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Clear layour of presentation and good presentation skills. Good understanding of article and reasoning of picking it.

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Clear layour of presentation and good presentation skills. Good understanding of article and reasoning of picking it.

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Very concise, it is clear you have a passion for the topic and you can easily reflect it within your setting. Very visually attractive and easy to follow. 

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Very concise, it is clear you have a passion for the topic and you can easily reflect it within your setting. Very visually attractive and easy to follow. 

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It was nice to hear about how you have used some of the findings and applied them to your setting, reflecting on current practice.  

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It was nice to hear about how you have used some of the findings and applied them to your setting, reflecting on current practice.  

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Clear powerpoint. Understood all your points as they were explained clearly and concisely.

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Clear headings and linked to current practice.

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clearly knew what you were talking about and had a clear understanding of your article.

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clearly knew what you were talking about and had a clear understanding of your article.

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Good link to theorists, clear layout and good understanding of the article

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Good link to theorists, clear layout and good understanding of the article

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Interesting reasons for choosing your chosen research article. It's nice to see that you are thinking about the children present in your setting when considering which research article to unpick. It shows you are linking theory to current practice.  

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Interesting reasons for choosing your chosen research article. It's nice to see that you are thinking about the children present in your setting when considering which research article to unpick. It shows you are linking theory to current practice.  

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Clear layout, you've chosen an interesting article which you can reflect into your practice. Great links with theory and practice

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Clear layout, you've chosen an interesting article which you can reflect into your practice. Great links with theory and practice

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Clear understanding on the article and had lots of knowledge on the topic. Good link to theorists.

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you have strong reasons as to why you have chosen the research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article and you were able to clearly show this through your powerpoint.

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you have strong reasons as to why you have chosen the research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article and you were able to clearly show this through your powerpoint.

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Clear layout, using different colours to highlight main points. Good understanding on the article.

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Clear understanding of the article, very detailed presentation and good presentation skills. Well done

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Clear understanding of the article, very detailed presentation and good presentation skills. Well done

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Very detailed. Interesting link to footballers being bad role models as often they are seen as good role models to young boys. Very interesting points that have made me rethink about the use of male role models in settings and thinking about their characterisitics rather than them just being males. Clearly know what your article is about. 

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Very detailed. Interesting link to footballers being bad role models as often they are seen as good role models to young boys. Very interesting points that have made me rethink about the use of male role models in settings and thinking about their characterisitics rather than them just being males. Clearly know what your article is about. 

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Brilliant presentational skills, it is clear that you have carried out lots of research on the article and understand it. You clearly have a passion for the topic and can easily reflect it into your setting. It is a really interesting article and I think you can expand and analyse it a lot. 

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Brilliant presentational skills, it is clear that you have carried out lots of research on the article and understand it. You clearly have a passion for the topic and can easily reflect it into your setting. It is a really interesting article and I think you can expand and analyse it a lot. 

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A good understanding of the research article was demonstrated. Also, you made good comparisons with previous studies which gave more weight to the findings.   

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A good understanding of the research article was demonstrated. Also, you made good comparisons with previous studies which gave more weight to the findings.   

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clear understanding of your research article, and linking it to your practice 

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clear understanding of your research article, and linking it to your practice 

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Good presentation skills and understanding of the article

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Good presentation skills and understanding of the article

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Really interesting topic that you have chosen to talk about. Clear presentation and results given

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Really interesting topic that you have chosen to talk about. Clear presentation and results given

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Interesting topic, clear layout. It is a topic which you can relate to your setting

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Interesting topic, clear layout. It is a topic which you can relate to your setting

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clear reasons as to why you have chosen this research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article.

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clear reasons as to why you have chosen this research article, you also have a clear understanding of the research article.

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You have critically evaluated the research article, showing a very good understanding of the importance of  critical analysis in your writing.      

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You have critically evaluated the research article, showing a very good understanding of the importance of  critical analysis in your writing.      

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good link to your practice in the introduction. Clear findings and results. Clear to see that you have spent time researching and finding information 

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good link to your practice in the introduction. Clear findings and results. Clear to see that you have spent time researching and finding information 

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Good reasoning to why you have picked the article, a good detailed presentation and good visuals

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Good reasoning to why you have picked the article, a good detailed presentation and good visuals

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Lovely layout and clear headings. Good link to practice throughout.

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clear understanding of the research article, and a good understanding of the methods used within the research.

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clear understanding of the research article, and a good understanding of the methods used within the research.

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The methodologies used are clearly presented as are the results and findings. 

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The methodologies used are clearly presented as are the results and findings. 

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Interesting topic you have chosen. Interesting findings about boys being favoured over girls when teachers created literacy activities. Clear powerpoint and good points that you have made. 

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Interesting topic you have chosen. Interesting findings about boys being favoured over girls when teachers created literacy activities. Clear powerpoint and good points that you have made. 

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Clear layout of presentation and good presentation skills. Great understanding of article.

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Interesting topic chosen which you can clearly relate to practice. It is clear you understand the topic. 

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Interesting topic chosen which you can clearly relate to practice. It is clear you understand the topic. 

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I like the way your points are brief and relevant,  not going into too much detail. 

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I like the way your points are brief and relevant,  not going into too much detail. 

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Shannon - good , remember to refer to it as Research or research article.You have made some links with the benefits of outdoor play but need to extend this further with links to sources. Compare findings with wider research and discuss the usefulness of the methods chosen. well done - a very good start. Jenny 

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Shannon - good , remember to refer to it as Research or research article.You have made some links with the benefits of outdoor play but need to extend this further with links to sources. Compare findings with wider research and discuss the usefulness of the methods chosen. well done - a very good start. Jenny 

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Rosa -  Well done - a very good startplease remember to add when the research took place. Useful to also mention the gov preoccupation with underachievement as well as the importance of outdoor play in your introduction. Comment on the children who showed no signs of improvement and perhaps the missed opportunities to explore this within the article. Develop your critiquing!

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Rosa -  Well done - a very good startplease remember to add when the research took place. Useful to also mention the gov preoccupation with underachievement as well as the importance of outdoor play in your introduction. Comment on the children who showed no signs of improvement and perhaps the missed opportunities to explore this within the article. Develop your critiquing!

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Well done Eileen, some very good levels of reflection here and use of language to provide an interesting discussion. Wider issues opened up well too. You could also discuss the benefits of a longitudinal study and comment further on how findings are presented.

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Well done Eileen, some very good levels of reflection here and use of language to provide an interesting discussion. Wider issues opened up well too. You could also discuss the benefits of a longitudinal study and comment further on how findings are presented.

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Well done Georgia, well presented with good knowledge of your research article. You could make further links with the early learning goals for literacy and the importance of speaking and listening skills within early years in your introduction when you reflect on the relevance of this research article. Also , critique the effectiveness of carrying out an experiment and using controlled measures.

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Well done Georgia, well presented with good knowledge of your research article. You could make further links with the early learning goals for literacy and the importance of speaking and listening skills within early years in your introduction when you reflect on the relevance of this research article. Also , critique the effectiveness of carrying out an experiment and using controlled measures.

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Well done Jasmine, well presented with already a good amount of analysis. You have added some interesting reflections and links to wider concerns. Explore further why a 2 week time frame may affect validity of findings as you rightly explain that there may be a huge variance. Also explain the rational for testing mothers' BMI .

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Well done Jasmine, well presented with already a good amount of analysis. You have added some interesting reflections and links to wider concerns. Explore further why a 2 week time frame may affect validity of findings as you rightly explain that there may be a huge variance. Also explain the rational for testing mothers' BMI .

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Well done Danielle , you have presented you ideas carefully and have chosen a suitable research article. I would make more of the large literature review section - summarising some of the key ideas and why this is useful. toy have presented a good overview of methods but need to critique their valuableness further. t

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Well done Danielle , you have presented you ideas carefully and have chosen a suitable research article. I would make more of the large literature review section - summarising some of the key ideas and why this is useful. toy have presented a good overview of methods but need to critique their valuableness further. t