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What actionable feedback could you give Student #1?  

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What actionable feedback could you give Student #1?  

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You might want to use this framework:
I noticed ...
I wish ...
I wonder ...

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Here is Student #2's work.  What actionable feedback could you give to Student #2?

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Here is Student #2's work.  What actionable feedback could you give to Student #2?

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You might want to use this framework:
I noticed...
I wish...
I wonder...

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Add more legs to make your drawing more proportional to a real dog. I've seen from previous assignments that you are able to draw details and I know you can be successful.

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It really looks like a dog. Good job!

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I noticed that you drew two of the dog's legs. Make sure to include all four legs so that we can have a realistic looking dog. I have seen you draw some very life-like animals in the past and I know you can do that again.

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I noticed that you drew two of the dog's legs. Make sure to include all four legs so that we can have a realistic looking dog. I have seen you draw some very life-like animals in the past and I know you can do that again.

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I noticed your dog has a human-looking mouth; take another look at the picture and try drawing a muzzle instead. Add two legs. I noticed your dog's coat has two colors. That shows depth and sophisticated coloring.

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I noticed that you used grey detail in the body to add texture. I wonder how more of that texture can be used so that the drawing meets standard for detail.

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Your drawing is proportional and has the shape of real dogs. I wonder what is happening in the background? Reread the rubric and provide the contrasting background.

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The red is very red! Good job

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Good effort.

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Change your proportions on your dog's legs so that they are more realistic, you could give them knees.

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Change your proportions on your dog's legs so that they are more realistic, you could give them knees.