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I like the movement of your collage. I think you had lots of color, but they are supposed to be watery colors. Overall, good job!

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I can tell your planned out your drawing. The only things you need to do is shade.

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I should limit myself to two hues. But besides that I have alot of design and overlapping in my drawing.

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I know Icould have did my lines better and I plan on adding color tomrow ,

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You have many shapes overlapping

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I believe that my strength's are Rhythm and Design. And I feel that one of my weakness's are composition and depth

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I don't have enough repetition

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i like the overlap and the artwork just need color

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I dont think thsi was planned out . It looks like you just threw objects on a paper

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I like the designs in your drawing, they really stand out in your drawing. You should limit your drawing to 2 hues and add shading

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I think your design is well thought out. You lack depth in your collage. Overall, great job!

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Artwork is not finished. Creativity is nice, but overall neatness could be used. More critique will be used when done

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Only 2 hues, balanced. Overlaps nicely. Contrast. Good visual weight. Rhythm.

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I thought you could have choose more than 2 objects to repeat . I think you need some color and newspapaer and it will look great

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Colors done and newspaper is done you should finish the hair. Other then that pretty good

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Good repetition and background.

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Planning and designing was good. You have a color scheme

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like your artwork just need color

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Very little design and planning. No balanced. I like the color but it needs another hue.

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like the designs and the color just need to be finished.

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Need more repetition and color and newspaper.

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I think you need to add color . Choose to hues and lighten . darker en and mix them . I also think you needed use proportions more .

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Looks great. Very good visuals

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Drawing is very beautiful and exceeds expectations on most criteria but has more than two hues

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Very nice and thought out!
The colors really balance out. I love the artwork

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Finish outlining and try and fill in some more of the white space. Add newspaper and color.

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Limit yourself to two hues.

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Your planning and design was good many original drawing was traced.

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No coloring and no newspaper but project looks descent.

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Like the designs and the color of the art. Just needs more paint.

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I like how creative your art was you showed that you love football. Now you need to add newspaper and color.

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Add some color and some more details

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Need more repetition and color.

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I like the design so far, very symetrical. I like how the newspaper overlaps the faces. Needs color.

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The only thing is repetition, the shape in your drawing aren't repeated but everything else is good.

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I really like the balance and repetition. It could've used at least 1 different artwork. But Overall it is a very good artwork.

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the composition  is awesome  but no color or newspaper  is incorporated

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Design is beautiful but the only think that's missing is depth not showing in it

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No color and newspaper not full complete.

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I like the visual balance and the planning and design of the artwork. Just need more paint.

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Need more color More repetition

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Too many hues. Love all the details, I like the highlights instead of shadows.

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Add some color. Try and stick with only a couple of things instead of multiple items.

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This drawing is very pretty and unique. More depth can be applied.

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I think your exceed in the Planning & Design and Color. The pattern is a lot, but I think your face stands out the most. Repetition is one of your weaknesses. Overall, I like the collage. Great job!

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Art work is really CREATIVE. Remember... Less is more. Colors are balanced out and nicely done.

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I think you need to work on movement because you don't have anything overlapping.

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Your whole paper look amazing and nice love the roses. Now you just need to add more paint and newspaper and shade. Other than that you are doing a great job.

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There's not enough depth in the artwork leaving too much empty space and only having one color on it.

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More than 2 Hues, Balance and repition is good. Guides the viewers eye.

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I like your drawing. The artwork could use more repetition and could've took up more space.

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I like the way you did your drawing, it's different from others. The only thing is there isn't much overlapping and i realize you didn't finish so, color and shading.

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Exceeds expectations on alot of the criteria but needs depth to be applied and there are a few empty spaces.

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You could have used repetition more . I don think you planned this out . Overall your colors look nice

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Art work is in order and neat. Color is balanced out through out the whole picture.

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You have no newpaper or coloring but  the composition  is nice.

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I really like you Rhythm in your artwork and design. It is a really good looking piece of artwork. Great Job.

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Too many empty spaces not giving the person to really look at what's on it. But the design is good

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I like how your art has unique pictures and shapes. All you need to do is add more colors and more shade and some news paper.

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I like your background of leaves. Add some depth.

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Design is great. It needs more depth.

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I like the planning and designs of this artwork. I don't see anything wrong with it.

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The artwork is good. Could use more repetition in artwork and could've took you time drawing lines.

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Art Work is very beautiful and neat. The patterns are in order as far as balance and the weight. Very creative!

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I like the creation you made looks very colorful and neat. All you need to do now is add more shade to you painting.

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Your shapes are arranged in way that catches a viewers attention. You haven't added any color yet so I think you should work on adding color.

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Your work is very pretty and unique but needs one more color applied to it.

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too many colors mixed together making the artwork look dark and dull. But planning and design is great giving the person to really look at whats there

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Your collage looks very nice! I think your strongest category is Visual Balance. The hearts are balanced out well across the paper. Your weakness would be Depth. I see some shading in your collage, but it looks sketchy. Overall, great job!

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osos your is turning out good but you need more overlap

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Could use more depth. The design looks good.

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I like the design of your work and the visual balance of the work.

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Did not complete coloring and newspaper. But I love the background of roses.

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Your planning and design was good. Repetition was well repeated just add more newspaper.

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I like the art that you made looks very creative and neat. All you need to add is more color and this would be a great piece of art.

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The design is okay. Add more newspaper and color.

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Overall yours look nice . You were only suppose to use 4 hues though (color ). You should also add some  more newspaper too .

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Overall you artwork looks nice. But you could work on making your paint look smoother instead of making it look liked you rushed through it.

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Nice drawing . Like how you use the newspaper and your colors

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I I like the planning and designing on the the paper with the design. The Repetition is good as well.

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There may be a few uneven areas, but overall the artwork is very creative and in order. I understand you are not finished and I see where you are going. Very great work!

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Your drawing is very unique! You should limit your drawing to 2 main colors and the visual weight is good but most of it seems to be at the top left corner.

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Very pretty design exceeds expectations on most criteria. But can't wait for depth and color to be applied.

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Too many colors but it goes together well. Overlapping is good.

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The design is nice and clear but the only thing missing is depth around the edges