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Transitions to each body paragraph

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add visual into paper

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Revise sentence structure

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Word choice

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•sentence fluency
•diction

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Cut out excess
Better word choice

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• organization
• add stronger counter argument and call to action
• fix margins

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Word choice and then do we need to have the visual in the paper?

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Revise lead in and lead outs for quotes/evidence

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change out and use better wording, use the thesaurus

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fix citations

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•fix font/size
•start works cited on new page

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Sentence fluency and overall flow of paper