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Advertising is a very powerful tool.
Street corners
It appears to be not only...
it makes me feel sick
Iris: More and more ? in our daily life.
Both of you: 'hidden' not 'hide-en'
Shuang: your 'Yes, Yes' needs to sound more as though you are agreeing with Iris, rather than trying to get her to shut up!

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Dylan, be careful with your intonation, you are using rising intonation in places where it's not appropriate. It makes it sound like a question, or makes you sound uncertain. Also - check your pronunciation of 'everywhere'
Hi Ien
You say 'I think so' - but it doesn't make sense here. You need to say 'I think it's true that adverts are everywhere' or to use an initial rhetorical question:
'Is it true that adverts are everywhere? Well, I think so....'

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Yes it's true....and...
Finish the first statement:
"Yes it's true that ads are everywhere..."

I think you need to rephrase this: "Some companies treat consumers for their current profit"
It would be better as:
"There are some companies that are only concerned with immediate profits and don't treat consumers well" or
"A lot of companies seem to only focus on quick profits and don't really care about consumers"

Easy to understand, but you sound like you are reading from a written script -could be more fluent.

Peter

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be careful of 'opinion' and '21st century' - better as
'uh-PIN-ee-un' 'twenny-firs SEN-che-re'

You are repeating 'I think' too much, try to vary the way you introduce your ideas:
'in my opinion', 'what I believe is...'
'what we need to do is..'

Be careful with 'restrict' and 'restriction' (verb v noun)

Easy to understand, but you ARE too nervous!

Peter