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was very decriptive and the paragraph was intriguing. could have linked it back to the original point

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really good use of techniques and language. only to link back to the main point.

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very good paragraph structure

could improve on mentioning the book more

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A long point sentence, however every other point was written succinctly and really well :)

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Positive :) - Strong link between the novel and the advertisement displaying the direct message trying to be brought across.

One thing to work on:  use of punctuation and sentence structure. There were minimal full stops and repetitive language.

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my partner did well listing down the different persuasive techniques, but didn't expand on the techniques nor did he have any structure. And he wrote 2 setences.

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Very descriptive paragraph which points out many techniques and links back to the book, could condense it more

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My partner did well by using persuasive techniques and listing down different types of rhetorical questions he also didn't write much.

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Really good explanation of what happens in the book. Remember to actually link back to your idea.

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good linking of techniques, link sentence was a bit boring and generic

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Good use of descriptive language make sure a point and link sentence are added

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Good use of descriptive language make sure a point and link sentence are added

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Jaiden's Peel paragraph was probably (I guess) amazing until it got deleted by his evil computer. This ruined Jaiden's life but at least Khalid got to relax.

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The paragraph constructively conveyed the harmful message present in the advertisement. However, it may have been more effective if they linked it to the book more.

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It should have more points and information. They should also go further into depth about their point.

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Very well structured PEEL paragraph with an interesting idea of a salient image. Could have added a link sentence at the end.

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Something my partner did well in is critizing the advertisement and finding points. However, they could improve on stating their point slightly earlier.

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The point about the positioning of the man in the milk ad is again one. You could however have added a bit more information about the slogan.

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Discusses and describes the image very well and makes a connection to the book. Very good if it was finished.

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Interesting and descriptive introduction.
could possible have mentioned 'the Uglies' more

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Had good linking, but needs to be more depth with the techniques.

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should probably describe and tell more about the message and the theme in the book

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should probably describe and tell more about the message and the theme in the book

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Good paragraph and descriptive but should have added techniques.

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One of the many things my partner did really well is looking into the poster with lots of depth. They made sure to look into the poster with lots of detail. Something they could work on is developing a little more structure and formality.

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Good - Paragraph Structure
Improve - Explaining things in more detail
(Not 100% sure)