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i needed to fix some grammar and add a bit more thing to it to make it a little bit better

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I need to improve my spelling and grammar and elaborate more on paragraphs.

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Srsly god? More like devils

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I need to come early next time and be ready for the cat. i needed to work on my structuring the most out of all the things.

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I think i did the Cat very well and think it was the best Cat i ever done.

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I got 88% with 21 out of 24. I need to work on my conclusion and my sentence structure.

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I think that I got a good score. I know why I got my scire and I like my score. I should have written more sentences because it wasnt that long, but other then that its pretty good.

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Things i need to improve on in my CAT are my grammar. punctuation and TEEL in general.

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I did good in my essay cat with a score of 23/24 (96%) just need to learn how to spell psychological

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I am very pleased with my result. I just need to improve with my grammar and punctuation and the spelling of my words. If I did not make any mistakes I would have gotten perfect.

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In my TEEL CAT I need to improve on my explination and linking things back to the question and relating it to Ponyboy.

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I think that I should improve on writing my conclusion

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My conclusion needed to have a bit more key points and more reasons of how conflict is displayed in Ponyboy's life.
My grammar was poor due to having to rush it to finish it off. Other than that, every thing else was perfect.

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I need to improve on my grammar and punctuation in the text.

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In my CAT I need to improve on, keeping my paragraphs shorter and making sure I use my time checking grammatical errors.

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I think that I need to improve my grammer, and work on how I structure my conclusion. Because I felt that I could have structured it better. But overall I am happy with my score.

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I needed to improve my grammar and that's pretty much all i think.

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I needed to improve on my spelling and grammar. I am happy of the score that i got.

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I am very happy with my score, and if any improvement is needed than it would be to re-read and correct spelling and grammar mistakes.

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I need to improve on my spelling and reading the question better, and i need to work on the paragraphs to have a better structure of TEEL.

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I need to improve on my spelling and reading the question

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I needed to improve mainly on my grammer and sentence structure and focus on the TEEL structure.

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I believe that I need to improve on my spelling and read the questions more carefully and add them in my writing, i also need to work on how my writing flows.

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I need to improve my structure of writing a bit more and i needed to improve my spelling

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I needed to write more paragraphs, I have also noticed that i could improve my vocabulary, punctuation, and spelling.

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I needed to improve my variation in sentence structure and to also shorten my paragraphs.

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I need to relate the topic in my sentences and to provide more examples to prove my point.

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I believe that I need to improve on the ideas that I place in the different paragraphs so it will flow better and follow the TEEL structure better.

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I need to improve my spelling and punctuation. I also need to improve on my skills to include the key point. So due to the score i receved I un

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I really need to improve my grammar and spelling to be able to make this essay much better, since I got a low score on grammar/spelling.

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I need to improve in my grammar and spelling and i need to work on writing more paragraphs.

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I understand why I got the score that I did for my CAT, and I need to improve on completly understanding the question/task provided. I also feel like I needed to improve on my spellin

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I feel like some of the words weren't in the right place, and probably the worst part in my CAT was my sentence structure. Overall I think I did pretty well considering my score.

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I needed to inprove my sentence structure also my correct grammar. I also needed to improve my conclusion and give more reasons to support my story.