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As of 12:02 AM, 7/2/18, NO POSTING FOR STEP 4 DRAFT

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As of 12:02 AM, 7/2/18, NO POSTING FOR STEP 4 DRAFT

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As of 11:30 am 6/28/2018, there is no posting for STEP3

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As of 12:12 am 6/25/2018, there is no STEP 2 posting

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As of 12:07 am 6/25/2018, there is no posting for STEP3

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A student will post a draft for STEP 2 by Sun (6/24) along with the draft for STEP 3. The student will be given a feedback on both steps by Tues morning and submit revision on Thurs (6/28)

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As of 2:20 pm 6/21/2018, there is no revision and reflection posting

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As of 6/17/2018 midnight, there was no posting for STEP 2. Deduction of 2.5 points will be applied to STEP 2 grade if a response is posted by the Thurs 6/21 class time deadline.

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I copied and pasted your original posting here as I want to make a note to your posting. Please check on the settings of your padlet and make sure it is open to public and shows me and Dr. Ari added with administrator roles.

As for the content of your STEP 1: I think you did a great job with this first response. You will need to cite sources for some of the statements in your response in order to increase the credibility of your claims. I marked sentences you need citations especially. In order to avoid statements that sound a personal bias, you need to add similar study.research that you claim and use the study as your supportive resources. I noticed you have lots of good information about child health and nutrition so make it sure to add appropriate citations to make your claim valid to others as well. Also, you will need to define your research question. So what is your research question? Make it sure to have your research question simple and succinct.

If you look at my attached file, you will see more about how to improve your draft.

What are some factors that negatively affect child health and nutrition, in children between the ages of six months to nineteen years old?

Childhood health and nutrition
has been negative in United States since 1980’s and now it’s an epidemic in
America (CITATION).
Children’s environment and lifestyle can cause them to have bad eating habits
and bad health(TRY TO
AVIOD A PERSONAL BIAS AND ADD MORE RESEARCH). Lack of nutrition, limited
exercise and playing outside shows in children being physically unhealthy.
Children with bad genetics have a higher risk of developing behavioral issues,
obesity and health issues(AGAIN,
CITATION). Companies who advertise and market junk food to children
contribute to childhood diseases and bad health(CITATION). In United Sates behavioral issues,
obesity, and bad nutrition in young children could be devastating to their
lively hoods. Lack of exercise and playing outside contribute to overweight
children who are very unhealthy with chronic health problems. Health problems
from being overweight in children make them suffer more than average weight
children that aren’t contributed by being unhealthy and obese. High blood
pressure, high cholesterol, cardiovascular disease and type 2 diabetes are some
of the chronic health problems (CITATION). Children with preexisting bad health genetics already
have an overweight issues and bad health makes it very hard to control their
outcome of being unhealthy. Psychological Effects:  bad health, obesity
and behavioral issues is not just a physical problem, but also a psychological
problem; a fact that most people seem to be unaware of. The psychological
effects of bad health, obesity and behavioral issues include lowered
self-esteem, high levels of depression, fear of being disliked by peers (social
discrimination), fear of being bullied (victimization), etc. Things get worse
when all these problems lead to the child acting out with bad behavior, shying
away, avoiding people, and eventually becoming lonely. All of this can even
make the child vulnerable and lead him to alcohol and substance abuse, and
further worsen the problem (Your
assumption? If not, add a citation) More importantly, there are
significant chances of the psychological effects of bad health bad nutrition,
and obesity manifesting into physical effects. A child who is depressed about
the way the people around him make him feel is more likely to implode and end
up doing things like overeating or substance abuse which will further worsen
the condition (citation).
Most of these effects start showing at an early age and have a severe impact on
the whole life of the child.

Bad health, childhood
obesity and behavioral issues can turn into a life-threatening condition in the
long run as the problems will only become severe with growing age. In the
absence of any medical condition, the only way to deal with this problem is to
resort to a healthy lifestyle with a balanced diet and physical activity as its
core components.

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1.	What are some factors that negatively affect child health and nutrition, in children between the ages of six months to nineteen years old?

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1.	What are some factors that negatively affect child health and nutrition, in children between the ages of six months to nineteen years old?

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Childhood health and nutrition has been negative in United States since 1980’s and now it’s an epidemic in America. Children’s environment and lifestyle can cause them to have bad eating habits and bad health. Lack of nutrition, limited exercise and playing outside shows in children being physically unhealthy. Children with bad genetics have a higher risk of developing behavioral issues, obesity and health issues. Companies who advertise and market junk food to children contribute to childhood diseases and bad health. In United Sates behavioral issues, obesity, and bad nutrition in young children could be devastating to their lively hoods. Lack of exercise and playing outside contribute to overweight children who are very unhealthy with chronic health problems. Health problems from being overweight in children make them suffer more than average weight children that aren’t contributed by being unhealthy and obese. High blood pressure, high cholesterol, cardiovascular disease and type 2 diabetes are some of the chronic health problems. Children with preexisting bad health genetics already have an overweight issues and bad health makes it very hard to control their outcome of being unhealthy. Psychological Effects:  bad health, obesity and behavioral issues is not just a physical problem, but also a psychological problem; a fact that most people seem to be unaware of. The psychological effects of bad health, obesity and behavioral issues include lowered self-esteem, high levels of depression, fear of being disliked by peers (social discrimination), fear of being bullied (victimization), etc. Things get worse when all these problems lead to the child acting out with bad behavior, shying away, avoiding people, and eventually becoming lonely. All of this can even make the child vulnerable and lead him to alcohol and substance abuse, and further worsen the problem. More importantly, there are significant chances of the psychological effects of bad health bad nutrition, and obesity manifesting into physical effects. A child who is depressed about the way the people around him make him feel is more likely to implode and end up doing things like overeating or substance abuse which will further worsen the condition. Most of these effects start showing at an early age and have a severe impact on the whole life of the child.
Bad health, childhood obesity and behavioral issues can turn into a life-threatening condition in the long run as the problems will only become severe with growing age. In the absence of any medical condition, the only way to deal with this problem is to resort to a healthy lifestyle with a balanced diet and physical activity as its core components.