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1) Adding transition words and phrases to show time passing throughout my writing
2) Adding details about the setting in my lead.

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1)Check for spelling  corrections done
2)varied my sentences done
3)having a good ending done

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1. Add more transitions √

2. Editing

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1. Add more clues about my problem in my story in the beginning (done)
2. Adding more clues about the setting of my story in the beginning of my writing (done)
3. Time to edit!

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1. transition
2. Right down a perfect ending that goas with my story
3.check for spelling/corrections
4.Use paragraphs to organise my story
5. ellaboracion on characters
6. Actions!!!!!

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1)Put more clues to what will become a problem in the beginning. DONE
2)Show why characters do things. DONE!!!!!
3)

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1.working on my grammar
2.working on my spelling
3.add clues to what will be a problem for the main character
4.working on transition

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1)check spelling

2)organisation

3)elaboration

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1)Transition words
2)Why did characters do things
3)add clues to what the characters problem would be in the future of the story

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1.I ned to work on lead.
2.I need to work on punctuation.

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1. work on the bigining and show what is happening
2. work on the ending and show the reader it is the end.

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1 Slow down the heart the story and ad more detail. 2 Tell where it is happening. 3 check to make sure that my verbs are present ,past ,and future tense. 4 check frequently of the confused words. 5Make sure of punctuation commas too.

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1)organization
2)transition
3)craft

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1.I need transition words.

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1] I NEED TO ADD MORE OVERALL.

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1)create the pace and tone.
2)show characters what they did
3)spelling

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1)Create the pace of my story.
2)Slow down the heart of my story.

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I might need to work on some spelling. (I mean I need to do a lot of spelling 🙄)

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1)I need to add more diolage
2) I need to talk more about the others character.
3)I also need to work on paragraph

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1)I think i should make more powerful ending and give a sense of closure .
2) And i should really should work on spelling and grammar like commas and punctuation .

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1. I want to show what the story is about (friendship) by adding more action.
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1) I could use more transitions like putting phrases
2) I need to put craft like slowing down the heart of my story

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1) i need to work on paragraphs because i have none in my story :0

2) i need to try and work in overall because my story is not that good of a important moment.    :(  but i like my story 👍😐

3)I REALLY need to add elaboration
:D

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1.I need to explain my setting more
2.I need and use different paragraphs in different spots.

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1) I will work on using commas to set off the introductory parts of sentences.

2)I will work on showing where i am in my beginning

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1- I need to put more transitions words like meanwhile or at the time.
2- I could work on my flashback and flash-forward by using transitions word like early that morning or three hours later
3- I could add more paragraphs.

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1)Work on my ending.
2)Edit.

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1. I need to make more transitions in my story so it can flow, and people know the time of when the story is taking place.
2. I need to add paragraphs to my writing when a new person is
talking (dialogue).

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1) Try to be more specific in WHEN the problem started, since I don't mention it in the story, so I should add a flashback.
2) I want to slow down in the MOST important scenes of the story.
3) I need to make the other readers PICTURE my story.

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1)To make my lead closer to the main moment.
2)To show not tell to make my problem so the reader can feel what I feel.
3)Adding how I can accomplished to not to be afraid of roller coasters.
4) Add dialogue to make people understand what everyone is doing.

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1. My first goal is to write more than 3 pages .

2. My second goal is to make this my best work.