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- I took a look at the samples and based my answer off of it

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- I took a look at the samples and based my answer off of it

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- The rubric helped

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"In Greed We Trust" can be applied to economic, cultural and social, as well as ethical. Shumaker exemplifies the effects of greed towards the consumer economy and how it changes our culture in terms of financial gain and intentions. He also provided claims about its effect on children as well as how it can change mindsets towards a more irrational or stressed attitude.

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Economic, ethical, environmental, historical, cultural, and futuristic lenses can be applied to "In Greed We Trust."

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- allowed me to completely understand how to incorporate specific details in my writing

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I just reviewed the samples and made sure to include all parts of it.

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Belle- I made sure to utilize the vocabulary that was frequently used in the rubric. I also made sure all my responses followed the rubric guide.

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Belle- I made sure to utilize the vocabulary that was frequently used in the rubric. I also made sure all my responses followed the rubric guide.

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It was a good guide of what we should have done, and helped me understand how I could make my writing more comprehensive

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Kenn - Looking at the samples and rubric allowed me to actually pinpoint points in each question and also allowed me to narrow my responses.

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Kenn - Looking at the samples and rubric allowed me to actually pinpoint points in each question and also allowed me to narrow my responses.

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I used the guidelines to guide my writing because it was very helpful. The guidelines told me to add more description and what to do to be successful.

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The samples gave me a good idea of how long and profuse the response should have been. The rubric helped me find areas where I could improve.

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The samples and rubric let me know what elements I had to include in my answers.

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It gave me a good idea on how detailed my responses should be.
I was able to be more concise and to the point in my responses.

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Ethical, environmental, economic, historical, cultural and futuristic lenses can all be applied to "In Greed We Trust".

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We can apply the economic, social, ethical, and philosophical because he makes us really think about the world and how money is affecting us as hunans.

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To be more successful, I have to learn to write and gather my thoughts more quickly. I also need to become a bit more fluent with the requirements on the rubric.

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ethical and economic

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The samples and rubric allowed me to have a better idea of what wording, descriptions and logic to use when revising

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- economic (greedy companies; greed drives the economy)

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- economic (greedy companies; greed drives the economy)

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- historical (decrease in happiness from 1970s to 1990s)
- ethical (greed causes decrease in happiness ~> is it really worth the increase in the economy caused by greed? )
- social (public health crisis in children)
- futuristic (increasing obesity epidemic in children; how will long-term unhappiness affect personal health, productivity, etc.?)
- scientific (psychology of greed and how it affects mental/physical health)
- environmental (increase in manufacturing  ~> pollution ~> bad for the environment b/c of greenhouse gases and loss of nonrenewable resources)

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In order to be more successful with Part A, I need to expand my vocabulary and work on connecting two different thoughts together.

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The samples and rubric guide helped me get a clear understanding of what was expected in my responses.

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I think moving forward, I need to incorporate more of the vocabulary used in the rubric and be able to think quicker when I'm forming my responses.

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In order to be more successful, I need to be able to manage my time better and use direct quotes (evidence) from the text

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The samples and rubric guide helped give me insight about what the exam itself is looking for in our responses. Knowing what is acceptable and what isn't is important in formulating an answer to a question.

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To be more successful, I need to incorporate evidence because I struggle with that the most.

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I need to learn how to combine my thoughts better and how to stay relevant to the subject.

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To be more successful, I need to work on my wording and not use casual language. In addition, I need to incorporate my thoughts on the logic behind the arguments presented without including my own personal morals and ideals.

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To be more successful, I need to become less wordy when writing responses and to more closely analyze the passage so that I can describe everything that is discussed in the stimulus in my response.

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In order to be more successful in my answers, I need to be able to comprehend and analyze all aspects of an excerpt quicker. Identifying the most accurate argument and thorough lines of reasoning and evidence are essential when answering these questions, and I may need more practice.

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social, ethics, economics

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I need to write my responses with more evidence.

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Moving forward, to be more successful with Part A, I need to analyze the passage more. I rushed through the passage at first which is what caused me to make errors. I now know that I need to carefully analyze the passage.

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cultural and social, ethical, economic, historical

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How do we write a thorough answer in only 30 minutes?

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How do we write a thorough answer in only 30 minutes?

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Cultural, ethical, and economic lenses can be applied to "In Greed We Trust" through how modern day society and economics is based off greed.

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At first glance, "In Greed We Trust" can be looked at through an economic, social, and ethical lense.

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I need to be able to make a more concise answer in order to be more successful with Part A to avoid rambling.

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The samples and rubric guided my revisions by letting me compare my previous work with a sample confirmed to be correct. It helped me recognize what my potential score would be and identify what aspects of the rubric I could improve on in the future.

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Belle- To be more successful, I need to better at applying critical thinking to any text I read. I also want to improve my ability to read quickly, but this is a personal goal haha

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Belle- To be more successful, I need to better at applying critical thinking to any text I read. I also want to improve my ability to read quickly, but this is a personal goal haha

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Although you can argue that almost any lense can fit with "In Greed We Trust", I feel that the ethical lense fits the best with a passage that focuses mainly on the emotion of Greed.

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Economic, Social, and ethical

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I need to get better with adding textual evidence. I also need to learn better vocabulary.

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Belle- The article applies to economical primarily as it discusses the effects of consumer greed on mental health and the economy in general. 

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Belle- The article applies to economical primarily as it discusses the effects of consumer greed on mental health and the economy in general. 