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The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

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Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.

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The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

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The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

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The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

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4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.

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4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.

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the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun

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the boy stood in was it high water waiting for the fish then he see one and grabs it but the fish is not giving up that easy so the fish started to moved and the trying to keep an good grip on the all all u see and heard is the rustling and rumbling so the boy grabs an stone and whacks the the very very large fish .....THE END

BY JEOVANNI SYLVESTER

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As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon.

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Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.

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The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb

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The boy pulled a large  fish out of the river

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The woman had a terrible headache

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Sensory Details and Figurative Language
Rewrite your sentence into one or several sentences that recreates the scene more vividly. Think of word choice and use senses (e.g., smell, touch, sight, taste, sound) to show the scene—feel free to invent details within your revised sentences. Add a simile or metaphor or hyperbole, too!
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1.Hunter Singh by cole williams
1.Hunter Singh by cole williams 
The young lady who was 200 years old had a very bad headache while she walked down the road.




5.
5.
Jaxon B. and Isaac G.             The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.
2.
2. 
The teenage boy with a hat, shorts and, a t-shirt that was to small for him , pulled a large fish out of the cold and refreshing water the fish that had one eye it felt like sand paper 
owen,hunter, William
1.
1.
The middle aged lady briskly walked down the old road while encountering a searingly painful headache. Colin, Luc, and Jacob

5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin.
5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin. 
 
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4.
4.
the meadow came to life with blazing hot heat and all the animals  strongly sensed hunters #devon,caleb,dylan
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun 
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched  
garrett blake and james peterson
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
2.
2. 
The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb


2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
The young women had
 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
Example with sensory details:
Example with sensory details:
As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon. 

Example:
Example:
Ex: The old man stood in the grass and relaxed as the sun went down.
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The boy pulled a large fish out the river
The boy pulled a large fish out the river
Empty
1.Hunter Singh by cole williams
1.Hunter Singh by cole williams 
The young lady who was 200 years old had a very bad headache while she walked down the road.




5.
5.
Jaxon B. and Isaac G.             The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.
2.
2. 
The teenage boy with a hat, shorts and, a t-shirt that was to small for him , pulled a large fish out of the cold and refreshing water the fish that had one eye it felt like sand paper 
owen,hunter, William
1.
1.
The middle aged lady briskly walked down the old road while encountering a searingly painful headache. Colin, Luc, and Jacob

5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin.
5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin. 
4.
4.
the meadow came to life with blazing hot heat and all the animals  strongly sensed hunters #devon,caleb,dylan
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun 
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched  
garrett blake and james peterson
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
2.
2. 
The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb


 
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2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
The young women had
 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
Example with sensory details:
Example with sensory details:
As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon. 

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Example:
Ex: The old man stood in the grass and relaxed as the sun went down.
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The boy pulled a large fish out the river
The boy pulled a large fish out the river
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1.Hunter Singh by cole williams
1.Hunter Singh by cole williams 
The young lady who was 200 years old had a very bad headache while she walked down the road.




5.
5.
Jaxon B. and Isaac G.             The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.
2.
2. 
The teenage boy with a hat, shorts and, a t-shirt that was to small for him , pulled a large fish out of the cold and refreshing water the fish that had one eye it felt like sand paper 
owen,hunter, William
1.
1.
The middle aged lady briskly walked down the old road while encountering a searingly painful headache. Colin, Luc, and Jacob

5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin.
5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin. 
 
more_vert
4.
4.
the meadow came to life with blazing hot heat and all the animals  strongly sensed hunters #devon,caleb,dylan
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.
the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun 
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched
3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched  
garrett blake and james peterson
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.
2.
2. 
The boy was relaxing by the lake so he was fishing suddenly he caught a fish and tried to grab it but the fish kept moving. The fish was cold and slimy. It was like touching a slimy piece of ice that is how cold it was. So as soon as he got it the boys hands felt numb


2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.
The young women had
 The young women had a painful migraine that made her  head feel like it was ripping apart. She rubbed her head in pain as she walked down the cracked road to the doctor.

1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.
Example with sensory details:
Example with sensory details:
As the elderly gentleman stood, the grass caressed his feet and a smile softened his eyes. A hot puff of air brushed against his wrinkled cheek as the sky paled yellow, then crimson, and within a breath, electric indigo.
He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon. 

Example:
Example:
Ex: The old man stood in the grass and relaxed as the sun went down.
 add

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Jaxon B. and Isaac G. The hunted creature ran rapidly as his footsteps echoed through the forest on this cold scarred night. It then was running looked behind, and then glanced forward to only trip and fall on a log and saw those fateful roses which he then remembered as it's last thought to forever drift away while screaming then going silent. The hunter then came over and took over it's prey.

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The teenage boy with a hat, shorts and, a t-shirt that was to small for him , pulled a large fish out of the cold and refreshing water the fish that had one eye it felt like sand paper
owen,hunter, William

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The middle aged lady briskly walked down the old road while encountering a searingly painful headache. Colin, Luc, and Jacob

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5. 5. The hunted creature ran through the forest and screamed as the thorns cut into his skin. 

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the meadow came to life with blazing hot heat and all the animals  strongly sensed hunters #devon,caleb,dylan

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4. The meadow slowly came to life as the sun came up.

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the old meadow slowly came to life with blazing hot heat the animals came out and saw the sun

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3.The young girl stood on the burning sidewalk near the ear piercing intersection and watched  

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garrett blake and james peterson

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3. The girl stood on the corner of the busy intersection and witnessed the accident as it happened.

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2. The boy pulled a large fish out of the river.

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1. The woman had a terrible headache as she walked down the road.

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He felt his tense muscles unwind like silken folds as the sun dropped beneath the technicolor horizon.

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