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Ella should have not used so many caps and exclamation points and she ended the email with not a professional way she said peace ella the teacher would appreciate something like that.

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She needs to use a professional username.

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She needs to not use caps locks.
she should only use caps locks If she is starting a sentence or saying a name then turn caps locks off

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Ella used the letter U and stead of using the actual word YOU. She should have said YOU instead of U

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1) She used a random user name.
She can improve by not useing u as you.

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ELLA did a lot of things wrong she put some all caps on some word's. Ella also put a smiley face. She could fix this by not putting all caps and no emojis and don't say ASAP

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one of the things she did wrong was she got off topic and she even made spelling error's she can improve by saying you instead U.

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Ella used u and r instead of you and are so she could replace the us and rs with yous and ares

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Ella could have made her email shorter because there was information that she put on the email that was not necessary. And she could have been a little professional. And could have been more specific about why she was emailing her.

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1) she demanded something 2) she could nicely ask for it using please and thank you

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The writer broke many email rules but i will focus on only 1. 1) the problem: she used U instead of YOU. the writer could have used you.

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Ella wasn't on topic. In her email, she was talking about random things and not the assignment. Ella could fix this by getting to the point and not talking about weird and random things.

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Her email is too shady and weird and is sounding that she is demanding to the teacher and is adding stuff that doesn't relate to the email and no emojis.

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Ella had quite a few things wrong, but I think one of the more prominent one is her "compliment". It was fake, and it kind of turned into an insult. I believe that she could change the compliment to something true, or do something just kind of general, like "I hope you have a good day." or something like that. That compliments the teacher, and she will probably not know if it is true or not. Plus, you would want your teacher to have a good day, right?

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Demanding work from the teacher .they can say please and avoid the word ASAP

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This student could've used a real name because the teacher probably didn't know at first next time the student can put a real name so the teacher knows who it is next time.