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제목에 학번,이름을 쓰고

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제목에 학번,이름을 쓰고

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자기가 쓴 초안 문장 중 피드백 받고 싶은 한 문장만 여기에 작성합니다.

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1. 여기에 한 문장이라도 올려야 1점을 받아갈 수 있습니다.
2. 기간을 지켜주세요. 10.17(월)까지
3. 이 외에 다른 문장 피드백을 받고 싶으면 선생님을 찾아오세요. <쉬는시간/점심시간, 2학년교무실>

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The scene where a tree that serves as a chair for a grandfatherly child

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After I read the book, I realized that it is important to try to overcome no matter how difficult the situation is.

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If I could change the story, I would change to arriving three seconds later than the time that Fogg had to arrive.

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After I read the book, I realized that I wanted to emulate Anne trying to do her best in the present moment and I was comforted by every word she said.

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The scene where slogans of the animal farm turns unreasonable was impressive because it seems to summarize the contents of the book.

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The scene where Caleb burst into tears when Sarah, not the real mother, went out town and came back late was very impressive because they tried so that they could be a real family.

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It's very impressive because although Alley had dyslexia she thought it's was not a big deal.

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After I read the book, I realized that I need to live without fault that I'll regret.

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< so that 구문 활용 > 아무리 생각해도 어색해서..
"How did you feel Gulliver came to you so that he can be a undead(people)"
말하고자 하는바- 걸리버가 죽지 않는 사람이 되기위해 당신들에게 왔을때, 당신들의 기분은 어떠하였나요?

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The scene where the gatekeeper can't distinguish the prince from the beggar and drives out the bigger prince was very impressive because I wondered how much they didn't recognize me when i looked the same

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The scene where the little prince left to return to his planet was very impressive because I interpret as the little prince was intentionally bitten by a snake so that his soul could return to its own planet.

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The scene where the old man said "it's silly not to hope. it is sin, he thought was impressive because it made me feel hopeful

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Lastly, I want to tell Nemo this: "In Latin Nemo means non-exisitent and I think the writer made you so that you were a fiction from the beginning.

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Nero left Flanders in the mill so that he saved his dog

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The scene where silver betrays Jim's party
was very impressive because Silver,the chef,betrayed me so that he could get the treasure

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The scene where the tree asks the boy to bring his fruit and sell it.

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the scen where the boy grew up and came to visit the tree and asked the tree to play with him like before but the boy refused it so that he could work because l thought the tree wouldbe disappointed at what he said

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Was very impressive because it is similar to real parents to not care about themselves, hoping that the main character will continue to do well

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If I could change the story, I could write about what would have happened if O'Brien had been a real Winston comrade and not a spy for Winston.

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Lastly, I want to tall OVE this : " I used to tickle you, but wanted to tell you that I was good person."

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The scene where an old man was injured but he didn't give up so that he could catch huge fish was very impressive because he did not get frustrated even in all the moments of crisis, but rather tried to fight them with hope.

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A boy is old and resting in a tree with only his bottom left.