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add more talking, more detail, and make it longer

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add more talking and more feeling

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add more character

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detail place

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i need more writing and detail about my setting and about my character.

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add more dialoge

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i guess i need to change the lead and topic?

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i need more detail about my character

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more dialogue

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some words

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more motion, and some more ! at the end of sentences

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putting more detail

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derek

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I will add more emotions and more details such as how tall it is or how short it is

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i will put more detail

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I will a more deti .

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I'm going to add more details in my story. I'm not done yet :(

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I think i should add detail about what the boat looked like itself.

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put more detiles in the story and  use more emoites

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I think i will add more details and more detail to where they are and whats around them. (i didn't have time share my story so i didn't get any advise)

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I will add more details and I am going to make corrections if needed

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i will add more in beetween i will put what happend on a boat

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I'm going to ad a beater tidal and introduction

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i'm going to add more sentences to my drafts like on some of my summaries to make things go faster so i'm going to STREECH out some of those

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I will add more detail and more info about what is happening

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Taggart I will add more detail about  Dustin Goons house, I could add how big or small Dustin's house is or I could also add if his house is messy or clean.