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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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Good afternoon,

Your pictures are very nice. I hope you enjoyed doing this activity. The idea is to learn while you have fun. This is very important when learning a foreign language so find a way to motivate yourself. Reading cartoons, watching movies, making new foreign friends by using social networks and doing karaoke in English are just some examples of how you could start motivating yourself and learn English very fast.

Kind Regards,

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ok! Awesome
Keep working on the lessons we are close to the end of this course.

Kind regards,

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This is basically a translation. You didn`t check it at all and there are many mistakes on it. If you want to learn english do the things by your own. Here the corrections:

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many cohesion and coherence mistakes specially in paragraphs two and three because you took advantage of a translator and not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your writing skills please.

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Hi!

Thanks for the video. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, it was a bit difficult to understand because there were some grammar and cohesion mistakes. You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for now.
- You are in fifty semester? fifth semester!!! Check out numbers please!!!

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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Hi!

The participation in the second task is attractive and interesting. You included a photo, information about you, food, hobbies and activities you like to do on weekends. However, it has some grammar, spelling and cohesion mistakes. You used a translator to do the activity and there are some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your own ideas.