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I liked when you wrote that you would buy a zoo with the $600 million.

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I liked when you wrote that you would buy a zoo with the $600 million.

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Cody, I thought you did a nice job with your paragraph by giving detailed examples of what you would do with $600 million. Thank you for also including a topic sentence and conclusion sentence. 

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Cody, I thought you did a nice job with your paragraph by giving detailed examples of what you would do with $600 million. Thank you for also including a topic sentence and conclusion sentence. 

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I really enjoyed your paragraph. Your star ideas were very interesting. You helped support them with some great details. Now I want a Rolls truck. 

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I really enjoyed your paragraph. Your star ideas were very interesting. You helped support them with some great details. Now I want a Rolls truck. 

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grate job king cody aka Lord Cody aka cody mac aka cmoney with the car

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grate job king cody aka Lord Cody aka cody mac aka cmoney with the car

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I liked how you said you will make your own house

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I liked how you said you will make your own house

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the holl of nice theing

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Nice and job with your punctuation and waiting on my hellcat red eye 

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Nice and job with your punctuation and waiting on my hellcat red eye 

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good job on your paragraph jack when you said you sell my 2 cars to Cody and Mario 

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good job on your paragraph jack when you said you sell my 2 cars to Cody and Mario 

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Jack, I liked when you wrote that you would buy a house in the Philippines, specifically in Legazpi! So cool!

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Jack, I liked when you wrote that you would buy a house in the Philippines, specifically in Legazpi! So cool!

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Great job with your paragraph.  You did a a wonderful job using transitions between your star ideas. I really loved how you thought of your friends when you considered what you were going to buy with your money. 

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Great job with your paragraph.  You did a a wonderful job using transitions between your star ideas. I really loved how you thought of your friends when you considered what you were going to buy with your money. 

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very very cool msr jack

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Great job on writing both an introductory and body paragraph. Your star ideas were very original and well supported with detail sentences. It was very nice of you to think about your family.

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Sydney, great job challenging yourself with writing more than one paragraph. I liked when you wrote that you would buy a pet for your grandmother because she is lonely at home <3

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Sydney, great job challenging yourself with writing more than one paragraph. I liked when you wrote that you would buy a pet for your grandmother because she is lonely at home <3

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I like the sound of the game show I feel like it's a really good idea Nice job tag

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I like the sound of the game show I feel like it's a really good idea Nice job tag

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I really enjoyed paragraph. It was very interesting to hear where you thought you would be in 20 years. I hope it isn't as anti-climatic or stressful as you predict. Great job with your descriptive words. Your star ideas were very well thought out, and you also used transition words which is awesome. Keep up the good work.

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Tag, you did a nice job perserveing through this paragraph. You didn't give up and came up with a very interesting writing with very robust vocabulary words (anticlimactic) and strong star ideas with details! 

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Tag, you did a nice job perserveing through this paragraph. You didn't give up and came up with a very interesting writing with very robust vocabulary words (anticlimactic) and strong star ideas with details! 

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Mario, you're more of a country person! I did not know that. 

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Mario, you're more of a country person! I did not know that. 

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Nice job with your paragraph. I liked when you wrote about the cars, the house and being specific! 

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Nice job with your paragraph. I liked when you wrote about the cars, the house and being specific! 

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Mario, you had nice supporting details with your star ideas. Your life seems like it'll be really interesting in 20 years! 

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Mario, you had nice supporting details with your star ideas. Your life seems like it'll be really interesting in 20 years! 

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I really enjoyed reading about where you thought you would be in 20 years. I think its great to want to build things with your hands. Having those skills is invaluable. You did a great job coming up with star ideas and supporting them with detail sentences. You also correctly wrote your topic and conclusion sentences. Great job!