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I enjoy reading the poem because it reminds me of my lovely home where I feel the most safest and comfortable. It portrays out how much unconditional love and support I feel when at home. It is indeed a snug haven for him to grow up. This is highlighted through a simile that portrays out the speaker’s mother’s affection for him. His mother waking him up in the morning, preparing breakfast as “eggs shaped like hearts.” His home is like a cosy place where he feels a sense of security and warmth. Therefore, the speaker’s home is like a paradise where he can complete his homework peacefully and relax afterwards.

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Point: Yes, we enjoyed reading the poem because it has a sense of nostalgia.
EDA: In the poem, the home is described to the poet as “Home is my best friend, my partner, my all”In this quote, the home is being personified. this can be seen from “my best friend, my partner, my all”Which means that the author’s home is everything to him which resonates with me
link:therefore, i enjoyed reading Childhood Home

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Yes we enjoy reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh as the quote “home is my best friend,my partner,my all” resonates with us as it personifies home as something extremely important to us .why the poem resonates with us is because home is where we live and return to every day it also is where many memories good or bad occured during our time staying there.These reasons are why this quote resonates with us.

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We enjoyed reading Childhood Home as the rhymes make the poem very nice and interesting to write. The metaphor ‘Morning is Love’ let’s us think about the poem more deeply. I can relate to it as I love the mornings on the weekends when we eat breakfast together.
The personification of the home in the line ‘Home is my best friend, my partner, my all’ resonates with her  a lot as her home is also her best friend as it is where she lives and does everything. Therefore, we like this poem because it is nice to read, heartwarming and resonates with us.

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Yes we enjoyed reading the poem Childhood home by Tara Kunesh. A quote from the poem is “though distance and Time have claimed it from me” The literary device used in this line is personification. The personification is used to make the house feel like a person. I also think that Tara wants to tell us how much she misses home. Therefore I enjoyed reading this poem childhood home by tara kunesh.

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P: I enjoyed reading the poem.
E, D: Morning is love means quality time spent with family. This home lives within a memory means that the writer has many memories of his childhood home. My room is a picture which stays in my head means that the writer clearly remembers how is room looks like. Home is my best friend is a personification which means that he loves it a lot and knows it very well.
A: This shows the writer’s childhood home is very important to him.
L: Therefore I enjoyed reading the poem.

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I enjoyed reading the poem because I found it touching that the author wrote a poem about her childhood home. Her childhood also seemed to be full of love and happiness.
To the poet, morning is love and her mother would bid her arise every morning. Her home was also her best friend, her partner, and her all.
The poet also used the metaphor or “my room is a picture”.
It showed that the picture of her room is still stuck in her memories, and she misses it.
Therefore, she still loves and misses her childhood home deeply and made many happy memories there.

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Question:Did you enjoy reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh

P: I enjoyed reading Childhood Home because I can relate to the poem as my Childhood Home is filled with warmth and comfort just like the Childhood home described in the poem
D,A,E: The metaphor “The sun barely risen looks down with a smile”, depicts the idea of warmth and life in the Childhood Home described in the poem. The personification “ Home is my best friend, my partner, my all,” it represents the importance of the Childhood Home to the author.
L: Hence, I enjoyed reading Childhood Home as I relate to it because the poet home is a pleasant, warmth and comforting which causes the poet to value childhood home just like me.

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We both enjoyed the poem as first of all, it reminds us of our childhood home and the comfortable and safe feeling while we are at home.
Second, it is able to express our feelings from the environment that we see in the house and lastly, it shows the overwhelming happiness we have when we are in the house.
The other evidence is that when the poet said “ morning is love when mom bids me alive, this indicates the love that the poet has for the house. This is a metaphor and this certain metaphor  expresses the feeling that we have towards the house as soothing as we spend quality time with our family and the humble house while we have our scrumptious breakfast.

Therefore, I enjoyed reading childhood home.

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I enjoyed ‘childhood home’ as it was very sweet. “My home is my friend, my partner, my home” expresses how attached she is to her home. I can understand that because we had a lot of great memories of our early days there. The poet loves her home so much, she has gone through so much blood, sweat and tears to write this poem for her home. That makes me feel so emotional. Therefore, I enjoyed ‘childhood home’.

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We enjoyed reading childhood home by Tara Kunesh because it makes me reminisce my times as a child at home, spending my time happily in a warm and comforting place called “Home”
“Home is my best friend, my partner, my all”This line in the poem uses personification to tell us that “Home” is a very important place to Tara as it accompanied her through her childhood and it is where she created the happiest memories and had the most joyful time playing, doing homework and eating with family members. So we enjoyed reading the poem as the poet described how “Home” is a reassuring ,calm and comforting place.

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Yes. I do enjoy this poem as it gives me nostalgic memories of my childhood, as i could pick out the sights, sounds and feelings of childhood in the poem.

Evidence:
In the poem, morning was attributed with love, “Morning is love, when mom bids me arise”, which are the feelings of childhood. “Eggs shaped like hearts, a breakfast surprise” also expressses a mother’s love.

Device + Analysis:
“Morning”, referring to love, is being personified, which suggests strong love for the child from the mother. The heart-shaped egg also symbolises the love. She also takes in effort to make the eggs shaped as hearts instead of normal-shaped egg. I feel the warmth and love and I can relate it to my own experience of mother’s love, so I feel nostalgic

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This is why I enjoy the poem as it gives me nostalgia and I feel touched by it

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I enjoyed reading Childhood Home by as I found it to be a heartwarming and beautiful poem talking about the poet’s childhood at home. Then line “Morning is love, when mom bids me arise, ” is a metaphor that shows how the poet enjoys waking up in the morning to they’re mom’s love. I believe that this is a experience many of us have experienced before. It is a lovely moment that takes many of us back to our own memories. The line “Home is my best friend, my partner, my all. ” makes me feel the connection the poet has to they’re childhood home and experiences. The personification “Home is my best friend, ” shows the deep love the poet has for her childhood and how much they miss they’re home. This poem tugged at my heartstrings and made me have a longing for home as well. Therefore, I enjoyed reading “Childhood Home” by Tara Kunesh as I can relate to Tara’s work.

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I enjoyed reading the poem because it sounds nice as it rhymes and it shows that the poet had fond memories of his childhood home. So, it reminds me of my childhood home too. This is highlighted through a personification as “ This home lives within, a memory’’ this demonstrating how the poet remembers her childhood home. This means the room is a memory to him and he can remember how it looks like very clearly. Hence, the link is that the poet finds her childhood home everything to her.

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P: Yes, I enjoyed this poem. I think it’s very meaningful and resonates a lot with me, though I wish it was less generic because a happy childhood home doesn’t necessarily apply to everyone. I think there’s also very useful and detailed use of personification.
E,D,A: The line “this home lives within, a memory”. It is inferred that even though the author’s childhood home isn’t around anymore, she still remembers it vividly because of all her childhood memories :)
L: I love this poem because it makes me realise how lucky I am to have a comfortable, loving home and that one day I will look back upon it with only my memories.

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P: I enjoyed reading the poem, ‘Childhood home’ by Tara Kunesh as I feel that its resonates with me.
E/ D: I picked out the personification, ‘This home lives within, a memory,’ finding it extremely meaningful.
A: This shows that the author’s childhood home is incredibly important to her, will stay etched in her mind not not be forgotten.
L: This is why I really enjoy this poem. Not just because it is meaningful, but also because I can relate to it.

(I am unable to post my partner’s work as he has not send it to me.)