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The following map indicates the significant variation witnessed by the town called Haraton at the early period of 21st century.

Overall, one siginficant change can be noticed on the east side of the river where Industrial complex has expanded exponentially to the point where the residential area below it has been covered up entirely in the year 2016.

Another residential area in the north-west experienced no change what so ever from the 8 year time lapse. (2008-2016). However,the building surrounding residential area in the north-east go through a noticable change except for the school. Derelict warehouse in the north was changed into a carpark whilist oldtown below that area below that has been cut in half and made into office and university. On the west, the art centre and residential area have been transformed into multi-scrren cinema and shopping centre.

All in all, the reduction in Woodland area has a significant impact on the size of its water source (lake into pond) while it has no effect on the river length and flow.

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In conclusion,I think it is safe to say that the asian country like yemen will always be occupied by both teenagers and adults under 60 whilist european country like Italy will be dominated by middle -aged people.

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Task(1) pie chart

These pie charts give account on the people of different age group living in Yemen and Italy from the year 2020and the prediction for 2050.

Overall,we can say that people of ages between 15-59 years occupied the largest proportion in 3 out of 4 charts.This age group was the largest group of population in Italy,2000(with 50.1%).For the country Yeman,the people over 60 was the smallest group of people both in the year 2000 and 2050 (former being 3.6% and latter being 5.7%).However, in the case of Italy,the contrary was true.Youngsters who have age below 14 is considered to be the lowest group of people regardless of the year 2000or2050(with 14.3% and 11.5%).For the specific year 2000,we can see some contrasting differences between two countries.The youngsters being the most populated in Yemen(50.1%) whereas the adults below 60 being the most populated in the country Italy.For the country Italty,eventhough the percentages of population changes,it does not really change the fact that adults below 60 were most populated,followed by the old(above 60) and youngsters (under 14).

In conclusion,I think it is safe to say that the asian country like Yemen will always be occupied by generation Zs while adults

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Task(2) brands

A brand,is my defination,is a symbol or status of the bussiness or organisation.

Nowadays,majority of people tend to have a great interest in purchasing branded items.Overall,i think it is a negative development due to their manipulative marketing stradegries.

Branding can be quite deceiving.

Most people believe that branded items tends to last long while non-branded items do not, due to their cheap price.This can be seen in fashion industry.Jose zuniga,a fashion youtuber ,exposed the fact that shirts made in the same factory undergoes different branding or labelling processes before it reaches to consumer's market. In this way,some shirts are printed with brand names like Gucci while some are just printed in some local no-named brands although we know both have the same quality.

Brands can be manipulating.Not to metion the fact that social media and tv advertisement made them more popular.This has ingrained a desire to buy products in the people's mind although they are not necessary for them.For example,a phone is enough for a person but brands like apple marketed in a way that makes the rich want to buy more and more until their latest model.This is an example of dark psychology methods.The developers understand that the rich's high living standard and manipulated their constant need for new and latest items so that they can acquire the feeling of superiority. Brand can raise insecurity among people.Some people ,especially the middle classed and indegent people,becomes very desperate to buy those products.Some made crime scenes such as shop-lifting,pickpocketing,etc and eventually becomes a felon.Some becomes workaholic which results in numerous health issues in the future.Compounding more burdens and stresses to their shoulders,some might even commit sucide.

In conclusion,Brands have thier own pros and cons. By being aware of negative consequences of it,you will fall into the category of avid people who are not intimidated by trends and manipulation that the brands offer.

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For Alpha's Writing Task (2) Teamwork

Be careful with articles, spelling mistakes, and spacings.

Proofread again for small mistakes after writing the whole essay.

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For Alpha's Task (2) Writing (Cram Schools)

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For Alpha's Task 1 Feedback by Tr.Pyae

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Task(2) Team work

Nowadays,'teamwork' has become one of the most demanding 21st century skill.A well educated person should not only be able to show his creativity but also his capability to collaborate and communicate well in today's society .By training the students to work in team from an early age,we can cultivate the mindset of good citizenship in them.

Students of all ages should be able to work independently in teams.Starting from kindergarden ,we can encourage them to value the teamwork and leadership.This can be done by making them engage in fun group activites such as scavenger hunt,human knot and so on.Teachers can also access this by watching over childern participation rate and their enthusiasm.For those of the timid ones and some with sedentary lifestyle ,teacher can gather them in a circle and then reading out the stories of great leaders like Mahatma gandhi and then making them step out in the midde of the circle to talk about their favorite leader.This not only trains the introvertic kids to be less nervous and more socially but also ingrains the spirit of a leader in their heart.

In middle and highschool,teenagers should find their own passion by doing team related ativities.we can persuade Boys to join sports club(either active sports or e-sport)whereas girls to join state plays,opera or even musical band.Every position in sport and every role in plays has its own importance,and by lacking in one position or role can cause a match to lose or a play to fail.This will teach them to take responsibity in their own role and cooperation skills.

In colleges and universities,the education is mainly accessed through activites such as group presentation,assignment and team projects rather than individual one sitting exams.For instance,we can assign the students to make a group presentation about a local history.This can inevitably help them to be more aware of their surroundings.A few arguments can occur while deciding each member's responsible part however it is not of an issue afterwards.

In all educational settings,teamwork can have a profound effect on individual's probability to stand out in this 21st century fast-paced world.If the students can manage to transfer this communication skills in every area of their life,they will succeed not only in schools but also in work place and will lead a life full of prosperity and self-fulfillment.

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Task(1)table

This illustration depicts the rate of british people's involvement in various sporting activities tabulated by both sex between the year 2005/06 to 2008/09.

Overall,there are some flagrant contrasts in the percentage of male and female involvement in the chosen activities .Across all the years,the least popular sport were jogging,crosss running and road-running whereas swimming and diving were the most popular.Although swimming was the most popular,a smaller percentage of men than women participated in these indoor activites in 2005/06.(the former being13.3 and latter 18.0.Women dominated the indoor sports .In contrary,the number of male participants dispropotionally outnumbered the females in cycling in the year 2008/09.Surprisingly,the indentical percentage of 12.2 can be seen in swimming sport in the year 2006/07 and 2007/08.Similarly,another case like this can be seen in jogging and other outdoor sports in 2006/7 and 2008/09.(with indentical 4.8 percent).The most siginificant percentage difference between both sex can be seen in cycling sport in the year 2008/09 with a whopping 6%difference.

In general,the percentage of indoor activites decreases throughout the years while that of outdoor sports increases steadily.

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Writing task(2)

'Cram schools'

It is common nowadyas that more and more students are becoming competitive with their peers.And in many part of the world,parents are putting thier childen in cram schools for additional guidance .In my point of view,i believes that this approach is essential for a child's academic success as I also took one when I was preparing for the Marticulation exam of my country.

Firstly,The teachers in cram schools are professional and eminent for their achievements.This is because some teachers have phd and degrees in their respective subject in additon to their unique teaching style.For instance,the way they introduce topics prior to teaching has a great impact on student's curiosity.This forces students to make logical understanding of the topic.During the class,their compelling teaching methods make sure that the student fully understand the big picture i.e.concepts along with some detail informations .In this way,students can spend less time studying at home but more time concentrating in class.

Additionally,the cram school set great testing systems.They makes sure that the students take a mock test every single week.Although some might argue that this put unnessary stress on students,i would say that i is indeed necessary to have some pressure to keep us on the right track.

Finally,The cram school's teachers also have excellent test-taking strdegies and techniques.Depending on the time left before the actual exam,they give you the personalised revision timetables as well as the order to chapters or subjects to study ranging from the most difficult to easiest.They also give advise on what fo focus the day before the exam since we cant revise everthing within 500page textbook in a single night.

In conclusion,I think it is absolutely necessary to take cram schools

Although some parents say it is abit pricey,I recommend you to invest on education if you really care about your child's future.Moreover,I strongly believe that the teachers inside the cram school along with their school system will surely help your child to unlock his full academic potential.

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Writing task 1

This bar chart indicates the proportion of both british and international students getting access to rank(B) degrees or higher at prestigious university in Britain in the year 2009.

Surprisingly,the most distinct gap between both group(uk vs international student) can be seen in the information technology(56%vs86%)while other group showed either less or no difference.Some subjects such as art history and sociology have far fewer gaps(6-14%) whereas other subjects;for instance,nursing and accountancy have an indentical number of percentage for both of the group,the former subject being 76% and the latter being 60%.For the first 3 disciplines on the graph which are nursing,electrical engineering and Information technolgy,the students from all around the globe were likely to outnumber the Uk students but on the other hand,the rest of the subjects can be seen UK student's dominance.This pointed out the simple fact that most UK students are likely to be in the most competitive and highly praised majors while the international students can be found in the normal majors.

Overall,this simple bar chart gave us a clear understanding on why UK students are better in the technical subjects while the international students tend to excel in non-technical ones.

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Writing task1,Line graph

The data displays the proportion of birtish teenagers having a vegan nutrition plan from 1960 to 2020.

The percentage of adolescent rose significantly for 2 decades(1960-1980) followed by reaching a peak of 15%at 1980.The number of youths fell gradually to 6%until it reaches 1990 where it fluctuated from 1990 to 2000.Since then,it rose sharply by 5%until it reached 2010 where it reached a plateau of 11% after the period of rapid increase.

All in all,the timeline of decades shows that the trend of vegan diet among UK youngsters were at the peak at 1980 whether by their parent's persuation or their intrinsic motivation.However,with today's media influence,it is likely that the chance of young people following a vegetarian diet will rise again.

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Writing Task 2

Nowadays, in many countries, there is gender equality between males and females. However, there are differences in them in terms of strengths and weaknesses. In my opinion, it is not right to exclude males or females from certain jobs due to their gender.

Firstly, there is something called human rights which is meant for protecting the rights and equality of every living human on earth. Such equality includes things like religion, race, skin color, gender, and many other factors. When it comes to getting a job, some employers are likely to violate the rules and regulations of human rights and that should not be done because it is not fair at all.

Moreover, there are some employers favor the male employees than female employees in a way of giving more salary and higher chance of getting a promotion. However, women do deserve equal chances due to certain reasons. First of all, women are better than men in a way of flexibility, meaning that most of them can handle almost every sudden problems and situations better than men by handling calmly. To be fair, there are even women who can become better leaders than men due to the factors shown above.
At last, when it comes to operating in a workplace, it does not always include only with individual skills. There are things like teamwork and cooperation and due to the collaborations, it does not matter whether there are any disadvantages not. In this situation, only collaboration and the advantages of individuals come into place. So, in order to attain organizational goals, it is necessary not to exclude males or females from certain jobs because of their gender.

However, there are still a lot of workplace inequality and discriminations related to gender in worldwide. Because of that, many organizations can’t still reach their full potential of getting to organizational goals. To do so, there must not be any biases of gender in any workplace and the employers have to try to see not just the weaknesses but also the strengths of each and every individual.

Zayar Lin Maung(Clink)

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The histogram describes the number of women and men employed in the UK in 2010 as teachers, not only in schools but also in universities. Units are regarded as the percentage of educational teachers.

As per the diagram, the three vertical axes showed women climbing the men. Women instructors influenced the atmosphere of nursery schools. In terms of nursery school, females are employed as teachers rather than in college. Moreover, women teachers also outnumbered men in primary school (roughly 90 women vs. 10 men) as well as in secondary school (nearly 55 females vs. 45 males). On the other hand, the work society of private training institutes or universities was occupied by male educators (approximately 80 and 60), whereas there is no gender gap in college, like in others.

Overall, the gap between male and female tutors is related to subjects.Male lecturers are more interested in higher education than female teachers in this bar graph.

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Writing Task 2

Nowadays,more and more people are becoming aware of gender equality.Each individual have their own characteristics that make them special. As a matter of fact,we all are unique in our own ways. I am a firm believer that prohibition of an individual from certain profession by looking at their gender is a very erroneous thing to do.

Firstly,I truly believe that excluding a gender from centain career is a violation of universal human right.The universal human right declares that everyone should be treated the same way regardless of thier ethic,race,gender,colour,nationality and religion.According to Biomedcentral,women are more likely to be employed with lower salaries,less chance of promotion,worse social protection than men.These disadvantages in the labour market force woman to have low job expectations.

Secondly,Another point that is worth metioning is the 'specification'.This means that each gender have a specific jobs that compliments their nature.For example,men have the characteristic of being strong,tough and have a greater sense of phyiscal capabilities than women.Therefore,men are more suitable for doing physical demanding jobs such as construction and sports. In case of women,women naturally tends to be soft,fragile so they spends most of their time doing intellectual activities like reading so they prefers jobs like accounting which requires lots of cognitive abilities.They are also found to be perfect in consultation carrer since women are a great listener.They can listen to your problems and give realistic advice based on your situation.Everyone can agree on the fact that women are more emotionally matured creatures than men.This not only contribute in consultation but also in leadership since women can make clever decisions even in the worst situations.

In conclusion,it is true that the problem of gender equality in workplace will not be solved easily.However,there are some gender specific jobs.Nevertheless,employers should always focus on seeing the hidden potential within the employees rather than trying to hire a person based on their gender preferences.

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Writing Task 1

The bar chart depicts the percentage of male and female teachers within six educational fields in the UK in 2010.

First of all, there are three fields of education, such as nursery/pre-school, primary school, and secondary school, where the number of women outnumbers that of men. Within these three fields, the ratio of female to male is approximately 9:1 in first two fields and for secondary school, the ratio is approximately 4:6. However, in the field of education, which is college, the percentage of both male and female teachers is the same. Hence, it is correct to say that the ratio is 1:1. In contrast, there are two distinct fields, private training institute and university, where the number of men teachers outnumbers women teachers. For private training institute, the ratio of men to women is about 6:4 while the ratio is approximately 7:3 in private university.

In conclusion, in basic-level education fields, the number of women teachers dominates in these fields while the number of men teachers either outnumbers or in an equal ratio to that of women teachers.

Zayar Lin Maung

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IELTS writing task1

The bar chart above illustrates the comparison between male and female teachers across a variety of educational settings in the UK in 2010.

The most significant gender gap can be noticed in 2out of 6 settings in which women outnumbered men in about 80-90% difference.This shows that lower educational institute such as pre-sch and primary schools are more female dominant.The fact that women are more patient than men makes complete sense since the kids are more sensitive and indulgent.

As the kids progresses to secondary school,it is more likely that they will meet more male teachers all the way into the college. In secondary school,there is only a litte gender gap (approximately 46vs54).we can see that women outnumbered men in about 8percent but on the other hand,this is completely opposite for private training institute.Male shows dominance over female in about 8%(54 vs 46).

The number of male and female educators were seen equally in college (approximately 50%).Surprisingly,the percentage of male lecturers are more than double the amount of females .

To sum up,this illustration depicts the fact that women tends to dominate in basic education level while men anchored a significant position in higher educational institution.

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IELTS Writing Task (1) Marking Scheme

1. Grammar

2. Avoid repetitions of words/ correct vocab

3. Task Fulfillment

4. The use of linking words