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Make introduction better

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1. Correct Punctuation
2. Write More
3. Check Spelling

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I feel like I can explain the quotes a bit better.

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Find more interesting transition words

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1. find better quotes
2. better explanation
3. correct punctuation

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Be more descriptive in general

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1.Make my conclusion better
2. get better quotes
3.Getting better transition words.

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expiations, conations, more divers transitions

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Explain my paragarphs a little better, Conclusion needs to get done, describe more

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1.) Make a better conclusion
2.) Add more evidence to my green one
3.) Better transitions

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1 i want to write more
2. have more detail
3.finish it

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I forgot to write my rough draft

What are you doing now?

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1. Use more descriptive words when citing my evidence.

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1. Make introduction and conclusion better
2. Explain evidence better
3. Get better transition words

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I need to be more specific and make a better conclusion sentence and use better transition words

one more

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be more specific when explaining evidence.
better closing statement
add a better transition sentence.

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1. Make my conclusion better
2. add more to my evidence
3. make my transitions better

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Explanation wording
Add vocabulary words
Add to my quotes

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1. be more specific
2.  have better examples
3. explain better

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1.) Select a better suited quote for green

2.) Reword my conclusion sentence.

3.) Add an additional explanation sentence for my quote in Blue.