers thing was pretty funny!)
Grow: At one initial part of the presentation, you just laughed, taking away time from the actual presentation. Also, you kept messing up with each other's names, which was hilarious.

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Really neat this can probably save the trees! This was AWESOME!

Grow I feel like you might have needed to put more feeling in it just a tiny bit.

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glow: i think the costumes were cool   but the thing i liked was thgat you guys all ways knew what you were saying.

grow: you guys said you improved off of other paper towel holders, that does mean this is not an invention but its good.

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Glow: You gave a lot of information in a short amount of time
Grow: What if someone just ripped the towels off individually

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Glow: you were so creative and being superheros was a great idea.
Grow: you were laughing in the middle of the presentation which was distracting and you were talking so fast at some points it was hard to understand you.

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Glow: I thought that your presentation was very good and found different tension paper towel rolls to influence how you built yours
Grow: I believe that you guys should take your product a little more seriously and not laugh during the presentation.

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Glow: I loved the over all presentation and thought the way you took the time to dress up and everything was great
Grow: I think that since you showed us inventions that were practically the same thing you could have been more creative

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Glow: Your presentation was presented in a very creative and informative way.
Grow: You did not tell us why it is better than other tension paper towel holders therefore not fully convincing your audience to buy your product.

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Glow:  i liked that you made t shirts
Grow. I don't understand how you made it better than the ones that are already there.

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Glow: You did awesome! I loved how you had matching costumes and how you presented clearly, I also loved how you didn't just read what the slide said, but said it in your own words!

Grow: The only thing I could think of for you to grow on is that you skipped one slide and giggled a little but that's fine! I would too. I just have a question, does it stop you from taking more then one paper towel by holding it down or by twisting it?

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Glow: this product is going to change people's lives
Grow: you could talk a little louder

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Glow: Great idea
Grow: Try not to use the power point and remember who is doing what

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Glow: Your idea is a great idea and I hope you can create your product. Also I love your idea with the website.
Grow: You copied the powerpoint word for word and you spoke quietly

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Glow: I think this will be a very helpful to our country. I especially liked how you made a website for your product.

Grow: I think you should have spoken louder and more clearly.

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Glow: Very creative. I love this product and I think it is very good. I will definitely help the environment.

Grow: Lots of spelling and grammar typos. The PowerPoint was not as good as the idea itself.

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Glow- very well done . This is a very good idea .

Grow- would'int the batters run out after a surtin amount of time?

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Glow: that the product is awesome and it fixes a BIG problem.
Grow: nothing

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Glow: I liked how you talked at the perfect volume.
Grow: What if the people abusing the pet take the collar off? Would it come in different sizes? Also, I think that you should try to stutter and giggle less.

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Glow: It was wonderful that you made a website it really illuminated the purpose

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Grow: I think that you spoke quietly, and next time you should project your voice more. You read off the PowerPoint, and I thought the PowerPoint was supposed to be your guide in what you were saying, not your script. You stuttered.
Glow: The idea is a good one.

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Glow: I think that it was very creative to make a website and I think that this was a very  creative and useful idea! It was a very detailed and descriptive power point and pitch. In the future you could maybe go on shark tank
Grow: I think that you could have spoke a little louder while presenting  but other than that everything was awesome

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Glow: I thought that your product was an amazing success and is a very good idea.
Grow: I thought that if you had not stuttered as much as you did I would have stayed much more interested.

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Glow: It was wonderful that you made a website it really illuminated  the purpose of your product.
Grow: You did not show your product working hence would not convince your audience to buy your product

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Glow: I love the idea very much! It will probably help animal abuse around the world.
Grow: I think you guys should be a little more prepared for the pitch with out having to read off the board. Also, think Taylor needs to speak more clearly with out mumbling.

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Glow: the world needs this. To many dogs/cats get hurt a year.
Grow: you should be a bit more lively up on stage.

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Glow: We understood your product (Most of it!) I enjoyed the context, and I believe that it is very clever and interesting that you had your own website!
Grow: Taylor was mumbling and nobody could hear him, also he was too quiet. The presentation had several letters cut off by the max limit of characteristics, there was no script, it was just simply copied off of the presentation, and there was an argument on a slide with Crosby and Taylor. (It was a quick argument, but was still an argument.)

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Glow: I like the idea and how you demonstrated the invention
Grow: Next time I think you should speak louder and memorize the pitch

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glow- I think this could be a very helpful product.
grow- could not hear caden and you guys were studering.

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Glow: I think it is  a very great idea
Grow: At my house when my door is locked I just swipe a credit card through and it unlocks. Also what if your door was locked and someone was trying to break in and they swiped their credit card through and got in?

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Glow: it' s a great idea
Grow: you need to speak up. It was very hard to understand you. You should try to be happy up on stage because no one wants to see a group that doesn't seem to like what their project is.

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Glow: Very good idea for when doors or windows are jammed. Very creative.

Grow: Doors being jammed does not happen often. It has never happened to me or anybody in my family.

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Glow: Your invention could save many lives, like not being able to open painted-over windows in a house fire.
Glow: Some doors are stuck too tight to slide anything flexible through, so I think that you should make it more sturdy. Also, what if a 5 year old is trapped in a house during a fire and his parents are outside? He wouldn't be able to reach the top of the door to slide the unlox very far.

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Glow: I think that this product will solve a problem that is huge. Your presentation was very colorful and interesting.
Grow: When you were presenting, I didn't understand what it was, and how it worked.

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Glow: This idea so creative! You guys are really smart, this could actually really help the world. I've heard of people getting locked in cars and this is such a great idea to unlock the door!
Grow: You guys should be more prepared for the pitch without having to read off the paper

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Glow: your object is so cool!
Grow: you could be a little more enthusiastic

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Glow: Practical, Jam Lock free! You did a great job speaking and I enjoyed the presentation very much!
Grow: I have nothing

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Glow:  good idea
Grow: Seen it before in a life hack video but made with an old credit card.Stutter less talk louder and clearer(Caden)

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glow: the idea is smart and the fact that it actually worked at your house is cool.

grow: maybe don't copy off the computer, and know what and when your saying something

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First I just want to say if the power point wasn't in sync with what you were saying then that's my fault, sorry!
Glow: I like what your invention is doing and its good that its not a heavy giant lock you have to carry every where! Also the way you worded  things was great!

Grow: For grow i just have a question, I forgot, but are you making it out of metal? If it is will it be bend-able medal?

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Glow: I really like the idea of your project, especially if it works with windows too because jammed windows and doors are a major problem everywhere and this problem needs to be addressed.

Grow: Next time, try to be more descriptive on your project so people can understand it better

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Glow: A very creative solution
Grow: The power point could've had more pictures

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Glow: Your product is very useful, safe, easy to use, and it solves an important problem.
Grow: During the second paragraph it was hard to hear you

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That would really come in use when door are jammed!

Grow

What if the invention breaks and the door is jammed eve more

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Glow: This problem makes complete since I completely understand and if I was older or had a dog, probably use this product! I also thought that the wix website was a good idea!

Grow: For the grow I just have some questions, what if the dog is barking and it sounds like there being abused but not? Also would the camera see in-front of the dog or it? And what if the collar falls of and it breaks, will the tracker still work?

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Glow: It was a nice script, and it was spoken quite loudly and clearly! I enjoyed that you did not read off the power-point and was surprised at the ending with the cute thumbs up!
Grow: There was more information on the page that could/should have been read.

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Glow: it makes cooking in the kitchen more safe
Grow: i didn't really get how the indicator worked until Mrs.G asked at the end.

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Glow: it's a very good idea and can help a very big problem.
Grow: you could have explained how it worked just a little better.

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glow -very good!!!!very well put together

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Glow: Love this product. I think it is very helpful. I like how you made it.

Grow: One thing you should improve on is presenting.

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Glow: This is a great idea and I loved your powerpoint.
Grow: I wish that your pitch was more in depth and longer

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Glow: very helpful
Grow: how will it make sure that all the oil is out.

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Glow: this invention is very interesting
Grow: you could maybe simplify of what you have made

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Glow:  The pan is really awesome that could change peoples hands forever! Its so neat how you guys can make this stuff and how you said what the real copy would have been made of that's really smart! I hope you will be on shark tank and make millllionnns of dollars that is just neat.

Grow:  everything is awesome possum.

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Glow: I loved how confidently you guys spoke and I think this product can benefit the world in a big way.

Grow: I think you should have put a better description of what the light does on the handle. Other than that, your presentation was great.

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glow: this was a great idea i couldn't of thought of some thing like this.

grow: a little short but still great

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Glow: I liked the idea of the pan. It was very creative.
Grow: What if you didn't see the red X? I think it should contact the owner of the pan if it has an X on it. Also, I don't think you should put something negative about your group at the end of your presentation.

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Glow: Your presentation was very well done! I also like the idea of your invention! You spoke very clearly and confidently, good job!

Grow: I just have a couple questions, is its target children, because it prevents them from getting burns or adults? Also does it prevent you from getting hurt if you touch the actual sides of the pan?

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Glow: I think that your product is a great idea and would work very well in the future.

Grow: I feel as if you guys were in sync better the presentation would have been a lot better also i feel if you explained the product better i would feel more pressure to buy it.

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Glow: Your product provides prevention for a common cause of injury.

Grow: It would be even better if you were even more enthusiastic.

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Glow: I love the idea and think this should be some thing you create.
Grow: I think you could have more facts.

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Glow: You guys memorized the pitch and it was a great idea. Your presentation was very organized too.
Grow: I didn't really understand when it would notify you. Maybe next time you should explain how it works better.

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Glow: It was presented clearly and the value of the product seems high.
Grow: You never named the price.

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Glow: it is a great idea and i really like it. i also think that it will help with the problem.
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Glow: I think that you spoke very clearly, which was good, and that the invention idea was very creative.
Grow: I think that you could explain the science behind it better, and not read off of the board. Also, how would it attach to the boat?

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Glow: I liked how you guys were very descriptive and this device can solve a very big problem in the world.
Grow: I think you guys could have added more color to your presentation.

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Glow: I think this can solve many problems
Grow: I couldn't understand what Noah was saying-he was mumbling and talking to fast. The presentation was not very colorful or interesting. How Do you get the oil to clump, but the water not get in the storing place?

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Glow:
Great invention. Very helpful for the environment. I think this will really help with water pollution.

Grow:
Noah could be a little more enthusiastic. Otherwise, great invention!

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glow- I think you did very well.

grow- how does it just get oil and not water in the ocean.

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glow: the idea is smart and could help the oceans environment a lot.

grow: you did read the board sometimes, how does it pick up the oil?

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Glow: you're invention will change the ocean
Grow: you could