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Hi Jessie! I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was so good! I thought your choices of figurative language was really good and the way you included the tabloid tricks was effortless.

~Kelynne :)

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Very nice story, the writing and the suspenful feeling was great

-Alexito

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Heyyy! I thought your story was super food and funny. I liked the way you incorporated dialogue it helped to move the story along. Also, i liked your hook and the way you started it off!

~Kelynne

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Hi Alexa. I thought that your piece was very well done! I thought that it was enjoyable from beginning to end. The part that i enjoyed most was when you were writing about interviewing the man who say Helen Keller. I also thought that you did a good job with all of the figurative language. It really added to the piece and brought to life. Great Job!

-Miriam

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Hi Miriam! Your writing piece was amazing, and it had a lot of elements that made it surprising and fun to read. The grinch and Ronald’s wedding was an interesting concept to read about, and your formatting in the style of tell-all confessional made the story seem like real celebrity gossip. Great job!

-Chloe Picard

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I really LOVED your tabloid!!!!! I like all the diologe, it kept the story intresting and added more to the conflict!! Great Job!!

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You did a great job on your tabliod! I loved how you wrote your tabliod it had a lot of details too. Great job!

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Abe, I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was so good, I thought your figurative language was also really good!

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Hi! I really enjoyed your piece! I thought that the ides was very entertaining and it was very well done! I also thought that your figurative language and tabloid tricks were also done very well! Overall, I really enjoyed it. Well done!

-Miriam

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Hi Alexa! Your one pager was great! I liked how you backed the theory that Helen Keller was alive with scientific “evidence,” as well as a plausible explanation. I enjoyed the details you added about how Helen may acclimate to modern-day life, since it would be drastically different from what she was used to. You used the tabloid trick, “Absurd or Improbable” really well! Great job!!

-Chloe Picard

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Hi will! Your story was great! I love your use of compositional risks and tabloid tricks, it really hooked me into the story! I also think your word choice was very advanced and sophisticated. Overall very good story! From, Alex S.

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Hi Abe. I really liked your story and i liked how you plotted out the story because you made it exciting to read with a lot of ploy twists. This made the story more interesting to read and you did a good job on creating conflict throughout the story that the main character had to overcome

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I really liked the topic of your very creative. I also liked your title.

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I like how your story was suspenseful. And i liked the overall storyline of people turning into ghosts. And you got to the point of the article very quickly without making it sound like a story.

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I really liked your tabloid!!!! Your hook and introduction were really entertaining and set up suspense for the rest of the story!!! I also loved how you used alliteration in you title 🏆🏆

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Very great report, and kinda sad for the guy but after all it show how much discipline he has to maintain a great physic at that age.

-ALexito

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I really liked the story idea,it was very interesting but it didn’t leave me on a cliffhanger. I also really like how you ended it on a happy ending and hows she is socializing and healthy.Great job!

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I loved your story! It was really interesting and I loved the story idea about The Statue of Liberty

-Mika

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I like how you used ESPN and other stuff and I liked your title.

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I really like your tabliod! I loved how you added your sources into your peice! Great job!

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Hi Rachel, I really liked your conclusion it really summed up everything, and I really enjoyed reading your figurative language. Nice job👏

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I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was very good!

I also enjoyed reading your figurative language.

From- Estevan

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HI will, I really like how you built the suspense in your story. Your wording was really good in your story. I also like how you made your story entertaining.

-Cheese

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I loved your peice it was really entertaning! You did really good on adding details into your tabliod. Great job!

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Your story was pretty good and not bad pretty creative and a good amount of effort good job Abe

-Liam

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Hi Kaitlyn!! Your one pager was fantastic. I liked how you tied in real celebrities that have theories around their disappearances, such as Elvis Presley, into a green, gooey alien! I also like how you left the story a mystery, where the alien, as well as Elvis, disappear. You used lots of witness testimonies as well, which made the story seem real and plausible. Great job!!!

-Chloe Picard

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I loved your title and hook, it is really creative!! I also like all the figurative language, especially the simile at the end! 🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆

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I really liked your story. It was interesting how the statue just left. Good job.

-Kaitlyn

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Your story was really funny and your idea was really fun to read about. Your hook was really interesting and good!

-Mika

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Hi. I thought that your piece was very well done. I enjoyed the suspense about why the statue had gotten so angry. I also really enjoyed your figurative language and tabloid tricks that were in your piece. In my opinion, they helped your piece come to live for the reader. Overall, i believe that you did very well.

-Miriam

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I loved your tabliod! I really like the figurative language that you put in your tabliod. Great job!

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I really liked your title and I liked your figurative language.

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I really enjoyed your story,I loved the part where James Charles wears fur like Kim.Your story was really funny and I really liked that you used real people as your character names. You did a great job!

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Hi Rachel! Your story was really good and funny. I enjoyed the way you wrote the dialogue when the people were reporting what happened. It made me feel like i was in the moment. In addition, to that i thought the way your incorporated the figurative language and tabloid blended in to your story seamlessly. Overall i thought your story was great, and it was so creative!!!

~Kelynne ⭐️

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Hi Alex, I really enjoyed your story! The concept was very creative and funny! I also loved your compositional risks and tabloid tricks, they really enhanced the story! Overall amazing story, great job!

From ALex S

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Nice story, the dialogue was amazing and I think it was your stronger part

-ALexito

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I love your idea and how you used reality and made it more interesting! Your report was really fun to read about and i loved it!

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Hello Nicole, I really liked your story idea it was very interesting and nice, but also your sources quotes and info was pretty cool too. Nice👏

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Alex, i did not like your story at all. I think the fiction of 100 men vs gorillas was bad. But i did like the overall storyline.

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Hi Alex! I really liked your story and it was a really entertaining one to read. One part of your story i really like was your figurative language as it helped describe the story very well.

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I loved your tabliod! I loved your hook and it really caught my attention. Great job!

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I really liked the fugitive language in your tabloid. Also I liked your topic

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I really liked your title and your texts.

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Hi abe! I really enjoyed your story! The word choice was very creative. I also liked the element of sports involved. OVerall great h=job writing your story.

from, Alex S

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I liked your story, and it had good dialogue. And i thought itd was pretty sigma.

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Your story was really good and I loved your hook.Your story was super funny and it was interesting.The idea of the Statue of Liberty coming alive was great.You did an amazing job!

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I really enjoyed reading your writing piece about 100 men vs 1 gorilla! I also enjoyed reading your figurative language.

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Hi Lily! I really liked reading your story! It was so creative and i thought your idea was really well thought through! I also liked the way you wrote the dialogue. It came off as reporters and not narrative writing which is great!!!!!

~Kelynne 🪩

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YO! I loved your onomatopoeias! They made your story so much better and interesting. I also love the story line in general it was a very creative story and made want to keep reading. I also loved when you added “Don’t forget to always come back for the inside scoop at Behind the Scenes News!” it really made it seem like television great job val

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Your story was really informational as to how torpedo bats work and how the Yankees are good because of that! I liked the story and I wish that I could play baseball with a torpedo bat.

Josh

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Ur tabloid was very engaging and interesting. It was very well organized and had many different types of figurative language! Great job!!

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this story is so funny. I think it’s a great and creative idea that you came up with. The Tell-All element is right there and it’s great. I think you did really well on this piece. Great job!

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I really like your story it’s very creative and funny. The sources were good and so was the figurative language. The tell-all element was resells good . You did a good job with this overall.

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I loved your tabloid! The idea was very unique and it was well written! I loved your hook, great job!

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I really liked your article Josh. I liked your description and the mentioning of the players along with their positions. It was a joy to read, and it really was well written.

Great, job!

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Dear Nate I read your story and really liked the attention to detail you put in it with interesting choice of words overall a good piece.

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Your story was great and I thought it was true and you had very good grammar and it was entertaining

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I loved your tabloid!!!! The story was amazing and so creative. I love how descriptive you were and how much you really payed attention to details. Your story really kept me wanting to keep reading and learn more about that homeless man. Overall your story was amazing Lily!

-Pres

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I really like your composition risks in your story!

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Yo! I loved your tabloid it was very engaging and made me want to keep reading! It was a very creative and interesting writing. Good job!!!!

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I loved your tabloid! It was so creative and well thought out! I really liked the plot and it really hooked me in to continue reading it. Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lily

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Your story was so random, and that’s why I loved it. Things just kind of happened, and it followed no real narrative. It was absolutely hilarious, and everything else kept the story interesting. Great job Leo! Stamp of approval 💮

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I think your idea is so good. It is a great story that would definitely hook people into reading it. It’s so well written and descriptive. Great work!

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Hello Josh, your story was very suspenseful and the personification was great! I also thought your vocabulary was really good. Nice job!

-Leonidas

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I really Enjoyed your story. I liked the way that it was written, It had me hooked from the start. It’s very creative and also fun to read.

-Maison K

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Hi Shannon, I really liked your tabloid piece and I like the figurative language you used such as magic 3, and multiple hyperboles! Overall, I think you did a great job!

-Anika

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Hi preslie! I loved your tabloid ! It was very interesting to read and I thought your tell all confessional was creative! Nice job :)

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Your tabloid was amazing! It was very entertaining and creative. The figurative language you added made the story even more interesting! Excellent job!!

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Hey Kyle! Your MLB story was really nice to read because I could envision what happened on the field when the Ranger won the World Series. I liked the interviews after the game because they added lots of new details to the story.

Josh

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Your tabloid was great it was very descriptive and it was eye catching and the everything was great

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Your story was so funny! I loved the creative story about Kylie and loved how it really made me enjoy reading your tabloid! I loved all the different perspectives like from Kim when she said “I think Kylie is out of her mind for keeping the alien.” Really made me see how her family feels about this situation and overall just makes it so much better! Great job Mel!

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your story was so funny and intriguing. It was so nicely written and i had a great time reading it. Your figurative language really made it awesome. Great work!

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I really Liked your Story. It was well written because Jokic’s story is so good. You perfectly portrayed Jokic’s rise in the NBA going from a Bench Player to the best Basketball player in the world.

-Maison K

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I loved your tabloid! I thought your figurative language was SO creative ! I also liked how you described Elon in the beginning, nice job!

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I like your piece and I think the 2 pieces of evidence was good! I also like that you used many different types of comp. risks and tabloid tricks.

-Anika

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I loved your tabloid!!! It was so creative!! I loved the way it was written like a reporter and how all of the details were in it without it being to long! Great job!!!

lily

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I really like your tabloid story, especially since it's about sports! I really liked the soccer comeback vs Barcelona vs PSG. The comeback was crazy! Keep up the great work

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Your tabloid was very organized and exciting! It was a very creative and captivating story! You did an amazing job!!!

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I really liked reading your story. It was really funny, and the plot was very creative and interesting. I also liked how you made your writing feel like a genuine TV news broadcast. I also liked the real elements that you put into it, and the twists that were put in to the tabloid.

Good job!

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Dear Josh P Your story was really intense as both teams were under pressure and you made me feel like I was in the stadium watching that game I did also like your commentary really felt like a reporter.

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Your story was very scary, but it still provided lots of details. I liked the suspense in the story too

Josh

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Your tabloid was very good and interesting to read! I love all the figurative language you added in it! You did such a great job!!

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I loved your tabloid!!! It was amazing and I really like the title! I also loved the figarative language that you used to enhance your piece! Great Job!!!

lily

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your story about Frank oceans return was very interesting. It was well organized and you had good grammar. The way u wrote it kept me engaged in it. Good job

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What a great story. It’s so intriguing and interesting. The news report lauguage was amazing. I think you do a really good job on this piece. GREAT JOB ALEXA ROSE!!!

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Hi Romie your story about jokic was great and I loved how you included how much he averaged and overall it was entertaining

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HI GOAT I loved your tabloid it was so tuff, and I loved your “outro” paragraph, great job 🥹✌️

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I think your tabloid is unique and I like the detail you put in it, and the word choice. Overall, I think it’s a good piece and it kept me engaged in it.

-Anika

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Your writing and grammar was amazing. I was completely lost throughout the entire thing, but that’s because I don’t follow baseball 😅. The writing was great though, and even to me, it was very interesting! Keep up to good work. You get a Stamp of Approval 💮

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I liked your writing piece a lot. It gave a lot of information and it felt like I was a reading a newspaper of sometime. I also liked your article how you included the sources, and voiced your opinions as well.

Nice job.

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Hello Romie, your tabloid was very interesting and your metaphors were great. The personification wads really good too. Nice job!

-Leonidas

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Hi Josh your tabloid was very descriptive and it was eye catching and you had very good grammar and spelling overall great job

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Your tabloid was amazing great job!! The plot was so creative, I don’t know how you came up with it! I really liked the way the rhyming in it and the way you explained the house! Great job!!!!

lily

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I really liked how you always included reports or critics after every game. I also really like how you included LeBron and Curry’s stats

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I love story em!! It was so intersting and loved how creative the story was! I loved how you added in other people like Mrs swift it really put together the tabloid and made it 100% more intersting great job em!

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Hi Lucas I liked your tabloid a lot, and I really liked how you put what the paparazzi yelled, great job 😛😛😛

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Maddy, I really like your story about the mermaid. It was really good no very organized. You had good figurative language and tabloid tricks that made it much better. I really liked reading it, good job.

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I loved your tabloid! I loved the title and the “Breaking News” in the beginning! I really liked how you used Wicked as a storyline! Great job!!!

Lily

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I really like how your story tells us how a team Like the rangers can win the World Series. I really like how your story tell tell us how the rangers have been so bad and then the accomplished the best thing to do in baseball.

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wow this was so fun to read. The topic was a great one and something that I’m sure a bunch of people would stop to read. Everything from the title to the last word was so well written. GOOD JOB RACHEL!!