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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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Good afternoon,

Your pictures are very nice. I hope you enjoyed doing this activity. The idea is to learn while you have fun. This is very important when learning a foreign language so find a way to motivate yourself. Reading cartoons, watching movies, making new foreign friends by using social networks and doing karaoke in English are just some examples of how you could start motivating yourself and learn English very fast.

Kind Regards,

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Good job!
Continue working on the platform... we are very close to the end and it is important you finish all the lessons!

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watch out!
Be careful with cohesion. Here the pertinent corrections:

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Pronunciation

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator and not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your writing skills.
That's the only way you can get corrections from me because I do not want to cheak a tranlators' english.

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Hi!

Good effort! Your participation in the oral task shows you know how to share personal information. It reflects knowledge about giving personal details, such as name, age, profession, likes, past and future intentions. Your grammar is good. What you really need to focus on is on pronunciation. I suggest you to practice the sounds SH,CH,P,T,K AND R FOR NOW.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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Hi!

Good! The participation in the second task is quite well written in terms of punctuation and grammar. However, there are many spelling mistakes and it is not difficult to infer that you used a translator to do the activity because there are some coherence, cohesion problems and also some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your ideas.

-bay  --------- BYE
- delicius ---- Delicious
- scary movie ------ Horror movie
- we went to visit the other family???? ---- WE USUALLY GO TO VISIT SOME RELATIVES

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task 1