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👎Could of put in more effort

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Only group that used music

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They could have played more instruments 🎸

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The lyrics rhymed

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Praise-sang loud
Raise- make your own tune

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👎 Really loud need to play instruments
👍 Artistic lyrics

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Praise: You chose a good track as the basis of your song however be aware that if you sample even 6 seconds of the music in the music industry you need to pay 50% of your royalties to the owners of the track. There 'rap' was rhythmic in places.

Raise: The task was to do you own piece which you didn't really do. It is difficult to rap as a group because of the rhythmic intricacies so you needed to split the track.

Level: 4

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God lyrics

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Praise : u had a good song
Maybe make up your own tune using piano and maybe the guritar

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P: really good beat

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Sickk

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Make guitars louder, put in lyrics

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Very good

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Should of played the guitar louder

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Praise - really good music and timing

Raise - make a song up and play the guitar louder

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REALLY  LOUD👎
But good timing👍

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Good timing and good use of instruments
Add some lyrics

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Praise:the timing was good and it had a good tune

Raise:maybe add lyrics and they could play the guitar louder 🎸

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All went well together but next time make sure everyone can be heard and add in some lyrics

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Mr Edwards

Praise: There was a good rhythmic idea which was then imitated on the keyboard creating quite a strong riff (although I would recommend a different sound than the piano). The parts combined well and there was some simple structure to the performance.

Raise: The guitars didn't feature enough in the composition - what was their role? Would the performance have been affected if they had been missing? You had a REALLY good idea but it was not developed.

Group Level: 5c

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Song and chords go well together
Could hear the singer
Make sure everyone does something

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The lyrics was quite good

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Piano was to loud

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Sing more in tune, was well composed, sing louder

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Sing more in tune, was well composed, sing louder

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Sweet treats group

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Amazing wouldn't change a thing😱

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Good cords and tim

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P- good beat
P- good singing
R- make eye contact

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Mr Edwards

Praise: Very catchy lyrics and rhythm for the lyrics. The idea of the syncopated chords on the keyboard was good and supported the lyrics well. Some structure to the song albeit a little bit too short.

Raise: Try not to laugh when performing (not really a musical raise but and important one). You need to try and extend the performances a little more than this, you had a good idea which could have been easily developed.

Group level 5a

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I like the guitar

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Very good guitar playing and singing as well, the chorus was disturbed by the loud guitar

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P: It was that good it made me want to rock out
P:Really good rhythm
R:Sing louder

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Chords and song go very well together.
Sing a bit louder

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really good rhythm sing a bit louder

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Needs to show eye contact and not look at the wall

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She played the guitar well
She could sing louder

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Really good guitar playing and singing,next time sing a little louder

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Praise:Good on the guitar 🎸

Raise:sing a bit louder

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Praise= she did it on her own
Praise= she had a good rythme

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Praise- very brave to go up by your self

Raise- be alot more louder

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Cool dude

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Praise:She played the guitar really well and her sing went well with the tune

Raise: she could maybe sing a little louder

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She's rocking out

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P= she knew the cords and good timing 🎸🎸
R=sing a bit louder

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Praise: A good rhythmic chord pattern on the guitar which was strong and stylistic. There was very clever use of call and response between the vocal and the guitar.  The piece is structured appropriately in verses and choruses. Well done.

Raise: The vocal was a little but quiet which made the words difficult to hear. Try performing with more confidence because you did a VERY good job. Well done!!

Level: 6a

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The piano and the tamberine was out of tune

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Could of been louder

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Group 1: Praise and Raise

Praise: A good strong chord progression on the keyboard. The rhythm works well in places. The vocal line fits, for the most part with chords. There is some structure to the piece in that it uses verses and choruses. The lyrics have been well thought about and fit with the mood of the song.

Raise: You need to develop more confidence in the vocal because it was too quiet. This makes it difficult for the instrumental parts to fit together. Listen carefully to each other when you perform.

Group Level:6

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P:The paino was too loud so we couldn't hear Imogen and Abbie sing
R: Timing could be better

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Planed it out well
Piano needs to be quieted

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The girls need to sing a bit louder because the piano was too loud,but good group effort

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The girls need to sing a bit louder because the piano was too loud,but good group effort

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Praise:Everyone was included in the group and you played the piano well and has a good song

Raise: the piano was too loud so I couldn't hear Abby and Imogen sing so maybe turn the piano down

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Praise:The piano was good but could improve on the timing bit more

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Praise - piano was really good and the vocals

Raise- I think they need to sing louder or use microphones

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P :They were brave enough to sing
P :There were different kinds of instruments
R :They should keep the beat on time

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We planned it out well.Worked together well.sing louder. A way we could improve is all get on and not argue. We played the chords well. Make the piano louder

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The piano is to loud so I can't hear them and jade worked that instrument 😂

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For each performance including your own you need to write two praises and a raise for the group and ONE praise and Raise for yourself.

You must put you name at the top of the post and then write at least three sentences using musical terms.

Sentence 1: One sentence to say what the group did well.
Sentence 2: Another sentence to say what the group did well.
Sentence 3: One way in which the group could improve.
Sentence 4: One sentence to say what you did well.
Sentence 5: One sentence to say what you could do better.

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Here are your performances of your songs.

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but until that day  I can't get my way I will live there way there is nothing I can say to make people change the way that live their lives

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https://padlet.com/music7/9B3Spring22017

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Running away one day I'll get my way
Once I run away I will get my way I know I can get my way

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Some how someday some way I will get away
One way one day I'll get my way  and there is nothing more
that you can say to make me change my way

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Harmbe Harmbe you were my best friend
Harmbe Harmbe you were my best friend
Harmbe harmbe I'll never miss you until the end

Me and you will be driving in the Benz
Driving past the haters, they can hate again
They think they're sick, they think that they can spit but they can't
So I'll show them ,

Actually they are haters so we can all go then
All of us driving in the sunset forget the past we all know out mindset

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Music is the key music is life
Can you hear the music playing were spinning round and round
Music is the key music is the key music is the key to life
La la la la la la

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Can you hear the music playing
On the stereo joyfull and we're singing its time to have fun
because time to stand up for our selfs and what we believe in

It's time to show the people what music really is, its time for loving , time for happiness uh oo

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You are my angel,you are my star,
You are an angel who belongs in my heart,
makes me cry with joy and harmony in peace with our souls,
You are my better half ,my best friend in sorrow and joy,
I hope to love and cherish moments with you to the very last.

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You need to write some words for your song. These cannot be words from ANY existing song.

Each verse needs 4 lines and each line needs 9 - 14 syllables.

The chorus needs 4 lines and each line needs to be 9-14 syllables.