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Hao Teng, I appreciate the potential pun in your work - the trees being removed for a manufacturing plant is quite clever. Ms. Liao is also very proud of you for putting in so much effort to complete the work and for improving your colouring techniques with watercolour pencils. Keep up the great work!

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Ye Hong, I appreciate the detailed drawing of the aircraft you've created. However, I want to remind you that the assignment brief calls for a "POSITIVE & BEAUTIFUL" mood. You might want to consider incorporating elements that evoke positivity and beauty into your artwork to align more closely with the assignment brief.

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Shi Lok, I'm impressed by how you've improved from the draft to the final version. In your final design, I can see that you've added more depth to your work by incorporating a horizon line to distinguish what is in front and what's further away. Your work is also neat, and I appreciate the monochromatic design with emphasis only on the sun and a small area with flowers. I'm curious why you chose to emphasize these areas, and whether it was intentional that they look like mirror images.

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Lishanth, thank you for your good effort in creating your artwork. You can consider overlapping some of the tree stumps and changing their sizes to make some appear to be in the foreground, while others are in the background. This technique will add depth to your artwork.

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Aiden, I like how you contrast a block of HDB flats with a treehouse - it reminds me of the importance of balancing the relationship between progress and conservation of our nature. I think you can expand on those ideas and improve your drawing by considering what's in the foreground and what is in the background (things can be overlapped!). That way, your picture will have depth.

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Thank you, Youhan, for putting in so much effort to finish the artwork. I like the gradients of blues in the sky and your idea of showing how loggers removed trees for homes. However, I think you can expand on the idea further - after all, the forests are also homes for other animals and smaller plants. Finally, you can also explain your artwork better by elaborating on the reasons for your choices. (By the way, hunters don't cut down trees!)

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Zara, I like how you have coloured your image - I wished you had more time to complete your artwork. Next time, you can consider using a smaller area and working on the most important part of the design first.

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Keshika, I like your illustration style - however, I am curious how this is related to the assigned theme & sub-theme: Deforestation | Home?

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Sophia, I like the cute trees you have drawn. I am curious about the rectangles that are framing each image in your artwork - what are they? It made me think of a wall of family photos framed up! It could have been interesting if you had made these "portrait" of trees in different wooden photo frames.

Finally, I think you can improve on your colouring techniques (remember Ms. Liao's demo?) to enhance and make your artwork look more complete.

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Xin Ya, I like your story about people co-existing with trees. However, the storyline is not very clear, and you could consider working on improving the flow. For example, I'm not sure which frame comes first - is it the bottom left or bottom right? Maybe a linear composition (from left to right) may work better with your idea.

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Tharanika, I think your ideas have really evolved since the 1st draft. Good job! It's not uncommon for artists to struggle with generating ideas, and they often make multiple drafts before deciding on a final design.

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Zhi Qi, your illustration is indeed very cute! I like it very much. However, it may be better if you can include elements in your picture to show the products that the trees are used for, as stated in your reflections.

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Rania, you've put in great effort in colouring! The colours are vibrant, and I can see some gradient in the clouds. Good job. To improve your work, you can consider overlapping some of the elements in your picture - that way, the viewer can distinguish what is closer or further away. Right now, the tree stumps and chimneys seem to be floating in mid-air!

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Rachel, I agree that you've made a good drawing - I can see the foreground, middle ground, and background. You could work on your coloring techniques (remember Ms. Liao's demo?) to make your picture more complete and detailed.

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Akifa, I like how you attempted to use a comic strip to tell a story. You might want to consider better use of the paper so it looks more complete. For example, you could think about the design of the "title" section.

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Nicole, I really like the initial idea in your draft - the little men with yellow protective hats look really interesting in contrast to the gigantic plants. I wish you could explore this idea further or make the draft more complete. Your final design looks very imaginative too! However, you need to work on presenting and explaining your ideas better.

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Heidi, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "Longan Planet." Your work is very imaginative, but it would be helpful if you could explain it more clearly.

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Freedia, I think you've done a fantastic job coloring your image! Maybe you were putting too much pressure on your hand or had poor posture, which could strain it. Next time, you can try layering the colors so they're still vibrant but won't hurt your hand.

I also like your idea of contrasting the utopia (on the right) and dystopia (on the left) states. I thought it would have been nice if you had more time to complete the coloring on the right. However, you might want to consider reducing the intensity of colors so that they gradually fade towards the right.

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Aufa, the idea of rose clouds is interesting. I wish you could elaborate more on that.

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Clarice, you haven't finished the reflection task. I appreciate your effort in telling a story through a life cycle diagram. You might want to think about making the cycle continuous. For example, stage 6 could lead back to stage 1, so the cycle never stops. Also, adding more details to each cycle could make your narrative even better.

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Charu, I think your ideas about a world without trees and its effect on the climate are really interesting! However, I noticed that your final work isn't as clear as your first draft. You could make it better by improving your colouring techniques to express your ideas more clearly.

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I nice

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Your work is so nice

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I like you art work

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I like it!

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Not bad. Like it!

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Looking good and nice

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I like your work so much

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Is so cute

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I like yours

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Nice job

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It is super cuteyyyy

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No one l~like me..?~
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W~why...

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Tremendous work

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I like how u drew it!

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My artwork is about trees getting cut down by the girl worker and the factory smoke is covering the whole sky dark but able to see the blue sky butterflys and flower blowing through the air was like a nature.

I tried my best drawing

When tan zi xi came to our school i was very excited and enjoying her art work

I felt proud for my art because i never drew that good before

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So cooooooool!!!😇😮

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Well done!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I like your work

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I  feel bad TREE

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Keshika:I did alot for my final art work. Hope you like it.

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Keshika:I did alot for my final art work. Hope you like it.

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Is very nice❤️🤍

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I like your artwork you do very good I love it

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Thara (13) 3 in

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I like it because is so cute

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I LIKE IT SOOOOO MUCH IWILL VOTE FOR U :)

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I love your artwork and i see you put in a hardwork nice

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I like your work because it is interesting.

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Outstanding peice of work.

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I like your drawing because is very nice

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Your drawing is soo cool

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I like your tree factory drawing

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Your work is amazing!

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to learn from u

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I like your artwork because the colouring is very neat and it always reminds me to not destroy or cut down trees

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I love your drawing

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I love the tree house❤️

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I love your drawing it is sooooo cute

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This is a pictuer of peolpe that they live in a tree house and to plan tree and flower to make them glow up for peolpe to pick up apple and my art is a tree house and a tree of flower and I like meeting tan zi xi.

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nice! Love u.

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I like your design because is pretty,sad and the girl is cute<3

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I love yours❤️

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I LOVE IT💕
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It is really nice

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I like your work because it is meaningful  and it also looks nice

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Great work

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Nicole I love your drawing