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I agree to a certain extent that the writer brings the different characters to life as if we where their with them in a coach.The writer uses 3 different ways to bring Mary Yellen to life which are empathy for her, themes to describe her and the weather to reflect her feelings.

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Firstly,The writer brings Mary to life through the theme of innocence. The impression that we are given through Mary's innocence is that she is a Pure saint that has a certain vulnerability to her as she " sat in the opposite corner". Also she too is being affected by the weather.

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I agree with the statement as in the extract the drunken man is brought to life by the writer describing him with the way he creates drama.

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The writer makes the reader feel empathy for Mary as she is trapped on a coach surrounded by loud, obnoxious and invading people. Their is a contrast between the different personalities of the people on the coach as their is a drunken old man who just shouts at the driver "cursing him" and their is also a gluttonous red faced lady who is just sitting their "eating a great hunk of cake". Also the fact that the writer put "Red faced" connotates that the women has a bad past and is unapproachable. The women could also be angry that she is stuck in the situation that she is in. All of these people put together could represent that the storm is both inside and outside of the coach.

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Firslty,

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i agree with this because the writer uses the drunken old man to add humour to the to the journey.

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Secondly,
The writer uses the weather to portray Mary's feelings due to being halted on the way to Jamaica inn. Mary is feeling upset and paranoid due to the rain constantly dripping on her shoulder "cold drips of moisture fell upon her shoulder". This can be interperated as fear creeping in on her vulnerability. this also adds to how we empathize her.

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Firstly, the drunken man is shown as an inconsiderate character as he shouted at the driver  "cursing him" the word cursing could show being hexed by a witch also  it could suggest

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First of all the old man is portrayed as a irresponsible charictor this is shown when the verb "fumbled" to show that he is intoxicated and out of control with his action

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Secondly the writer uses the red faced woman to show greed.
The verb "plunged" makes us feel we are there watching her eat the cake like an animal. the quote "strong white teeth" also symbolizes greed. this shows that she does not want to share.

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You as the reader could image your self in the coach and wanting to smack some sense into the old man

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Further more daphne uses eggateration "high petulant voice" she uses this to show his immaturity. as a reader we found this quite humorous

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Dirtiest night she remembered
red faced women in blue coat
no mistaking it for summer this time

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Mary is feeling upset and paranoid due to the rain constantly dripping on her shoulder "cold drips of moisture fell upon her shoulder". This can be interperated as fear creeping in on her vulnerability. this also adds to how we empathize her.