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See all the wonderful things Mitch Pryor has made

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Or should i say a single tip

Rule No. 1
Be relaxed  and just concentrate on ur own work

Rule No,

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bring a long straw lol

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1 You don't need to write a huge 15 page essay. Keep it short and sweet so you have time to read it through at the end.
2 If you're running out of time, don't go and write stuff like "bruh, she is dead you don't need to care,etc." Rather, bundle up all the things you wrote and write them down in a simple way.
3 Lastly, remember to ask if your essay makes sense at the end with your team.

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After choosing your prompt and thinking of 4-6 strong points (in like 3 minutes), quickly check over each other's points to make sure that they are:
-LOGICAL
-STRONG
-HARD TO REBUT
-SUPPORTABLE BY EVIDENCE

And THEN, start defining terms, gathering evidence, et

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After choosing your prompt and thinking of 4-6 strong points (in like 3 minutes), quickly check over each other's points to make sure that they are:
-LOGICAL
-STRONG
-HARD TO REBUT
-SUPPORTABLE BY EVIDENCE

And THEN, start defining terms, gathering evidence, et

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If you were at today's pwaactice, we reviewed a winning essay from 2014 and spotted new and different techniques to write a more superior essay.

#1. Take a sheet/list of advanced vocabulary. In the essay, the writer used sophisticated lexicon (vocabulary). Take that into account.

#2. Use a philosophical point of view. Judges love reading your opinions and examples that support them. Write statements to reflect your opinion.

#3. The writer gave content from the WSC by taking quotes and events. USE YOUR MATERIAL!

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1. Go through your material and your teammates' and take out examples you can use for your argument.

2. Plan how you will write, what you will use to write, and how to express your opinion greatly.

3. Don't worry too much about vocabulary and grammar. That comes third, after your thesis and your points.

4. While writing your paper, picture it as talking through your pen/pencil and putting all your thoughts on the sheets. Argue with the paper!! Put a few Pwaas in there as well. You can get a few extra points...

5. With the 15 minutes of collaboration, have a read through of your and your teammates' paper. Give feedback as well as constructive comments.

6. Give yourself a pat on the back and breath a huge sigh to know it's over, for now...

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Plan your writing..Make sure your writing makes sense..

LETS GO!

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Make sure you have a outline first. Going straight into your essay won't help. Gather your evidence properly and make sure your evidence relates to your arguments. Several times, the evidence we gather actually relates to the opposing side's argument, not our side. So choose your evidence precisely and make sure you have a outline first.

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1. When you're planning, write out all your points first rather than working on only one point and running out of time
2. Use PEEL(Point, Evidence, Evaluation, Link)
3. If you're stuck, ASK YOUR TEAM MATES FOR HELP!

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Okay, first tip, don't take the Jeffrey (was it Jeffrey?) dude's advice. Don't use any "Pwaa" puns in your paper. Seriously, don't do it.

Second, don't forget to use information from the WSC website. This is a MUST, as you are given bonus points for doing that.

Third, figure out how you can use information from different subjects to back up your point. More often than not, there is always something that you can use from another subject. Plus, you are given bonus points for this.

Finally, don't use terms that you don't know, or literally just learned. It will make it more complicated to define the term and more importantly, to write how it contributes to your argument.

- Steven

(Oh yeah, greetings from Lion Dance)

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- Organize which point paragraph will be first and last.
- Though you may want some figurative language for style points, keep your explanations simple.
- Make your thesis more thorough than simply 'agree/disagree with prompt.'
-Victoria

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Don't worry too much about how formal your writing is. You're writing an argumentative essay, not a college paper
-Eric

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I  think we will need one more writing practice.  3-5 after school.  When?

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I  think we will need one more writing practice.  3-5 after school.  When?

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After choosing your prompt and thinking of 4-6 strong points (in like 3 minutes), quickly check over each other's points to make sure that they are:
-LOGICAL
-STRONG
-HARD TO REBUT
-SUPPORTABLE BY EVIDENCE

And THEN, start defining terms, gathering evidence, etc.

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I'm not good at selfie either and don't know how to delete the other pic
I learned that you should use PEEL, plan multiple points before researching, and working together with your teammates.

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Hi. I'm Hla Yin. everything is cool when you're part of team.

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PLAN. PLAN. PLAN.
Write out all your points first and THEN come up with your evidence - this will save you  A LOT of time... and this will NOT fry your brain. (Yes, we've all been there)

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memoir of a gorilla we have all come to know and love.

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I am not exactly the best selfie-taker. (April Fools)
Tips
1. Make an outline and plan your writing first.
2. Make good counter points that actually counters what the other team might say.
3. Use good and not repetetive evidence

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Keep using PEEL (Point, evidence, evaluation, link).

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Heroooo!

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Type your Collaborative Writing tips here!

All docs to help you are in the ABOUT section of Google Classroom.

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Howdy. Let's share our tips here. You can add videos, pics, just text, whatever.