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Having a simple model with colors will be better.

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Try to cancel the sound from the video clip next time.

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More diagrams plz

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Maybe a model to explain you experiment or theory.

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A model would help us understand what you all are saying better.

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Are there any other errors that could have effected your experiment? Such as when you poured the HCl, or when you took out the magnesium from the acid, etc.

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Maybe you should explain more about your model and how it relates to your data

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I think you should put at least one model

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The data table was clear and easy to see :)

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The video clip seems good, why don’t you finish them

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Maybe add more images

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Maybe add more images

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Nice conclusion

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Maybe you should have a small model for a short explanation of what happens within the arrangement and atom changes

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I think you should explain more about how your data proves your claim or how it connects, and maybe include a moving model. Other than that, your presentation was pretty good :)

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I like how your conclusion and your claim is very simple yet clear

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More eye contact, some of you are staring too much at your scripts

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It will be better if there is more images.

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Make more eye contact!

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I like your graph｡･ω･｡)ﾉ

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Maybe add  pictures on some of your slides so it looks better

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I like how you put a clip :)

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More eye contact please :)

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Maybe colors? Or any clip arts/images

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I think you can speak a little bit quicker

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I like how you don’t have a ton of words on your slides :)

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More colors!