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Task achievement – student writes an essay according to the topic;      Grammar – student writes sentences with correct word order, appropriate verb forms, prepositions                        Vocabulary – topical vocabulary is used (not less than 5 words)              Coherence and cohesion – the essay contains introduction, body (reasons, description of a job, etc.) and conclusion. Linking words are used (not less than
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Since childhood, I have dreamt of becoming a hairdresser due to it is exciting work. But now everything changed. So, today I want to become an architect for the following reasons.

First, in my opinion in the future, as now, architects will be in demand. As long as, architecture is constantly evolving because it works in constant contact with technology.

Secondly, architecture is a very fascinating job since to be an architect, you need to be very creative, industrious and to be able to draw! They also experiments and develops every day. The most interesting thing is that there are no 2 architects who will solve the problem in the same way. We can say that every architect invests something of his own in his project.

And last but not least, architects can be their own bosses. it does not matter how many people in your team has, you can work even one to create a big project. Besides, I did not work well in the team. Even if you won there are a lot of chances that you will succeed as a result of important thing is hard work, perseverance, patience, and curiosity

I believe that an architect is appropriate job for me. Many people believe that this work is very noble because architects work for the benefit of humanity. Also, I am creative, interesting, punctual, and bright.

In conclusion, I want to say, that to achieve my goal, I will try hard. Also, I need to finish art school. This will help me to better represent my ideas in the picture.

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Most likely, everyone has dreamed about their own dream job in childhood. And I am also one of them. I wanted to become an astronaut, I imagined how I would look in a spacesuit.

I wonder who is an astronaut, and what I need to be an astronaut. After a small explore, I get the answer. An astronaut is a person trained, equipped, and deployed by a human spaceflight program to serve as a commander or crew member aboard a spacecraft. Astronauts work in mission control, check out procedures and the checklists the crew in space will use, help verify the space station and vehicle software, develop procedures and tools to be used during spacewalks or robotic operations. The agency's basic requirements are a bachelor's degree in engineering, biological science, physical science, computer science, or mathematics, followed by three years of professional experience. Candidates also must pass NASA's astronaut physical examination.

In conclusion, want to say that even if it hard I will become an astronaut.

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Teenagers in their young ages have to make serious decision, which will affect their future lives. Most of them think about it everyday while others already know their dream jobs. However, since my interests can change over time, it is possible that my actual future job will be different from the idea of my current dream job. At the moment I am interested in professions in the field of psychology such as psychologist, therapist.
There are multiple reasons why I want to do this job. Firstly, I want to explore more information about psychology. I find it thrilling that with the help of knowledge about psychology I will be able to  understand people's behaviors and help them with suffering from mental problems. Therefore, my second reason is helping people. It sounds simple, but I know how hard sometimes it can be when you don't have someone who could help you. I want to encourage them to get and feel better.  Moreover,  I would like to show people that speaking up about your mental health is appropriate and valuable.
A psychologist is a person who studies particular mental states, emotional and social processes and behaviors by examining and observing. Good psychologists need to be patient and have to have a lot of endurance, so that they can listen to their clients and helping them without any fluctuations. Despite this, psychologists have to be understanding and sociable, so that clients won't feel uncomfortable around them.
To sum up I would like to say that I am going to devote a lot of effort on exploring different aspects of this job.

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My Job

I have wanted to become a doctor since I was a little girl. Nothing has changed since then. I still want to be a doctor.

Firstly, I always wanted to be helpful. Doctor is a good option. I can cure the patients disease. Doctors are very helpful for the country and not only

Secondly, being a doctor is very difficult. If you make even one mistake, the patient's life will be in danger

Last but not least, I will love this job and I will do what I love. I think this is very important .Because if you love your job , you do it well.

In conclusion, the doctor is an excellent profession. In the future I will become a reliable and good doctor. I will be useful to society and I will try to do my best

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There are lots of professions in the world, and all of them are interesting and exciting. So it’s hard to choose one. The choice of profession depends on your abilities. If you are good at natural sciences you might choose something closely connected with them.

I don't know exactly what I'd like to be yet. But since childhood, I wanted to become a doctor, namely a surgeon. I don't necessarily want to be a surgeon, the main thing is that I must be able to provide first aid and treat people from diseases. When I was little, I often went to the hospital for a medical check-up or to the optometrist. I've always liked the kindness that comes from them and their optimism.

I am an optimistic person. Because the doctor's optimism is the only thing that can relieve the patient's condition in the most desperate situation. I am determined and should not go on about the patient. Because doctor must firmly believe that treatment is necessary for the patient, or else it’s useless.

There is no more respectable and worthy cause than saving human lives. My dream is to become a doctor and help people.

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The choice of profession is one of the important steps in our life. Now I want to become a flight attendant for the following reasons.

Firstly, the flight attendant will be a demanded profession.  since people love to travel and the most appropriate option for people is an airplane .  and the flight attendant helps people on the plane.

Secondly, I enjoy working with people and I think every time you fly it is an exciting and new experience.I can work and travel at the same time and that matches my interest.

Last but not least, I want to get the experience to meet people from around the globe, get to learn about different culture, languages and just to see the world in a whole different aspect would be one of the best decisions and opportunities I ever made and had

In conclusion, with hard work and determination, I can achieve my dream. I will do my best to become a flight attendant in the future

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When I was a child I wanted to be footballer because I have been playing football since I was 6 years old. Now I want to become an engineer. Now I am interested in cars and I want to build cars and make design of cars. I should be learn a math and physics. I changed my mind about becoming a footballer because when I will be old man I will not be able to play the football. I want find the job in Japan because Japan is one of the best car manufactures. For me engineering is interesting and difficult at the same time. I loved draw the cars when I was a child and now I want to produce cars .I think for me this work is perfect

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All people have their dream job. A dream job can be very difficult, strange, or interesting. For example, I want to be a football player.

Why did I choose this job? Because footballers have very good wages and this job increases your speed. Moreover, this job improves your health and I just like football. Also, it can helps to change your lifestyle and keep a fit. In my opinion, it is the best sport.

What I should to do to become a footballer? I must be industrious, perserving and more practice. Furthemore, I must participate in different matches and show my skills. Participating in different matches can helps to achieve some cups and increase your goals!

This job is not so easy how you think. Now, I have some skills in football. I usually play football with my friends in outside and I am trying to do my best.

In conclusion, I want to say, your dream job must encourage interest in you! It is very important.

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In order to be a stewardess I should be bright and determination to make

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It seems to me that from my childhood I wanted to become a doctor.I think that the doctor is one of the best jobs in the world. After all, a doctor helps people, relieves them of pain and even saves their lives.As a child, I always wanted to become a doctor and wear a white coat.I have imagined myself many times in a white coat and who helps other people.Because doctors were like heroes for children.To become a doctor you need to be kind, strong and considerate.We must always help our patients because this is our job. It's not easy to be a doctor.Therefore, I am always good at school and very attentive. This is why I want to become a doctor.

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Choosing a profession is always a very difficult decision, as your future may depend on it. But, I thought for a long time and decided that I would become a programmer.
As a programmer, I will be able to discover a lot of interesting things in the field of technology, and I will be able to work sitting at home drinking coffee. This is more than in line with my expectations.
The programmer must be calm, patient, and stress-resistant, so as not to be ready to destroy everything in his path because of that forgotten semicolon in the end of code. And in order to make fewer such errors, the programmer must be careful. In addition, he must be very responsible, since no one will hire an irresponsible slob.
And to master all these qualities, you need to study for a long time, and get good results, which is not very easy, but I think the title of "professional and high-demand programmer" is worth it.
Although it is difficult to be a programmer, but I will have the opportunity to get a high-paying vacancy on the remote mode of work. So I continue to walk slowly towards my dream.

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My dream job

Every child or teenager wants to become someone in the future.Since childhood, I have dreamed of becoming a flight attendant. I think this job will be indemand in the future, because robots will not replace these people.

Most of all, I want to be a flight attendant because I want to fly to different countries, travel, develop my knowledge of languages, have a good salary and find friends.

Flight attendant is a specialist in the rank and file of air vehicles.Their main tasks are to control the safety of passengers, conduct emergency evacuations, take care of a comfortable flight, service and provide medical assistance if necessary.

In order to be a stewardess I should be bright and determination to make the right decisions in critical situations. I must be able to communicate with passengers, so quality as sociability is very important. Now I am learning languages, I pay special attention to English. Furthermore, in the near future I want to go to first aid courses and swimming.

By the way, I want to go to university for another specialist, because in order to be a flight attendant, you do not have to have a higher education.Definitely, I want and will work as a flight attendant. Accordingly, I will study well and achieve my goal.

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I think all the criterias are followed(Amir)

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you didn't divide the text into paragraphs, and I don't see linking words.

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Task completion and grammar completed.But there are no words from the vocabulary. And you can use more linking words 

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introduction, body (reasons, description of a job, etc.) and conclusion

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I want find the job in Japan because Japan is 

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introduction, body (reasons, description of a job, etc.) and conclusion

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When I was a child I wanted to be footballer because I have been playing football since I was 6 years old. Now I want to become an engineer. Now I am interested in cars and I want to build cars and make 

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the structure of the essay is observed. Enough words from the vocabulary

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y contains introduction, body 
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