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I think you include more writing. Otherwise I think ⭐⭐⭐.

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Either ⭐⭐⭐ Or ⭐⭐⭐⭐ I like how you ended your sentence saying, "In conclusion, I would like to schools to start at regular times"

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I like it but not everyone doesn't like long books but otherwise i like it

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Your essay has more than two reasons and a good opening ,but I would like it if it was longer and but it is not clear because it has no paragraphs
I would rate it **

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Nice work Abena

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like it but it didn't purswaed me

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i like your title and the punctuation

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nice abena! you might want to add what IDR means.

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Justin. Either a **** or ***** I saw a grammar mistake, but I like the idea. Also what if your a person who likes long books, if the book is really short then you might feel unhappy that it ended and you can't read anymore. It's pursuading but I would read a chapter book. Nice persuasive essay~!~

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Justin. Either a **** or ***** I saw a grammar mistake, but I like the idea. Also what if your a person who likes long books, if the book is really short then you might feel unhappy that it ended and you can't read anymore. It's pursuading but I would read a chapter book. Nice persuasive essay~!~

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Great job Abena!

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where it says it will effect them not the next generation it is kind of confusing

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I like how you gave a very good reason saying you are a student so you had this before

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Good reasons, I agree with you.
Nice work Scarlett,  just make sure you spell correctly and capitalization is capitalize

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i think that you do a good job on your reasons

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⭐⭐⭐⭐! I like how you included information why you think dogs are the best pets!

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I like it but I think you should add what IDR means

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scarlett borger i think you did a good job on your reasons

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scarlett borger i think you did a good job on your reasons

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nice reasons i like how you included how people can loose there jobs

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that was awesome kyle you did persuade me to think kids can be presedent i give you 4 stars haylee

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that was awesome kyle you did persuade me to think kids can be presedent i give you 4 stars haylee

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I like how you perswayed the reader  at the end of the book

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I really like it safa

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you did a good job stating your reasons
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I thin

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Abena.

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i think your story was convincing
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nice title scarlett! try to make it longer.

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Love it :D

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It was littel persuasive

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**** stars. I saw many grammar mistakes and places that should have commas and periods. It was persuading though and I was persuaded. Nice persuasive essay~!~

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I like the story , but it has less than 2 reasons , I would like if you had more . I would rate it ****

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i think you could make it more perswasive
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Great spelling Rishik

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i argee  that was very

Persuasive

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i agree with haylee your reasons were great
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that was very good but can you make it a little longer?

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I LOVE IT ADHVAITA! 10 out of 10! from Abena.

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I LOVE IT ADHVAITA! 10 out of 10! from Abena.

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Daniel very cool topic Kyle I love your Ideas about your story. 

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Daniel very cool topic Kyle I love your Ideas about your story. 

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Whitney I like how you added what happens if school started later

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Whitney I like how you added what happens if school started later

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from Abena.

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thanks for the feedback evrybody but make sure you tell me who you are

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Abena.

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super topic kyle!

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Thanks for the feedback everyone but make sure your putting your names in the notes.

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Nice work Adhvaita just make sure there is not any reasons in the opening

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i thought that was awesome and I WANT MY CANDY so i agree

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Good job kyle thats really funny I enjoyed it

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thanks

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Great work on why people should stop littering

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the first page and the second one have different fonts

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I like it , but make sure not to put reasons in the opening !
I would rate it ***

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Nice! I would rate it ⭐⭐⭐. I know adults that are presidents sometimes make bad decisions but , we're kids. Kids probably make just as many if not more mistakes than adults.

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Cool!

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you can put my stars right on this message

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I agree with your persuasive.

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Ruby: i think you should explain why dogs help people with disability's

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Ruby: i think you should explain why dogs help people with disability's

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I agree with you will I think people should have some exercise every day

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you did a good job I like how you mention the black and white eggs

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I totally agree with you! One of my ideas was also to write about that, and I did! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 5 stars!

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i think your story is awesome it realy persuaded me

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I like the essay a lot , the only confusion I have is when you " I think what matters are the differences on the outside " I think you meant " I think what matters are the differences on the inside " but I like it a lot i would rate it ***** because i think the same

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Great Eric, I agree school should start later so we can have more sleep and be more active

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you didnt really pursuay me can you ad a little more like how the can't learn

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****, there are not many reasons onto why parents should not eat kids candy but other than that its good

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I like how you put some different dog breeds and maybe you could take out the part were you say "in my opinion, you should get a golden retriever because I lived with one and I think some people won't like it because it sheds and its big

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I think you should add more reasons why we need more breaks in school.

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I agree kids should be presidents too.

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I like your witting but go and double check you spacing but other then that great work!

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like your essay a lot it's very clear

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***** or 4.90. It was awesome, I enjoyed reading who you should get a dog

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Maybe at the end of the essay you could write I hope otherwise amazing job

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Safa great work, I agree we should have screen that don't hurt our eyes because it is already so bad to have glasses

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i think you did a great job this convinced me in a hot second and you had many good reasons to back up your oppion

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I think it's pretty good! Great job Safa. *****5 stars*****

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I have a lot of opinions on the essay . First you did not add more than 2 reasons on your essay . Second there is no closing to wrap up the essay . Third your opening is no that convining . I would rate it **

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From Abena. 5 stars *****

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I agree not to judge them by their skin. It isn't very nice at all

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I think you should add punctuation to your "I" and put punctuation where your sentences are stopping, but good story Scarlett!

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I like your witting is nice and detail.

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That is not that much information, Jason. You need your 2 paragraphs of why you think school should have more breaks and your closing. So I'm not really convinced

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I Ilike your essay but I think you should add more dogs lifstyles .
I would rate it ***

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you are a good writer i like your sentences and think your essay is perwsasive heres your score
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Abena: I like it but same thing as Colton it did'nt pursuay me either so I guess.... 3 stars *** sorry Eric. :(

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Abena: I like it but same thing as Colton it did'nt pursuay me either so I guess.... 3 stars *** sorry Eric. :(

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I love you topic I totally agree with you to get a dog

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WOW,Colton that was amazing.   It was very persuasive.

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i think you did your best but could of done a little better. because you did not have many reasons and i was not perwadid and i did not understand the essay but heres a three ***

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The puncuation is pretty good! Also I agree with your persuasive writing!

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4 stars, but i cant read some of the text.

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I think you should make it a little bit more persuasive

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thats amazing you defenetly pursyaded me

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Amazing kyle I thought it was super funny

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Aww thanks guys !

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I like the essay a lot but I would remove the pictures because i can't read it . i rate it ***

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GREAT JOB you did amazing safa just make sure that every sentence after a period starts with a capatalized letter otherwise this is awsome here ya go
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i like it. l like the last slide when there's all the picture of guni pigs

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Great will Everyone should at least do some exercise

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Yes, we need to be president.

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nice job justin

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you really pursyade me