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Make sure you have a lot of reflecting statements

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Make sure you have reflected on showing different qualities

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Ensure that the article is engaging for readers

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Stay in past tense throughout article.
May change to present tense on reflecting statement.

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Make sure your focus characteristics are clearly identified and are reflected upon throughout

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Make sure your focus characteristics are clearly identified and are reflected upon throughout

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Structure is chronological and flows nicely.

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Work on punctuation to integrate quotes. 

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Work on punctuation to integrate quotes. 

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Be consistent with your viewpoint throughout the article

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Be consistent with your viewpoint throughout the article

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You're not analysing the text; you are creating your own construction of the person of interest

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Expand on existing building blocks

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Reword sentences to make sense

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Revise use of commas and other punctuation

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Link back to the representation of your character effectively

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Story should be presented in an order that accurately shows the invitation you wish to present.

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Be clear on what stage of the persons life you are reflecting on. 

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Be clear on what stage of the persons life you are reflecting on. 

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Revise throughout the use of commons, full stops, spelling and grammar

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Make it evident what reading you are making of the subject.

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more reflection needed on what the subjects achievements say about them as a person

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If you have any material in your draft which is matching in Turnitin, it MUST be referenced (or it will be considered plagiarism).

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If you have any material in your draft which is matching in Turnitin, it MUST be referenced (or it will be considered plagiarism).