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1. What went well?

2. What didn't go well?

3. My challanges

4. Suggestions

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In the first half of the semester, I was satisfied with the result of my midterm essay. I know that I went through a lot of revisions and had deep discussions with Mr. Eka (since there were many inconsistencies in the passage I wrote and also many statements that I claimed without supporting evidence), and I am glad that I overcame that challenge and achieved a good result. A suggestion from me would be for you to perhaps provide us with more tips on how to use Mendeley easily, because until now I still find it difficult to use and end up writing my work cited manually.

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1. What went well?

First, I did well in finding and choosing the sources for my essay. Second, I have a better understanding of applying the work citation. Also, the essay structure.

2. What didn't go well?

I have difficulty with my writing style into an academic writing style.

3. Challenges

I have the challenge of elaborating on the idea, making a smooth transition, and my writing style.

4. Suggestions

More games😁

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1. I did way better than the last compo class I had, but that was probably because I was more committed to getting better grades now.

2. I don't think I did well with my time management skills.

3. My ability to procrastinate during my toughest moments in life will inevitably bring me down to my lowest point. I was taught to never stress out during situations that require a clear mind, but I think I took that lesson way too far at this point.

4. Your class is perfect

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1. The structures, ideas, sources and how it develops during the essay process

2. The grammar(repetitive or too much clause in 1 sentence), Less frequently vocabulary, MLA formatting especially access dates in works cited, the flow each sentence and etc(I believe there are a lot, but i forgot)

3. Grammar especially vocabulary knowledge, using MLA formatting, picking a idea or topic for my essay(To be honest at that time I find it is difficult to search about coconut tree), how I developed the essay and finding sources related my topic which is coconut treet

4. I would like to learn more about grammar especially vocabulary, so I can identify which one is less frequently use and which one is the common.

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in my half of my first semester semester, i feel everything not working really well. I feel failed on composition, and sometimes i don’t understand how to write essay correctly like how to cite references and my writing style too much look like presentation script. also, i miss some of my assignment and that make my grade went really bad. I still tried to writing my essay on better style and tried to not missing assignments. I wish our class being more interactive maybe more quizzes, or other games

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1. What went well

During the first half-semester, I manage to collect and utilize data for my essay well. I have no difficulties in finding data or evidence for my writing.

2. What didn't go well

Peers review didn't really go well since I am the only one who got reviewed, but I didn't get opportunity to review my partner's writing (the essay was not done yet).

3. Challenges

Challenges that I faced besides the peer's review are how to make my writing brief and not in a very long paragraph, and how to make my idea and the data relevant or connect to each other.

4. Suggestions

More quizz!

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1. What went well?

I was happy with my marks for the midterm essay, because I am more of a pessimistic person.

2. What didn't go well?

Difficulty in writing academic style.

3. My Challenges

My writing style and procastinating.

4. Suggestions?

No suggestions

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1. Firstly, in my half first of the semester, I learn a lot of new knowledge, now I can find information that correlates with my topic.

2. I have difficulty identifying wrong sentence structure

3. I have difficulties to arrange my sentence construction and the consistency.

4. I should learn how to improve my sentence construction and consistency when writing an essay.

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1. I was satisfied with the class, since it is more enjoyable than my other business classes. I really like how Mr. Eka taught me about how to find some sources and websites that are allowed in academic writing. It really helps me in the other class's assignment as well.

2. I am little bit struggling with time management, as I took 22 credits and participated in some events. So, when there are many assignments come, I always do all of the assignments in rush.

3. Beside time management, I'm also struggling with making shorter my idea. When it comes to writing, I always write "too-wordy" information.

4. please more games, rewards, and long due date submission.

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I think this half-semester has been great and fun, I manage to learn and write my essay with the knowledge I learn from this class. I also learn that having a face-to-face consultation is much more comfortable and easier to understand, rather than having feedback from Canvas only. By having consultation, I got more tips and tricks on revision my essay. Overall, I enjoy attending this class and my challenges are when I have to do the revision, but I done it late at night and scared to ask for help or check. I also procrastinating my work, maybe that's why I submitted it near deadline time. Thank you for your help in consultation and whenever we have question to ask.

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1. What went well?

= I got to give supporting sentences, data, and examples also my mid-term grade is good.

2. What did not go well?

= Lack of reasoning in the essay, I have not provided enough reasoning in the essay.

3. My challenges

= I have difficulties in giving a good title and a good hook for the introduction paragraph. I also have difficulties in writing academic

writing style because I think I'm still not used to it. My procrastinating.

4. Suggestions

= I think it is already good.

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1. What went well?

I really enjoyed picking a topic that relates to my interest for the essay. I did not expect to get a great result from what I wrote, and I think I learned some good tips while making this essay.

2. What didn't go well?

I am still lacking the understanding on how to cite. I also still have troubles in using academic/formal vocabularies (sometimes I accidentally put casual vocabulary on my essay).

3. My challenges

When I tried to set up the time-management for many things (including making this essay), I tended to procrastinate, but I wanted to push that tendency away into doing something more productive or finishing my assigned works.

4. Suggestions

Same like others, more games would be nice!! :]

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1. What went well?

For the first half semester, i finally understand how to make an appropriate citation.

2. What didn't go well?

I often get stress when working on my essay because it is hard for me to find data that match and support my writing. I also want to have disscussion with Sir Eka, but at that time my exam schedule is so packed T-T

3. Challenges?

I have difficulties on elaborating ideas, connecting one sentence to another sentence with a good transition, and also it is har for me to find a good sources or reference for the essay.

4. Suggestion?

Can we have more games?? hehe

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My evaluation of the half-semester was challenging and derived new insight. I did well in selecting a good statement, providing evidence, and constructing every paragraph of my essay. However, when it was time to draft my essay, there were few enhancements to be made. For example, the style of the title makes me more aware of the minor mistakes, and I have to be more precise to elaborate on every piece of evidence with an example and citation. I think for the suggestion, it would be more explanatory to deliver to the students a simulation of the lecturer getting ideas from the journal by citing them, and the way the lecturer’s perspective creates an excellent essay.

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1. What went well?

For me, Mr. Eka's feedback helps the most. This half semester I figured out how to find resources and cite it well.

2. What didn't go well?

I think collaborative writing did not work really well for me because it's a bit hard to elaborate ideas from other people and combine it with ours. On the other hand, peer's review is quite useful.

3. My challenges

I think my sentence structure is still too basic. Sometimes I get stuck in relating the data I found with the argument that I want to state.

4. Suggestion

More practices