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In my favorite(FAVOURITE)  hobbie is dance (DANCING) and I need music and a space
And I like playing skate(SKATING) I need skates and track. I like it too (TO) sing whit my dad.
Bye

TOO SHORT.
ALL SENTENCES END WITH DOT.

PAY ATTENTION WHEN YOU USE TWO VERBS TOGETHER.

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In my free time I like dancing in the Apolo with my friends and my teacher Jordi.
In the dancing I need sport clothes to be comfortable.
I need a big room to dance.
I need music and a water
but especially i need a teacher.
I dancing (DANCE) two days a week: tuesday and thursday.(ON TUESDAYS AND THURSDAYS)

OK, IT'S BETTER NOW.

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My hobby is listening to  music, it  (IS) nesessary hedpohones(HEADPHONES) ,(TO LISTEN) my favorite music, and (ALSO) a mobile or other devise .And the other hobby is go to shoping (GOING SHOPPING),  I like  go (GOING TO)  REUS   for  the clothes or the other place for shoping is Tarragona . (MONEY IS NECESSARY AND LET ME BUY) nesessary is mony  and  permit the yours fatheders  for  buy.

WELL DONE LUCIA, PAY ATTENTION AT YOUR MISTAKES.

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My favorite(FAVOURITE) sport is football ⚽️  ,
the equipment is:

knee pads

elbow pads

soccer socks

soccer shoes

short T-shirt

short pants

I'm don't' play Football in the (AT) school, I'm playing football in the street.
Before (I) playing(PLAYED) football in the(AT) school.
I love sport. my sport  favorites they (MY FAVOURITE SPORTS)are:

Tennis 🎾

Table tennis 🏓

football ⚽️

Basketball  🏀

OK, BUT PAY ATTENTION AND LOOK CAREFULLY AT YOUR MISTAKES.

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My favorite hobbie is painting and I (I)need brushes,  pencil and watercolours , clothes that  i (I) don't wear much.
TOO SHORT.

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My hobbby is playing football . For playing football  I wear a blue t-shirt , blue shorts,white long socks and red and black trainers.

I play as a goalkeeper in the park with my friends every week

OK, YOUR WORK IS BETTER NOW.

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IN MY FREE TIME - MOHAMED TAHAMMANT

I love playing fútbol in my free time.
I don't running in my free time.

EQUIPMENT?
REVIEW YOUR WRITING
TOO SHORT.

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My favourite hobbie(HOBBY) is volleyball. I have been playing since a day ago. I need comfortable clothes, an special ball, a net and at last, but no less important a kneepads.

TWO  SHORT, BUT NOT LESS IMPORTANT MISTAKES. CORRECT THEM PLEASE.
HOBBY (SINGULAR) HOBBIES (PLURAL)

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My favourite hobby is playing tennis. I play tennis in the TDB that's a tennis club near my house, I play tennis with lots of my friends and my parents.
To play tennis I need a t-shirt, shorts, trainers and a racket, you can play with a litle pice of plastic called (bibrator absorver). I think that I play tennis very good with my age.I love watching the championships like Roland Garros with my family. My favourite player and on my opinion the best player in the history is Rafael Nadal

I like playing padel too. In padel I need the same equipment that in tennis but I play with a padel and not with a racket.
I prefer playing padel with my parents and my sister.I play padel since I was four years old and now I play very good.

Riding by bicicle is not my hobby but I also  like it very much because I know lots of very pretty places, and I usually watch animals like rabbits or ships.

GOOD JOB, HERNAN!

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MY FAVORITE HOBBIE/FAVOURITE HOBBY) - judith pulido

Fristly, I'd  like to say that i love paddel(PADDLE)
very much so I go paddel classes on tuesdays and on thurdays, I do paddel(PLAY PADDLE) in apolo's gim(APOLO GYM)(IN)  Torredembarra .

There are many things that i need to practise paddel like a ball, paddel racket and paddel net.

I started to do paddle (TO PLAY PADDLE) from five years ago. I like paddle because it's funny to be with friends in the competitions,
Finally , I have to say that I love practising paddle, I think that it's a very interesting sport.

GOOD JOB , BUT THERE ARE MISTAKES. PAY ATTENTION WHEN YOU WRITE.

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In my free time (SUBJECT) practice dance(DANCING) in Anura (Torredembarra) with my friends. The clothes that we have to wear such as confortable (COMFORTABLE)clothes, mayas, wide shirt, confortable shoes and enthusiasm for dancing.

My favourite hobby is digitally paint with my ipad and digital pen, after to do the drawing, I   usually sare(SHARE)  it and the ones, like the most , i publish on my tik tok account.

Bye,bye

GOOD JOB , BUT REMEMBER THAT ALL SENTENCES NEED A SUBJECT .
ALSO, WHEN YOU USE TO VERBS TOGETHER, THE SECOND ONE ENDS WITH -ING.

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Un my  free time is  dancing

THAT IS NOT A TEXT. START AGAIN AND LOOK AT THE EXAMPLES YOU HAVE GOT ON THE FIRST SUMMARY.

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In my free time I play a game called Free Fire with my best friend. I like to spend time with him, sometimes he comes to my house, and if not I go to his house.

I'M SORRY , BUT IF THIS TEXT SHOWS ALL YOU CAN WRITE ABOUT YOUR FREE TIME... I'M VERY WORRIED.