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I liked how you used the word

early. You have to make some

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what word

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I like how you wrote a long sentence.

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I liked it when you told the reader why we had to be early,

I think you need to tell the reader why going on stage was exciting.

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i like the way that you did a

long story.

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I think you need to work on why you were excited.

I do like your sentence.

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i liked how you used exciting.

you need to make your sentense longer.

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I like how you used the word performed.

you could of said why it was exciting.

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I like your ending.

I think that you need to work on

your sentense.

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I like how you used excited and you have put your writing in order.