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descriptive FEEDBACK. Targets : use more punc properly , not enough words , ambitious words needed

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Narrative feedback targets: use punc properly, plot problems , more description

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i couldve made the plot more realistic here and i did in the second draft I have developed creating by creating a very intruiging lpot anf lots of description

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I couldve made it longer and done tip top pragraphs. I devolped hard working as i had to describe aalot with a small image and had to think about waht to write

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i had developed analysing as i had to analyse the poem and try to back a staement i made about the poem by looking through the poema nd using lines and analying them to see techniques and more

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CFU. I developed analysing because i had to analyse the script and find hidden meanings

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this was during our Romeo and Juliet topic and was during term 1