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N0761649 - Raja Mahmoud S Abdullah MACRO+revised

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Yue

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Mohammed

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timed writing +crime(Mohammed)) with revised paragraph.docx

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Shuai Revised

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SHI Revisied

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Macro Feedback

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PollEv.com/lauramanzie070,

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Team Edinburgh
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Team Cardiff
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Team London
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Team Belfast
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Team Birmingham
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(Text 1 was Williams - p139 in your Oxford EAP book)

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Mental deficiency and delinquency extract

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Download the document.
There are three essays.
Scan quickly to find the writer's thesis statement.
Highlight in red.

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Bader shi

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HAN YUE MOHHANMD Describe the main effects of human progress on the natural environment

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Describe the main effects of human progress on the natural environment (1)

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You wrote

Also, as result of populations in most countries are rising, there is increasing pressure on limited land resources to provide food to meet this demand

Correction

Also, as result of populations in most countries rising, there is increasing pressure on limited land resources to provide food to meet this demand

You wrote

Another effect is a negative consequence on the environment such as destruction of the rainforests, due to human progress tend to involve constructing new cities and infrastructure

Correction

Another effect is a negative consequence on the environment such as destruction of the rainforests, due to human progress tending to involve constructing new cities and infrastructure

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Work with a partner.
Download the document and write the paragraph together.
Proof read for language mistakes before you upload back to Padlet .

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Describe the main effects of human progress on the natural environment

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I am really sorry, I deleted your homework by mistake.
I did read it first though and it was fine but please note difference in spelling between RESULT and RUSTLE!!!!

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SHI

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https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1tU9Hjd82zbJUcAOt-T1iF0Pb4VAq7D8yK1lpmO5_nEo/edit

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Shuai cause-effect

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ping cause and effect

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Cause& Effect

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Mohammed - cause & effect homework

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Here is the cause and effect diagram we created
http://bit.ly/2qDr91X
Use it to help you complete the homework in the Word doc.
Upload your completed document to the Padlet before midnigt on Monday. Thanks.

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•With the development of the Internet, online shopping, network transfer and other forms  have entered people's lives, which makes people's lives more convenient. But , it also makes cybercrime closer to people's lives

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Check for AWL words
http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/oxford_3000_profiler

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Click on the link to access your partner's essay.

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Text 2 Cyber Crime- A New Breed of Criminal

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Download the template and use it to plan your essay.

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The criteria of creation could be involved solution and opportunities identification also, it might be involved the improvement of products or currently method.

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entrepreneurs understand the importance of innovation , the often view the risk and the high investment that the development of innovative products or service require as being out of  proportion to the potential profit

understanding the highly risk and  highly investment in development of innovative products or service lead to entrepreneurs used out of  proportion to the potential profit

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An entrepreneur is always inventors and  develops its products to raise the percentage of profits . One who assumes risk of a business or enterprise and organizes.

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Mohammed

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creativity includes the identification of opportunities and solutions and the adjustment or refinement of existing procedures or products.

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Creative can not only identify opportunities and solutions,but  also can involve the adjustment or refinement.

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Improvement or polishing of process and result able relavent with suitable analysis,explication  and resourceful.

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Creativity can identify opportunities and solutions, and may involve adjustments or improvements to existing programs and products.

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Although the importance of innovation is valued by entrepreneurs, but they also think view the risk and the high investment to development of innovative products or services does not match the potential profits.

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Although it is important for entrepreneurs understand the innovation,  and the development of innovative  products or services  required  as being out of proportion to the potential profit is the risk and high investment.

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innovation is the identification of opportunities and solutions,creativity  can also involve the refinement of existing procedures or products.

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Please write ONE paraphrase onto the Padlet below before midnight tonight.
You can choose the paraphrase you wrote in Task 5.2 or 5.3. Your choice. We will look at them in class tomorrow

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innovation can defined as an ability to produce something has that special character .

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This is on NOW as well

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By Marketing expert can segment age to 4 group that 1.)teen and millennials is individuals born between 1980 and 1994 ; also known as Generation Y. 2.)Generation X is individuals born between 1965 and 1979. 3.)Baby boomers is individuals born between 1946 and 1964. And 4.)Seniors is individuals over 65 year old.[L1]

[L1]Too much detail here - summarise

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The people who have different characteristics that make them become natural leaders.However, critics of trait theory believe that height and fluency can impact leadership ability.

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the trait theory means born leader and characteristics which intelligence,self-confidence,sociability.however,trait theory can be obtain affect leadership.

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“she’s a born leader” has their unique characteristics that intelligence, self-confidence, determination, integrity and sociability. Especially, is speech. However, experiences can not affect leadership.

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This theory describes some individuals were born talented naturally in certain skills and abilities. Critics argue that theory can be acquired and learned.

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this theory debated about some individuals were born with the qualities make them natural leaders. however, some critics do not believe that theory, because they believe that life experience helps in the industry leadership

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there are no easy answers to this question " Is leader born with the natural characteristics?" Attributes of a successful leader has to be smart , sociability etc.Multitasking and taking responsibility influence leadership.

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Post here before Thursday's class

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Trait theory present which person has a style of leadership predisposed intelligence,self-confidence,determination, integrity, sociability,interesting,height and fluency in speech.But,critics believe that life experience come to nothing with leadership.

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Critics of trait theory think there is a person who he is born leader,cause of life experiences  can improve leadership.

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This style of leadership is trait theory, which argues some individuals are born with the features and following characteristics about intelligence, self-confidence,determination,integrity and sociability.

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A born leader is argues that some individuals are born with the characteristics that make them natural leaders.Critics of trait theory belive that it fails to take into account the life experiences that can affect leadership.

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A person who bron with intelligence,  self-confidence,determination,integrity and sociability.And life experience that can afect leadership

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Laissez  is style of leadership that gives employees considerable freedom. The most advantage is successful employees can do their jobs which are motivated.

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Laissez-faire leaders give employees freedom and individual in their work . the employees make own decision , goals and resolve all their  problems by themselves.

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Laissez -faire =leave alone--employee have freedom and can set their set their  own goals in their work--make employee work successfully.

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This style of leadership is laissez-faire,which means'leave alone'. the boss gives  staffs freedom in they work.Employees are motivated by themselves to set own goals, make decisions,and resolve problems as they see fit.