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Sawyer was good at expressing which dog was bitey and which one was gentle. I also liked that she included descritpive words.

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My partner has a lot of descriptive language.

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My partner has a lot of descriptive language.

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I really like how descriptive it is, and how they are really good at focusing on one moment.

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I really like how descriptive it is, and how they are really good at focusing on one moment.

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My partner ioannis did a great job on descriptive language and I got really interested in his story.

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My partner ioannis did a great job on descriptive language and I got really interested in his story.

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His story was really interesting and I really like his story so good job ioannis!!

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my partner needs to work on adding descriptive

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My partner jumped from idea to idea instead of staying focused on the main topic.

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My partner jumped from idea to idea instead of staying focused on the main topic.

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my partner said adding dialogue was good

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 It should be longer and have a little more descriptive words.

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 It should be longer and have a little more descriptive words.

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My partner had words that helped me visualize what each item looked like.

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My partner had words that helped me visualize what each item looked like.

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My partner was very descriptive and I felt like I was in her story how she tells it.

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My partner was very descriptive and I felt like I was in her story how she tells it.

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I think my personal narrative could have used more descriptive language after looking at my partners work.

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I think my personal narrative could have used more descriptive language after looking at my partners work.

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I think that he could have done just a little bit more  descriptive language but maybe some more capitalization and there could have been more detail to his story and overall it was ok

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I think that he could have done just a little bit more  descriptive language but maybe some more capitalization and there could have been more detail to his story and overall it was ok

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My personal narrative has a beginning, middle, and end (so did my partner.

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My personal narrative has a beginning, middle, and end (so did my partner.

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Sawyer helped me think of a closing.

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My partner had a lot things that were spelled wrong. 

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My partner had a lot things that were spelled wrong. 