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The Journey to Finca Commune (Emily - please ignore the other summary)

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The Journey to Finca Commune (Emily - please ignore the other summary)

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Seeking adventures, Tom Hudson is on a journey to Finca Commune, a small village south of Lima to be a volunteer.

When he arrived, the place was seemingly unpleasant regarding their living conditions: the walls of Tom’s room were covered with peeling paint and graffiti, and the windows were also coverless. But despite these facts, he still had a great time.

“Show the world a better way” was the admired saying of the Commune; which in every two weeks, Tom and his team were given the task of cleaning the public dishwasher. Although their job seemed obnoxious, it was still fun because of how they would play water fight by hosing each other down.

A particular favourite activity of Tom is working on the farm. With the guidance of the residents there, he was able to learn their ways of producing healthy crops. In their free time, Tom and his team would go swimming and play football, where they even organized tournaments.

When it was about the end of Tom’s journey, four people from his team decided to make one last trip to Machu Picchu. But because of their great camaraderie, annual global trips were agreed upon Tom and his team.
Last year, they met in London and their next stop is Tokyo.

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Tom Hudson backpacked around the world, he did several jobs in different places, and he volunteered to the Finca Commune. The room was very old and broken, but he soon enjoyed being part of the team. The team was very international and they did not have common language, at first they were not very familiar to each other, but soon they built friendships. The motto of the commune was"Show the world a better way" which I think it means to discover and enjoy the beauty of the world. They did every thing together, fun and united. They changed the cleaning of dishwasher into a big water play, and Tom's favorite experience was working on the organic farm. They played football and swam in the free time. They traveled in the Inca trail, Machu Picchu and the south of Lima. They still meet up in different places once a year.

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The whole article is written about a student and his team went to Finca commune in the south of Lima ,Perú and helped the community. For example, they made the water clean.
First, the student who is called Tom Hudson is very helpful and adventurous and he has lots of curiosity in doing voluntary work. Second, the writer worte about the issues they met while they were helping the communities such as they didn’t have common language.
As we can know

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SUMMARY:
Tom Hudson,he stared a new life after graduated from university. On the way of his adventures, he have got a lot of helps, from any people. For his frist experience, he went to chamber which is messy, the wall are covered in grattifi. Fortunately they don't have to stay too long. In addition, the volunteers are facing another problem: the languge, they have different nationalities. However, they solve the problem, the motto of the organization is: show the world a better way. And they did it. They did everthing with their teammates, they having fun, swimming, playing football. All in all, when they met the difficulty, they overcome it, when they met sth. interesting called their teammates. They just living like what Tom said in the end:once you have tried it, you will not want to leave.

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Kevin Zeng
summery：The ,article is about the trip of Tom Hudson, he worked as a volunteer during the trip, when he first arrived at the place he would live, he was not very satisfied ,not only because of the space ,but the graffiti out of the window affected him a bit ,he could not get used to this condition very quickly. However ,soon he changed his attitude because he knew that the room would be decorated in the near future ,also the room is the place for sleeping, so the conditional problem is not so essential , then he put all of the attention on the voluntary work.It could difficult to communicate with his team partners ,because of the trouble of language, but after they have known each other ,they built the friendship successfully, and their experience showed the communes’ motto “Show the world a better way” very well. Tom enjoy working in the farm and he has learnt a lot of knowledge about agriculture .Then ,it was the time for traveling.

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Tom Hudson decided to spend a year to back pack after the university. His friend advice him to go to place called Finca Commune, he enjoyed the place very much.Although the place is relatively simple, but only for sleeping. the biggest problem their facing is the language problems

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Tom Hudson decided to spend a year out after university to backpack around the world. The most memorable place in his trip is the experience in Peru Lima, which is the place that introduced by a Texan farmer that Tom used to work to. Although he fully immersed in the local community eventually, he was still uncomfortable with the environment at first. Some of his daunting experiences were living in a shabby house, cleaning dishwasher, and lacking privacy. Although there were some bad experiences, He eventually resolved those problems. Besides bad experiences, there were still some good experiences. For instance, worked on the organic farm, played football, and swimming. Generally, although there were some difficulties, he overcame them and undergo some unalienable experiences. As Tom said: Once you have tried it, you will not want to leave.

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Tom Hudson's Amazing Journey
A young man named Tom Hudson travelled to south after his preparations. He worked as a odd job man along the way and finally stayed in Peru because he found an amazing ancient crowd, we called them Finca Commune.
They did a lot of research their and also they helped this old crowd a lot. Though there are some works are truly disgusting

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Tom Hudson spent a year out of the university to traveled around the world. After he worked as a waiter, he went to the south and start his first trip.
When he first went to the place where he lived, he was very worried about the graffiti covered on the wall, and there are nothing covered on the window. But he soon don't worried about it because found out that they just spent a little time in the room. About his team, the biggest problem is language, however, camaraderie solve this problem. The motto of the team is called "show the world a better way". So although they are afraid of cleaning the dirty water, but they soon overcome it and began a water play, so they are really enjoy in cleaning the water. In his free time, he went swimming, played football and tournament with his teammate. After this trip, their trip is not over, they will met each others at Inca trails, Machu, Picchu......And in the next year, they will meet each others at Tokyo.

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Tom Hudson spent a year backpacking around the world after college. After working as a waiter in New York, he headed south. Everywhere he went, he wrote about his adventures. He was so popular that people gave him a generous reception and let him work as a part-time warehouse worker for two weeks. As he wanted to follow the Inca trail, he decided to stay in Peru for a few days , but ended up staying much longer than he had planned. After that, he went on a journey with some people, they are a very international team, so their biggest problem is the language communication between the group members. Working on a farm is the author's favorite job, but fertilizing is a difficult job for him. Even though they spend time together as a team, they spend the rest of their time swimming and playing football together. After that, they will go out on a date and meet again next year in Tokyo.

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Tom Hudson, who backpacked around the world for a year, intended in Finca Commune as a volunteer. When he first got into the accommodation, he was really worried about the graffiti walls, the window without any coverings and especially the lack of privacy. However, he found that he enjoyed being a member of the commune. The team had a motto of “Show the world a better way” which I think means to improve something. Even if they had trouble communicating, they did as the motto says and had great fun in cleaning the dishwasher! Although the smell was terrible and water was everywhere, they enjoyed the play of getting others wet with pipes. When they were free, almost every day, they swam and played football together. After in Finca Commune, they travelled to Machu Picchu and they are still can come across to each other.

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Seeking adventures, Tom Hudson left his old New York life behind and started South to Lima. On the way, he decided to make a temporary stay at Peru and that was where he began his journey: in a village called Finca Commune.
For a first impression, his room for the nights didn't seem very pleasing; the walls were covered with peeling paint and graffiti, and the windows were coverless. But thanks to the activeness of this community, he won't need his room too often.
In a lot of ways, Tom also got to engage with the locos despite having some difficulty with communication. "Show the world a better way" was the admired saying of this Commune.

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After Tom Hudson worked as a waiter, he began to travel around the world. A Texan farmer provided  him a job which he need to work for two weeks. He really thanks for the men who introduced him to Finca Commune when he was pretty desperate. As a volunteer, he was provided with something necessary to survive. The walls were the things that worried him, they were covered in graffiti and there weren’t any coverings at the windows. However, he realized something, what was the rooms were the enjoyed part of the team even though they only spent a little time in there rooms. The biggest problem is the language problems, team members were aloofness at the beginning. However, the camaraderie solved the problem. The motto is “show the world a better way.” and they made it. Cleaning the dishwasher was a fun thing, his team made a big water play time. They often went swimming and played football in their spare time together. The trip is continuing, all of them are going to meet each others in every single trip, Inca Trail, Machu Picchu, London, Tokyo...

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the paragraph show how Tom Hudson who used to be a waiter in New York and his team go around the world  with his record. It use the first expression to bring the reader directly into the story.
we live in a small house which covered many graffiti on the wall in Finca Commune. They did some redecoration to the room here. They thought this trip was an excited activity.
the biggest problem for them is that there language are different.
dishwasher
motto-"show the world a better way"
sport-swimming, play football

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Tom Hudson decided to stay in Peru for a while, but things didn't go with his way. Because he said he couldn't leave after he'd stay there. However, he still enjoyed the time he spent in Finca Commune as a volunteer. They would do àctivities for the entire day, except for the resting time, which is the reason why the writer said they didn't spend any time in rooms. He worked with a very international group, a group with different kinds of people causing the problem of lack in common languages. But this would not affect the relationship between them, as time went by, members that remained aloof started to show their camaraderie, so they did many activities together. For example, they worked on organic farms together, played football matches as a team, and cleaned the dishwasher together. Even though it's tired to do the cleaning work, and the water would go everywhere, the moment they treated as a big water party is memorable. They also created a motto, "Show the world a better way" meaning to tell people that our world is beautiful and worth to make it better by helping people in need.